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One of the best stories I've read, and the translation is incredible 10/10,..........................................................................
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simply breathtakingly amazing. one of the ebst works on this platform. i am even tempted to span 5 star reviews. those who did not like this novel are either cringe teens or people who did not read enough of the novel. keep it up man
I absolutely love this story, honestly tho I might be best to turn off paragraph comments because lots of people complain about every little thing and was ruining the experience for me til I turned them off 😂
overall it's good. ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Writing wise, it has the MTL standard of over-explaining things to extend the plot. Translation wise, holy mother earth this is the best translation I've read in this app. Personally, I always read the reviews of fanfics that are more than a hundred chapters long and I'm unsure I want to read through. And the reviews that show up when I first looked turned out to be quite demotivating, but I thankfully still read this beautiful translation because of one good review. Thanks for the translation, I love you for it.
it was a good story until demon slayer arc. this arc was boring af and this novel have many info dump, also i saw from reviews this novel has 1000 chapter and he has harem of 5 with mostly oc even with many heroine that likes mc? what a disappointment. i think i would stop here. the translation was good tho, not many error and peak for this platform.
This is a ff i really enjoyed and would recommend it to anyone who wants to read a good Story with well written characters. I could not stop reading after beginning i was really engrossed in the story and the interactions between the characters. In Adition the Grammar in this ff is really good and i didnt find any mistakes.
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Honestly one of if not the best novel I've read in a long time I can say with absolute serenity that this is a 10/10 novel keep up the good work it has got me really hype
The story is very good, but i'm a bit offed in chapters where the author decided to dump infos that I don't wanna know.... f**k that.. i just want to read some action.
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This is the most glaze-worthy fanfic on the entire internet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[img=update][img=update] I guess I need the nostalgic trip through the many works of fiction the Mc wanders, tickles my fancy but I'll admit the idea of liking a fan fic this much surprised me. The author has serious talent and doesn't waste the readers time. The only fanfic I've ever read that doesn't need an editor. Quite good.👍
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Muy buena historia ..................................................................................................................................
i just read the whole thing, and sadly cought up. Really enjoying the novel so far, it is very well written. Story is not rushed and also it isnt slow either, it is very well paced. Keep up the great work author. Im just confused why this novel is not higher in the ranks
Ruqing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
the fight scenes are wonderful, the characters have a lot of depth. The main problem though is that there is a ton of filler in each chapter.
If you don’t like and Mc that spares people who try and kill him for no reason this isn’t for you on chapter 46 he gets attacked for no reason and spares all who try and kill him but this story is translated and there is no problems with it and it is readable but the are a lot of filler words and chapters but that is because of the author
I absolutely love it. Author, great job! I just hope you'll keep continuing this book, please don't drop it 🥲🥲🥲. The good books are hard to find now.
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Me voy porque estoy cansado de leer fanfic de danmachi que estén en las misma put familias de siempre Loki de mierd y Hefesto que ella por lo menos es pasable pero loki es basura absoluta para mi
the transaction is good next for those who plan to read the fic....it's read in my veiw but just that....I read the MTL...so here is a warning.....there are too many trigger points with the mc in from middle part of the fic.... like not using magic that could easily solve problems....letting his enemies get away again and again because he ignores them after the battle .....ECT...they are way too many trigger points like these...so I will only recommend this fic to those who can ignore these... otherwise after some time you will only feel angry when reading this fic
So i got up to date (312) and honestly it has been pretty Damn good so far Without spoiling i can say than the only thing that drags out the 5 stars to 4.6 is the update stability, it aint that bad but is definetly worse than this autor previous works (they were either 1 daily or even 2 chaps daily) The mc is relatively likeable (not a total blank slate mc at least) romance wise it clearly looks shit will go hella slow wich is fine by me tbh i dont think it matters that much considering the high quality writing Also is Harem so if you are one of those that cries for shit like that avoid this stuff
One of the best stories I've read, and the translation is incredible 10/10,..........................................................................
................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................ This is a really good novel keep it up please;)
simply breathtakingly amazing. one of the ebst works on this platform. i am even tempted to span 5 star reviews. those who did not like this novel are either cringe teens or people who did not read enough of the novel. keep it up man
I absolutely love this story, honestly tho I might be best to turn off paragraph comments because lots of people complain about every little thing and was ruining the experience for me til I turned them off 😂
overall it's good. ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Writing wise, it has the MTL standard of over-explaining things to extend the plot. Translation wise, holy mother earth this is the best translation I've read in this app. Personally, I always read the reviews of fanfics that are more than a hundred chapters long and I'm unsure I want to read through. And the reviews that show up when I first looked turned out to be quite demotivating, but I thankfully still read this beautiful translation because of one good review. Thanks for the translation, I love you for it.
it was a good story until demon slayer arc. this arc was boring af and this novel have many info dump, also i saw from reviews this novel has 1000 chapter and he has harem of 5 with mostly oc even with many heroine that likes mc? what a disappointment. i think i would stop here. the translation was good tho, not many error and peak for this platform.
This is a ff i really enjoyed and would recommend it to anyone who wants to read a good Story with well written characters. I could not stop reading after beginning i was really engrossed in the story and the interactions between the characters. In Adition the Grammar in this ff is really good and i didnt find any mistakes.
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Honestly one of if not the best novel I've read in a long time I can say with absolute serenity that this is a 10/10 novel keep up the good work it has got me really hype
The story is very good, but i'm a bit offed in chapters where the author decided to dump infos that I don't wanna know.... f**k that.. i just want to read some action.
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This is the most glaze-worthy fanfic on the entire internet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[img=update][img=update] I guess I need the nostalgic trip through the many works of fiction the Mc wanders, tickles my fancy but I'll admit the idea of liking a fan fic this much surprised me. The author has serious talent and doesn't waste the readers time. The only fanfic I've ever read that doesn't need an editor. Quite good.👍
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Muy buena historia ..................................................................................................................................
i just read the whole thing, and sadly cought up. Really enjoying the novel so far, it is very well written. Story is not rushed and also it isnt slow either, it is very well paced. Keep up the great work author. Im just confused why this novel is not higher in the ranks
Ruqing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
the fight scenes are wonderful, the characters have a lot of depth. The main problem though is that there is a ton of filler in each chapter.
If you don’t like and Mc that spares people who try and kill him for no reason this isn’t for you on chapter 46 he gets attacked for no reason and spares all who try and kill him but this story is translated and there is no problems with it and it is readable but the are a lot of filler words and chapters but that is because of the author
I absolutely love it. Author, great job! I just hope you'll keep continuing this book, please don't drop it 🥲🥲🥲. The good books are hard to find now.
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Revelar spoiler Me voy porque estoy cansado de leer fanfic de danmachi que estén en las misma put familias de siempre Loki de mierd y Hefesto que ella por lo menos es pasable pero loki es basura absoluta para mi
the transaction is good next for those who plan to read the fic....it's read in my veiw but just that....I read the MTL...so here is a warning.....there are too many trigger points with the mc in from middle part of the fic.... like not using magic that could easily solve problems....letting his enemies get away again and again because he ignores them after the battle .....ECT...they are way too many trigger points like these...so I will only recommend this fic to those who can ignore these... otherwise after some time you will only feel angry when reading this fic
So i got up to date (312) and honestly it has been pretty Damn good so far Without spoiling i can say than the only thing that drags out the 5 stars to 4.6 is the update stability, it aint that bad but is definetly worse than this autor previous works (they were either 1 daily or even 2 chaps daily) The mc is relatively likeable (not a total blank slate mc at least) romance wise it clearly looks shit will go hella slow wich is fine by me tbh i dont think it matters that much considering the high quality writing Also is Harem so if you are one of those that cries for shit like that avoid this stuff