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Really enjoyed this story! The plot kept me interested and the characters were engaging. I couldn't wait to see how they would deal with the father, and the whole subplot with Lily's parents seemed promising.The inclusion of gods t. Finding a completed story has its perks, but in this case, it meant racing through it and wanting desperately for more which is kinda too late. In in all it was a promising story shame how we didn’t get clear ending especially after I was so invested
i have read 20 chapters , and the story really hooked me up . hopefully it will get even better , but a really good novel , though there are some annoying parts ,
Tbh, It couldn't immerse me. Maybe because MC is mediocre, supportive, encouraging and cautious and yes he acts most of the time. Despite it is well written and organized.
It's my book, so I'm giving it 5 stars. But fr, this is my first novel and I'm still developing my own unique way of story telling. Thanks to everyone for your patience while reading my story. Note, since this is First POV there will be a lot of moving parts that the MC doesn't know about.
The novel is interesting and intriguing, well written and, most importantly, not boring yet. I wish the author good luck in writing the novel. I have a question for the author: will Luna be with the Main Character? Sorry for my English, but it's not my native language.
Really enjoyed this story! The plot kept me interested and the characters were engaging. I couldn't wait to see how they would deal with the father, and the whole subplot with Lily's parents seemed promising.The inclusion of gods t. Finding a completed story has its perks, but in this case, it meant racing through it and wanting desperately for more which is kinda too late. In in all it was a promising story shame how we didn’t get clear ending especially after I was so invested
i have read 20 chapters , and the story really hooked me up . hopefully it will get even better , but a really good novel , though there are some annoying parts ,
Tbh, It couldn't immerse me. Maybe because MC is mediocre, supportive, encouraging and cautious and yes he acts most of the time. Despite it is well written and organized.
It's my book, so I'm giving it 5 stars. But fr, this is my first novel and I'm still developing my own unique way of story telling. Thanks to everyone for your patience while reading my story. Note, since this is First POV there will be a lot of moving parts that the MC doesn't know about.
The novel is interesting and intriguing, well written and, most importantly, not boring yet. I wish the author good luck in writing the novel. I have a question for the author: will Luna be with the Main Character? Sorry for my English, but it's not my native language.
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