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I loved the book In the beginning it was bit taxing to read, sentence and words mispelled, and a bit of inconsistent I feel. But the more I read the more I loved it, it got better and better. I am glad I didn't drop this book, sadly the ending is a bit rushed, the author probably either ran out of ideas or burned his/herself out. All in all would have loved seeing more interaction with some of the characters but it was a great read, a rare find. It isn't a harem and I'm glad for that. But this is one of the few books I wouldn't mind having a heram in it as all the girls are so well done and have great personalities and don't just fall for the main character.
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At first I didn't like the story The Mc feels like just a copy of James potter but smarter and more powerful . At first it didn't feel like the character is well made. But he started to grow in me. Ps: still hate the fact that this supposed genius didn't think transfiguration could be used in combat
Estou amando a fanfic, os personagens tem um desenvolvimento muito bom, a história fala sobre a vida deles e torna tudo real de certa forma, isso da vida e personalidade aos personagens. Fazia muito tempo que estava procurando uma fanfic de James Potter e finalmente encontrei e estou feliz que seja maravilhosa.🥰🇧🇷🇧🇷
Seek bronze, and find gold... I don’t have much to say, but do not give up if the character seems irritating, I was going to leave it, but I’m glad I didn’t, since there is a good development of the characters, especially the protagonist. The work is also finished!!!! ^_^
It had a promising start; however, when the protagonist met Sirius Black, his personality changed abruptly, beginning to act exactly like canonical James Potter. There was no gradual transition; in the very chapter and moment of their meeting, the protagonist's dialogues feel as if they were written by different authors, so stark is the contrast. After that, the story seems to resemble the one of canonical James Potter, who, even though he knows Voldemort will kill him in ten years, does not show much concern about his fate.
4.0 not my cup of tea after 100 chapters. The premise would have been great if the MC knew everything about HP, not this lackluster MC who just read the beginning of the HP and stopped there. The pacing is okay, there was some little bit of misinformation in some chapters as well as incorrect names, not much but still made me lose interest a bit. I tried but this MC is fully griffindor through and through, 2/4 brain 2/4 muscle brain
love the story but the time skip to the ending felt extremely rushed, but good on ya for the happy ending
A week ago I started reading your Weednesday fanfic and I loved it, so I started reading this one and I can say that it is your type of writing that made the stories interesting. Any recommendations for reading?
I've been following this story since its creation. It was an interesting idea. There are so many stories about reincarnation in Harry Potter. I found a story that broke away from that pattern. This story has someone who was born into one of the most powerful and influential families in our world, died, and was reborn in the body of James Potter (Harry Potter's father). At first, I was very excited because this was definitely a story with great potential to surpass all the stories in the Harry Potter universe. From the beginning to chapter 200, it didn't disappoint for a single day. Every day I was anxious, counting down the hours until the next chapter. I confess that I loved this story. Its idea, characters, and plot were definitely the best I've ever read. But unfortunately, it ended this way. I don't know if the author was in a hurry to finish it so he could focus on his other stories. But from the beginning, I believed in the enormous potential of this story. Unfortunately, it ended and the author left out so many events that could have made James Potter's story even more interesting. Like the grieving process over Peter's death, or how the conflicts between Gwen's family, James and his friends enter their fifth, sixth and seventh years at Hogwarts, and how the world reacts to Gwen and James' relationship, or with some political events with the Ministry and how James gathers allies to fight the Death Eaters, or how James helps Severus become the Lord Prince, and the interactions with Narcissa, Bellatrix and the Black family, and also the future of James and Gwen's children. So many events that the author could have put in the story, but unfortunately the story ended. But I really believe in the potential of the author and his stories. I hope that James Potter's story has a continuation, at least telling us about James and Gwen's wedding.
The ending felt rushed, it had more to do, but what more, it is well written and the characters feel alive, which is why I am satisfied. Strars 5/5, 5/5, 4/5 4/5 5/5
Very good, I saw your note in the last chapter, I liked the first year, I think it was essential for me to get attached to the characters, I also liked how you used Peter, I thought he was going to betray in the end but he died to give it some weight, I like it Besides, it's a shame, I wish the story had lasted longer
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Faire une bonne histoire c'est déjà quelque chose d'exceptionnel, me faire une bonne histoire sur la durée ! Ça par contre c'est grandiose j'ai lu les 204 chapitres et je suis toujours hypé. J'ai hâte de voir la fin de cette histoire qui s'approche à grands pas puisqu'il est maintenant adulte. Je vais essayer d'en parler sans spoiler mais tous les personnages réincarnés ont généralement des capacités offertes par dieu là nous avons quelqu'un qui s'est construit lui-même certes il a un grand talent mais c'est avant tout d'énormes efforts qu'il a fait et même si au final il a finalement obtenu des capacités et des objets améliorés ils nous a pas eu tout cuit dans la bouche à sa naissance. En cela encore cette histoire est fabuleuse je la recommanderai à tout le monde qu'il soit fan de sorcellerie de personnage réincarné ou pas, tout le monde devrait voir cette histoire... Ah et je ne pouvais pas finir sans mettre une petite touche de sel, à une époque où des soi-disant hauteur utilisent l'intelligence artificielle pour écrire des histoires à leur place on peut que ressouler la beauté de l'oeuvre que nous avons ici écris 100 % par l'homme et avec tant de talent
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I love it, great character development simply spectacular!!!!. .............................................................................
I like the story, the fact that it has a certain degree of equality with the original, and also that the main character is powerful but not to the point of being simply too bored for his age is a nice detail, for a moment I didn't like that his personality was too close to that of the original James Potter but that changed since the protagonist reflects on his actions and focuses, I like that he's not like the typical one who has the maximum grade in all the subjects and he really isn't interested or gets bored with some, and he continues to behave like a child instead of an adult. Note to the author: keep up the great work and don't believe the hate comments
it started good and interesting, but then it took a left turn. went from an mc who controlled himself and was a genius wanted to get really strong to beat voldemort, then he gets to hogwarts and can't seem to control himself or his emotions never went to the library to learn anything and pretty much seems almost exactly like harry potter but just different names. Started pretty good but ended up being a disappointment
at first, I looked at this story with contempt, the story of some genus that has reincarnated as James Potter, but surprisingly the story is engaging, and fun and there is always something to look up to in it. so with all of that said let's go to the cons and why I'm giving it this review. the Mc was/is genus but the way that portrayed in the story is like some lazy guy spending 2 hours on work and because he is genus he can learn something that someone spends a day so he would spend his other time on other things like lazing around while he knows that a war is coming and he is going to be killed in it. while that said in a later chapter ( in his second year) he fixes this behavior and spends all of his time on training so you can say this is a training and character development arc for him. all in all, strongly recommend it.
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firstly sorry if the wording is wrong or whatever, but I agree with some of the comments as fanfiction which in fact is always AU there is not much difference at the character level and almost exactly the same as the original character. This is surprising considering he is a reincarnation even though he didn't read 'Harry Potter' thoroughly but his previous personality definitely stuck and it disappeared in later stages I understand it can be called character development but why does it feel like he doesn't get better but instead follows Conan himself, those of you who read the original book will know how he behaves James Potter, honestly I don't like him especially the prank session with snap, it wasn't a prank or a joke but the insults, oppression, bullying that I see, I hope he's not like that because it destroys all his stories. Thank You
Very fun to read, has some error with wording but otherwise pretty good. It has some parts thst don’t necessarily feel like they make sense for the mc, but st the same time if you ignore the incosistency it feels good to see the mc get what he always wanted 🤷🤷♂️
beautiful story, both the characters seem real while they interact with each other, not much is known about the time of the marauders that is why the story that our author creates here is even better, thank you author for this gem👌
One of the best fanfics so far, it is a fresh perspective on the world of Harry Potter, I really liked the references to the game and in general the plot is progressing well, it is just entering its second year and the adventures remain interesting , I congratulate you very much and I hope you continue writing, don't drop it!
Honestly the start was great but since meeting with Sirius the character changed entirely. Doesn't even feel like it's a new story but rather the Golden Trio adventures with additional friends. Kinda disappointed with how the character just nosedived from being a cool calculated person to a absolute bullheaded guy. Just because he is Gryffindor doesn't mean he has to portrayed that way.
Guys can u suggest me anymore fanfics like this it's very unique............................................................................
I loved the book In the beginning it was bit taxing to read, sentence and words mispelled, and a bit of inconsistent I feel. But the more I read the more I loved it, it got better and better. I am glad I didn't drop this book, sadly the ending is a bit rushed, the author probably either ran out of ideas or burned his/herself out. All in all would have loved seeing more interaction with some of the characters but it was a great read, a rare find. It isn't a harem and I'm glad for that. But this is one of the few books I wouldn't mind having a heram in it as all the girls are so well done and have great personalities and don't just fall for the main character.
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At first I didn't like the story The Mc feels like just a copy of James potter but smarter and more powerful . At first it didn't feel like the character is well made. But he started to grow in me. Ps: still hate the fact that this supposed genius didn't think transfiguration could be used in combat
Estou amando a fanfic, os personagens tem um desenvolvimento muito bom, a história fala sobre a vida deles e torna tudo real de certa forma, isso da vida e personalidade aos personagens. Fazia muito tempo que estava procurando uma fanfic de James Potter e finalmente encontrei e estou feliz que seja maravilhosa.🥰🇧🇷🇧🇷
Seek bronze, and find gold... I don’t have much to say, but do not give up if the character seems irritating, I was going to leave it, but I’m glad I didn’t, since there is a good development of the characters, especially the protagonist. The work is also finished!!!! ^_^
It had a promising start; however, when the protagonist met Sirius Black, his personality changed abruptly, beginning to act exactly like canonical James Potter. There was no gradual transition; in the very chapter and moment of their meeting, the protagonist's dialogues feel as if they were written by different authors, so stark is the contrast. After that, the story seems to resemble the one of canonical James Potter, who, even though he knows Voldemort will kill him in ten years, does not show much concern about his fate.
4.0 not my cup of tea after 100 chapters. The premise would have been great if the MC knew everything about HP, not this lackluster MC who just read the beginning of the HP and stopped there. The pacing is okay, there was some little bit of misinformation in some chapters as well as incorrect names, not much but still made me lose interest a bit. I tried but this MC is fully griffindor through and through, 2/4 brain 2/4 muscle brain
love the story but the time skip to the ending felt extremely rushed, but good on ya for the happy ending
A week ago I started reading your Weednesday fanfic and I loved it, so I started reading this one and I can say that it is your type of writing that made the stories interesting. Any recommendations for reading?
I've been following this story since its creation. It was an interesting idea. There are so many stories about reincarnation in Harry Potter. I found a story that broke away from that pattern. This story has someone who was born into one of the most powerful and influential families in our world, died, and was reborn in the body of James Potter (Harry Potter's father). At first, I was very excited because this was definitely a story with great potential to surpass all the stories in the Harry Potter universe. From the beginning to chapter 200, it didn't disappoint for a single day. Every day I was anxious, counting down the hours until the next chapter. I confess that I loved this story. Its idea, characters, and plot were definitely the best I've ever read. But unfortunately, it ended this way. I don't know if the author was in a hurry to finish it so he could focus on his other stories. But from the beginning, I believed in the enormous potential of this story. Unfortunately, it ended and the author left out so many events that could have made James Potter's story even more interesting. Like the grieving process over Peter's death, or how the conflicts between Gwen's family, James and his friends enter their fifth, sixth and seventh years at Hogwarts, and how the world reacts to Gwen and James' relationship, or with some political events with the Ministry and how James gathers allies to fight the Death Eaters, or how James helps Severus become the Lord Prince, and the interactions with Narcissa, Bellatrix and the Black family, and also the future of James and Gwen's children. So many events that the author could have put in the story, but unfortunately the story ended. But I really believe in the potential of the author and his stories. I hope that James Potter's story has a continuation, at least telling us about James and Gwen's wedding.
The ending felt rushed, it had more to do, but what more, it is well written and the characters feel alive, which is why I am satisfied. Strars 5/5, 5/5, 4/5 4/5 5/5
Very good, I saw your note in the last chapter, I liked the first year, I think it was essential for me to get attached to the characters, I also liked how you used Peter, I thought he was going to betray in the end but he died to give it some weight, I like it Besides, it's a shame, I wish the story had lasted longer
Revelar spoiler Faire une bonne histoire c'est déjà quelque chose d'exceptionnel, me faire une bonne histoire sur la durée ! Ça par contre c'est grandiose j'ai lu les 204 chapitres et je suis toujours hypé. J'ai hâte de voir la fin de cette histoire qui s'approche à grands pas puisqu'il est maintenant adulte. Je vais essayer d'en parler sans spoiler mais tous les personnages réincarnés ont généralement des capacités offertes par dieu là nous avons quelqu'un qui s'est construit lui-même certes il a un grand talent mais c'est avant tout d'énormes efforts qu'il a fait et même si au final il a finalement obtenu des capacités et des objets améliorés ils nous a pas eu tout cuit dans la bouche à sa naissance. En cela encore cette histoire est fabuleuse je la recommanderai à tout le monde qu'il soit fan de sorcellerie de personnage réincarné ou pas, tout le monde devrait voir cette histoire... Ah et je ne pouvais pas finir sans mettre une petite touche de sel, à une époque où des soi-disant hauteur utilisent l'intelligence artificielle pour écrire des histoires à leur place on peut que ressouler la beauté de l'oeuvre que nous avons ici écris 100 % par l'homme et avec tant de talent
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I love it, great character development simply spectacular!!!!. .............................................................................
I like the story, the fact that it has a certain degree of equality with the original, and also that the main character is powerful but not to the point of being simply too bored for his age is a nice detail, for a moment I didn't like that his personality was too close to that of the original James Potter but that changed since the protagonist reflects on his actions and focuses, I like that he's not like the typical one who has the maximum grade in all the subjects and he really isn't interested or gets bored with some, and he continues to behave like a child instead of an adult. Note to the author: keep up the great work and don't believe the hate comments
it started good and interesting, but then it took a left turn. went from an mc who controlled himself and was a genius wanted to get really strong to beat voldemort, then he gets to hogwarts and can't seem to control himself or his emotions never went to the library to learn anything and pretty much seems almost exactly like harry potter but just different names. Started pretty good but ended up being a disappointment
at first, I looked at this story with contempt, the story of some genus that has reincarnated as James Potter, but surprisingly the story is engaging, and fun and there is always something to look up to in it. so with all of that said let's go to the cons and why I'm giving it this review. the Mc was/is genus but the way that portrayed in the story is like some lazy guy spending 2 hours on work and because he is genus he can learn something that someone spends a day so he would spend his other time on other things like lazing around while he knows that a war is coming and he is going to be killed in it. while that said in a later chapter ( in his second year) he fixes this behavior and spends all of his time on training so you can say this is a training and character development arc for him. all in all, strongly recommend it.
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firstly sorry if the wording is wrong or whatever, but I agree with some of the comments as fanfiction which in fact is always AU there is not much difference at the character level and almost exactly the same as the original character. This is surprising considering he is a reincarnation even though he didn't read 'Harry Potter' thoroughly but his previous personality definitely stuck and it disappeared in later stages I understand it can be called character development but why does it feel like he doesn't get better but instead follows Conan himself, those of you who read the original book will know how he behaves James Potter, honestly I don't like him especially the prank session with snap, it wasn't a prank or a joke but the insults, oppression, bullying that I see, I hope he's not like that because it destroys all his stories. Thank You
Very fun to read, has some error with wording but otherwise pretty good. It has some parts thst don’t necessarily feel like they make sense for the mc, but st the same time if you ignore the incosistency it feels good to see the mc get what he always wanted 🤷🤷♂️
beautiful story, both the characters seem real while they interact with each other, not much is known about the time of the marauders that is why the story that our author creates here is even better, thank you author for this gem👌
One of the best fanfics so far, it is a fresh perspective on the world of Harry Potter, I really liked the references to the game and in general the plot is progressing well, it is just entering its second year and the adventures remain interesting , I congratulate you very much and I hope you continue writing, don't drop it!
Honestly the start was great but since meeting with Sirius the character changed entirely. Doesn't even feel like it's a new story but rather the Golden Trio adventures with additional friends. Kinda disappointed with how the character just nosedived from being a cool calculated person to a absolute bullheaded guy. Just because he is Gryffindor doesn't mean he has to portrayed that way.
Guys can u suggest me anymore fanfics like this it's very unique............................................................................