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Escribe una reseñaGood novel, The extra theme and setting might be a bit cliche but the writing is top-notch, some reasons why you should read this:-1. The MC might be a bit annoying in the first few chapters however he quickly grows and becomes fun to read about. 2. The novel isn't slow and we quickly jump into action. 3 It's a magecrafter novel so writing quality and English skills are guaranteed. 4. The side cast is all interesting and the world doesn't revolve around the MC. 5.The novel updates daily.
Honestly I don't know where to start with this Novel, it's really well written, the power system is great, the characters are great each with their own unique personality, overall its just brilliant. I'm currently only 298 chapters in but this book brought me out of my slump in terms of Novels. I got to the point where I'd read everything I considered worth reading and couldn't find anything else, but this Novel hit the spot. To start with the Characters, each of them has quite a unique personality with specific traits that kind of define them as a person. Overall they're all done really impressively, each character being vastly different with even each relatively minor villain or antagonist having their own quirks. In terms of the Power System, so far it's brilliant, I won't go into so as not to spoil it, but it's done very well and its also quite simple which to my surprise made the power system and scaling characters alot easier and therefore I found it more enjoyable. In terms of the main character, so far he's been quite a fun MC to read about, he's not overly Heroic but still caring and yet he isn't outright good or outright evil in my opinion, a perfect balance for a character, I'm not really a big fan of the whole 'hiding your true power and living as an extra' trope, but I have to say the way it's portrayed in this novel far exceeded my expectations. For story development I find it to be a bit slow for my liking, however it dosent really bring the story down at all as the MCs power still grows at a fast pace, and so does his character providing some very well done character development.
Author come back!! This novel is so good and has soo much potential. (Sidenote I appreciate that one of the best characters in the series is a Person of color A.K.A Ater). If I was a wealthy man I’d shower you with golden castles but alas I’m only able to give you my encouragement… Hope you’re doing okay!!!
It’s really good and entertaining but it’s just not for me I’m more on the cocky and overpowered MC but I recommend reading this if you like an MC who hides his OP powers.
This shit just took a downhill after chapter 500. It feels so off. The auther is trying to force so much dialog and interaction and simply making this difficult to read. Those who view this novel as equally good or better after chpt 550, I really need to hear you out, cause Rey is just not a good Mc bro his indecisive, 0 development on his part. Wallows in self pity. Wallows in doubt. For some reason . The author explains this all out by saying "his just a 16y/o" but bro? 16 year old don't just have these negative and pathetic qualities. They really don't. Moreover they aren't so self introspective, they don't think about difficult topics like politics or moral dillemas. It's just bro. It's a good read but your going to find yourself more annoyed than enjoying a lot of this
I would just like to say that this is all Text-to-speech. And firstly, I apologize author it kind of turned into a ramp, but i'm still going to post it because they are what I think about the novel, even if it's not constructive criticism, I still want to voice my grievances towards this novel out there, because I do think it has good potential tldr: the pacing definitely needs some work. And the, romance/friendship situation between our main character and the 2 FL is annoying. At this point, it's been drawn on for too long, with Rey leading one of them on and chasing after the other.But still having feelings for the one he's leading on Honestly, I think this novel's okay, but it starts to go downhill later on. The almost slice of life pace that the novel takes on. It's okay, but every exposition that happens has almost no bearing on the main story or any relevant characters. At least that's what I feel. I've read about 700 chapters in and honestly, any single time. Somethings come up regarding aside characters in her monolog or something like that? Any anytime? One of those happens? I just completely skip it.And then i'm never confused afterwards, because it never pops up again in the story. I get that. The author likes fleshing out the novel, but it happens two frequently with two little progress regarding our main character. Or even just the main story, like the overall arching story of the novel move so incredibly slow. It's not even funny.We're over seven hundred chapters in, and we basically just beforehand had our first fight with the dragon army instead of individual dragons attacking the human empire. I don't know if I phrase that properly, but essentially everything's been hyped up that the other worlders are going to be sent to war on the front lines and that it still doesn't happen. It's the elves that are fighting and that's who we get to. See, first after 650 chapters, the first Real battle with the dragons that isn't a the forced conflict from the author no offense, but honestly, the first raid on the capitol was so yeah, forced.I couldn't enjoy any of it. It literally only served as a reason to nerf. The main character that was the whole point of it. Maybe it was also to add the stakes in that the other rollers can in fact die. But yeah, honestly, the only thing it accomplished was making me not care about it. It just felt so funny forced upon us that I couldn't be bothered reading about how some of the other rollers died, or that alicia got put into a coma or all that stuff. And honestly, that leads me to my next biggest gripe, is just the amount of sidetracking that happens in the middle of a fight. There's way too much talking. There's too much side shit happening in the middle of a very life-threatening fight that. It takes me out seeing that a fight starts at.For example, we'll say chapter one and ends at chapter fifty. Is that a bit exaggerated? Yes, but any fight scene that goes on for longer than 2 chapters. Isn't worth reading at that point, just skip to the very last chapter in the entire fight sequence. And anything that's important happens there. Or I'll do you one better skip to the chapter? After the fight scene, and you'll get a nice summary of what happened. And you won't have to spend ten to fifteen bucks on chapters that essentially are meaningless. Sure, it's a bit mean to put it that way. But we all know that the none of the other rollers can hold a candle to the dragons. It has been stated multiple times it has been hammered in at the point of that fight happening, that none of them are prepared for even one of the weakest dragons.Maybe they can just barely eke out a victory against a commander, but the fight has many of those. And then the author kind of realized his buck up with the power scaling and had to somehow draw out a reason for them. Not all to die before ray got there and that led to the bitch Alicia, summoning a divine Beast. And then we know that in no way shape or form, should ray be able to survive it yet, because of plot armor he does and he kills it and he saves a couple of them. my other complaint is that the a whole who should Rey pick between Esme and Alicia. I can't stand either of them. Esme with her whole, I need to look out for all the good people in the world. And I'm just gonna trust the status panel in my vision on, if someone's a good person or a bad person, honestly hated that bitch and even after she's been with our main character for quite a while. mainly because we know he's going to have to pick one or the other at least I would hope he would, but it's just been drawn on for so long that any suspense in their relationship is just, it's boring at this point I just hope he picks 1 and doesn't give a shit about the other honestly, or I hope he picks neither Because I just hmm, hate the way the romance situation is playing out. It's so, corny and horribly delivered in my opinion.
Watsup Author?!. Alright I think it's time I drop a review on this book. I went through other reviews and saw some giving positive reviews and I shaked my head cause maybe those readers haven't read a good book before. This book started quite well,the first 100 chapters were OK but it took a downhill when Rey became so obsessed with the wellbeing of his classmates,alright maybe that's like an attachment to keep him in check and not become a killing machine, but does he have to be a simp for them? Dude has an OP ability, tasked with the responsibility of saving the world and he's busy being soft,too soft even. I 100 percent prefer Ater to him,smart, cunning, does what have to be done,has leadership traits and is goal oriented, instead of Rey to learn from him,he's distrusting him and paranoid,we'll I'd be distrustful and paranoid too if I have that kind of subordinate, Ater is perfect for the position of MC...and please don't start by telling me Rey is still a kid,none of those summoned are kids anymore after experiencing deaths. I still have alot say but all in all Rey could be better. You can do better I'll probably not come back to this book again cause I lost interest, you would too if you read the kinds of book I've read(you'll get there) Just adjust for ur future readers or maybe do better on your next work Thank you
this is one of the best novels i read for a while it made me totally engulfed within its world and actually if you just can finish the first like 5 to 6 chapters because they are boring you will definitely enjoy the story as it develope it becomes better and it have everything thing romance and action and even comedy, while also the writer made sure to give you another pov of the other characters and even the monsters wich i was near to tear while he was giving us their pov while mc is killing them 🙂🙂🙂 like why do you do this if you plan to kill them but anyways it will be fun experience
Amazing it’s been a very interesting read and is probably one of the best novel on here, only thing that sucks is the upload rate but it’s worth the wait, much thanks to the author 🙏
Hey author I hope you read this. I have some problem i have personally as a reader that i'd like to address, the biggest of of them is the protagonist. He decides to hide his ability out of spite? Cool, that's absolutely fine. Though I still don't understand why he still decides to hide it after the dome practice chapter, though you could argue that he purely did because he ned not to show it. And to the next, how unhinged he is with gore. In chapter where the first heroine was kidnapped he was with some assasin/thug of the blackmarket group, and saw some very heavy gore. Now, tou could here also argue that he is already immune to gore because of his previous farming. But humans and humanoid creatyre are pretty different in practice. Even so, I can still understand that, but he dod not recoile after burning his literal hands? I had been to a few hunting and saw some people dismembering a deer, bull etc. without problem but I still gagged the first time I had to do practical witnessing of surgery, though that maybe a personal problem. Regardless on the next part, I don't know if the protagonist have no empathy in his previous life but, why did he never show such? He did not feel very human like. I don't know if this personality/line of thought is shared in this kind of novel protagonist ie., the fantasy novel where mc suddenly gain power, regardless I find it largely unrealistic to the point it broke my immerssion. And to the last point, the hero is a phenomenal character, personally and writing wise. To the protagonist and everyone, knowing the guy was in a problem the protagonist refused to participate in his pandamonium. I can still understand if he refuse to antagonize billy? I believe that girl was her name, anyway. Instea dof tipping him off or anything, even though the protagonist himself largely knows adon was still intrigued by the problem involved with adam he just kept quite, I find that largely unrealistic/mechanical as well. Even in the case he don't want problem, he can indirectly solve it by telling the hero. P.S. I read this up to around chapter 106 and dropped it becausw of this some.... these points that I find broke my immersion. Hope this review find you. Adonu.. was it... I forgot his name... The hero was the most well written and human like/realistic in my opinion... Hope you even more success, but i'll drop it here
Revelar spoilerI don't understand one thing. Since the start of the novel, once he recognized his feelings for Alicia, he kind of restricted his feelings (maybe 'male instincts' is the right term?) towards other girls. But even after all that, he still fell for Esme, and it took him a lot to acknowledge that. When Rey realizes that his and Alicia's paths are opposite, he understands they can't be in a relationship, which I get. But he still has feelings for Esme. I understand he wants to give her the space she asked for, but can't he at least send her a letter explaining what's happening, his feelings, and what might happen between them? Rey could send her a letter and wait for her answer after he comes back from the Dragon Continent, right?. I think one should be selfish in some matter no matter what, but you are making him think that he shouldn't be selfish at all. In his past life Rey & Lucielle are a thing but I'm sure Esme is a variable and I think one small change can change everything. I just hoped he would send a letter or act selfishly towards Esme, but not to the extent of taking away her choice. I mean, he almost lost the people he loved, so I expected him to act that way.
Revelar spoilerThe story has reached chapter 850 and the FL has not been chosen yet. I also don't want Esme to be the FL because I don't like elves and she is also annoying to me.
Privilege is ending in 24 hours plus I need Mass release Mass release Mass release Mass release
I would absolutely 10/10 recommend this book. For anyone who likes anything along the lines of Isekai or overpowered weakling, it’s great! The characters develop really well and the story is told in such a manner you can’t help but appreciate. There’s not just action, but other elements too and it really balances it out. S-Tier book in my opinion. 10/10 can’t recommend this enough.
I love it so much! The depiction of the story by different characters make it so lively and so immersive! Best story and lots of love to the author❤️❤️
Great book. I’m team Esme btw. Jus wanna speak my mind about the romance part of this book which I think is pretty well written. I think that Alicia is that crush a guy has in those Highschool romance anime’s and Esme as that best friend with them along the way and by the end of it the guy realised the person they actually loved is that best friend aka Esme :) I’m typin this before the next chapter after her confession and yes I’m reading this on another account if u wondering.
Revelar spoilerthis novel is really good. the plot, world building, power system, and characters make it such an enjoyable read. if you’re looking for a sign to start this story here it is! stuff on webnovel can be really hit or miss but this is definitely on my list of webnovel gems. keep up the good work author!
SPOILER ALERT Well, I am at ch 181 when I write this review, cause "The Mastermind" appeared (supposedly), and it's one of mc's classmate... HERE is a thing tho, can't mc just kill him or AT LEAST incapacitated him early on, sure he got one SSS rank skill, but hey, with how many skills mc has at least he could put a fight to test him out or try put a leash on him, plus he can copy the "Mastermind" skills while at it... It kind of a bummer cause the "Mastermind" got exposed early on, should have done that during some critical battle or something, AND how does the "Mastermind" knew mc appraised him? Does he have skill for it? Items maybe? Cause the "Mastermind" low level not really supporting that UNLESS he also a regressor like the true MC of the story. Other review The writing quite solid as the reader not confusing while reading it. Update stability? well also good as its 700+ chapters already from what I can see. Story development? I'm kind of bummed by how some supposedly hidden information got exposed so easily with appraisal eye. Character design? I feel they are too straightforward, sure some are good when its straightforward but some others like the schemers need more complex personality as they are schemers (imo), can't scheme if you put wear your heart on your sleeves yea? World background, same old same old, magical world filled with monsters and dragons. *Take this review with bunch of salt as I am a layman*
Revelar spoilerHonestly, the beginning is a bit shaky, but believe me when I say if you keep reading you are going to wish you had more fast passes, because after Magecrafter starts cooking he DOES NOT STOP. I should not have doubted how well Mage could cook based on the beginning.
The fact that this book isn't in the top 5 makes my heart sore. Author is a genius. I'm 415 chapters in and I'm floored. The writing quality hasn't lessened in any way. The characters are still developing. There are actual side characters! With plot lines! And their own development! Love this novel. Love Rey. Even the OP isn't awful as the humanity that the author brings out makes it all relatable. A master of build up and execution. Makes it all real.
I know you said no harem but I truly believe in this situation it’s good and I can trust you with handling everyone. Everyone is too good to pick one, give my boy his harem [img=recommend]
Author I have read the whole novel and I had notice that some chapters name is like you took inspiration from famous web novels like shadow slave ' mass teleportation incident and such ? Is it intensnal or not ??
Revelar spoilerI love the hype! This takes me back when I'm so immersed in reading light novels. Keep up the good work!
It 's a decent read. Lots of content available. World building felt pretty solid and fleshed out. Story is developing and has potential. Most of the characters are well written. My main issue is with the MC. It's like he gets the most story time but the least emotional development of all of the characters. Many chapters in, and he is still very much an out-of-touch teenager that struggles with his insecurities. His sense of justice is very skewed and relatively confusing. The moral dilemmas that he's faced has NOT given him much maturity at all. It's also a tough read when he struggles as he is not a graceful struggler (compared to say Adonis). He feels and remains overall toxic and emotionally stunted. The otherworlders in Adonis' group, in comparison, feel more relatable and dynamic. They grow from their experiences and it shows in their dialogue and actions. When I read their sections, it feels like I'm reading about young adults, not teenagers. This basically results in a static MC that has become increasingly difficulty to root for after hundreds of chapters. As this novel leans into tropes, it's pretty ironic as well that MC (as the OP Extra) feels more like a puppet vs his enigmatic rival (who feels like he should be the Extra)... Just my opinions. Thank you to the Author for giving me content to consume and hopefully my mind gets changed in the future chapters.
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Every thing is good except the way stretch a simple chapter into a complicated one.... bruh I got it that u want a goof world build, but it's just too much man u just gives info of 1 villain for 2 chapters n in third chapter he'll just die!! What is the freaking reason is there to give so much elaborate character, it's not even helping in world building, it just make it really boring, a simple 3 chapter arc is stretch out to 30 chapters just because of some nonsense, and what the freak is DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DI E DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE 30X what is this bruh ... just fill up the pages u do this isn't is too greedy of you
Has FML already been chosen? ........................................................... .................................?????????????????? ??????????......
The writing quality is perfect and I would read more books by the author. The fact that I don’t like the MC and am still reading this @ch400 shows this. The story develops well and the MC isn’t totally OP since there are people who can match him, which leads him to discover other feelings like inferiority and frustration. I like that almost every character develops, but I don’t like how biased the author is in making it clear that Rey is the only one for Alicia, how Alicia is so soft, getting angry everytime someone confronts Rey about something he’s done which is … The last thing I don’t like is how the MC always feels guilty about keeping secrets from her. It really is none of her business what his ambitions are and what he does. And why’d he get posessive over her from the start. Last degrading comment is how I would have really liked if advancing and leveling up was based on developing and understanding magic and its theory. It would have given us a greater sense that the MC actually works hard. And from the start it was amazing how Billy was made to be the villain.( It was obvious the moment, he talked about how his friend started hanging out with the big shots). Billy abandoned him because Rey was weak, though this was wrong, what would have happened if Rey actually went and talked it out with him. It’s not like there are a lot of people who liked him for who he is it was just because of situations. Alicia liked Rey because she had bad relations with past boys, was feeling lonely and Rey was literally the only person she observed most of the time causing her to develop interest in her loneliness. Adonis probably let the break up happen because he was thinking about the future where Billy and Alicia were together. BUT THE BIGGEST AND TRASHIEST THING IS HOW REY ACTUALLY LIKES A RELATIONSHIP WHERE HE IS SUPERIOR TO HIS FAMILIAR. THE BEST FAMILIAR RELATIONSHIP IS THAT WHERE YOUR FAMILIAR GIVES YOU ADVICE JOKES WITH YOU AND MAKES COMMENTS THROUGH YOUR MENTAL CONNECTION, AND ONE WHERE BOTH OF THEM NO EACH OTHER BETTER THAN ANYONE EVER COULD.
Hello! Author here, and here is my review of this novel. There’ll be elements of bias since I’m the author, but I feel they’re all valid. Firstly, this novel follows a trope you’ve all heard of before. Classmates get reincarnated into a new world and they have to save it. Of course, the book does a little spin on some things, but you know what you’re getting. Secondly, the MC is a background character who is average at everything. His life changes once he gets his hands on an OP Skill that acts as his golden finger. He’s very pragmatic and calculating, but he’s not a genius, so don’t expect 1,000,000 IQ from him. Thirdly, it’s a progressive fantasy, so the story evolves (including the worldbuilding and many interesting aspects of it) the more you read and the further you go. There are many unique aspects of the book, and it’s very easy to grasp what it’s all about once you start reading it. I won’t spoil anything here, but I’d really urge you to give it a try. Of course, this novel isn’t for everyone so after the tenth chapter, if you don’t like what you’re reading, then maybe it’s just not your cup of tea. I’d like it if you were active in the comments and let me hear your thoughts. Please be nice and cordial since I’m a human with a heart too. Thanks for reading this review, and I hope you have a good time with the novel. Cheers!
Good novel, The extra theme and setting might be a bit cliche but the writing is top-notch, some reasons why you should read this:-1. The MC might be a bit annoying in the first few chapters however he quickly grows and becomes fun to read about. 2. The novel isn't slow and we quickly jump into action. 3 It's a magecrafter novel so writing quality and English skills are guaranteed. 4. The side cast is all interesting and the world doesn't revolve around the MC. 5.The novel updates daily.
Honestly I don't know where to start with this Novel, it's really well written, the power system is great, the characters are great each with their own unique personality, overall its just brilliant. I'm currently only 298 chapters in but this book brought me out of my slump in terms of Novels. I got to the point where I'd read everything I considered worth reading and couldn't find anything else, but this Novel hit the spot. To start with the Characters, each of them has quite a unique personality with specific traits that kind of define them as a person. Overall they're all done really impressively, each character being vastly different with even each relatively minor villain or antagonist having their own quirks. In terms of the Power System, so far it's brilliant, I won't go into so as not to spoil it, but it's done very well and its also quite simple which to my surprise made the power system and scaling characters alot easier and therefore I found it more enjoyable. In terms of the main character, so far he's been quite a fun MC to read about, he's not overly Heroic but still caring and yet he isn't outright good or outright evil in my opinion, a perfect balance for a character, I'm not really a big fan of the whole 'hiding your true power and living as an extra' trope, but I have to say the way it's portrayed in this novel far exceeded my expectations. For story development I find it to be a bit slow for my liking, however it dosent really bring the story down at all as the MCs power still grows at a fast pace, and so does his character providing some very well done character development.
Author come back!! This novel is so good and has soo much potential. (Sidenote I appreciate that one of the best characters in the series is a Person of color A.K.A Ater). If I was a wealthy man I’d shower you with golden castles but alas I’m only able to give you my encouragement… Hope you’re doing okay!!!
It’s really good and entertaining but it’s just not for me I’m more on the cocky and overpowered MC but I recommend reading this if you like an MC who hides his OP powers.
This shit just took a downhill after chapter 500. It feels so off. The auther is trying to force so much dialog and interaction and simply making this difficult to read. Those who view this novel as equally good or better after chpt 550, I really need to hear you out, cause Rey is just not a good Mc bro his indecisive, 0 development on his part. Wallows in self pity. Wallows in doubt. For some reason . The author explains this all out by saying "his just a 16y/o" but bro? 16 year old don't just have these negative and pathetic qualities. They really don't. Moreover they aren't so self introspective, they don't think about difficult topics like politics or moral dillemas. It's just bro. It's a good read but your going to find yourself more annoyed than enjoying a lot of this
I would just like to say that this is all Text-to-speech. And firstly, I apologize author it kind of turned into a ramp, but i'm still going to post it because they are what I think about the novel, even if it's not constructive criticism, I still want to voice my grievances towards this novel out there, because I do think it has good potential tldr: the pacing definitely needs some work. And the, romance/friendship situation between our main character and the 2 FL is annoying. At this point, it's been drawn on for too long, with Rey leading one of them on and chasing after the other.But still having feelings for the one he's leading on Honestly, I think this novel's okay, but it starts to go downhill later on. The almost slice of life pace that the novel takes on. It's okay, but every exposition that happens has almost no bearing on the main story or any relevant characters. At least that's what I feel. I've read about 700 chapters in and honestly, any single time. Somethings come up regarding aside characters in her monolog or something like that? Any anytime? One of those happens? I just completely skip it.And then i'm never confused afterwards, because it never pops up again in the story. I get that. The author likes fleshing out the novel, but it happens two frequently with two little progress regarding our main character. Or even just the main story, like the overall arching story of the novel move so incredibly slow. It's not even funny.We're over seven hundred chapters in, and we basically just beforehand had our first fight with the dragon army instead of individual dragons attacking the human empire. I don't know if I phrase that properly, but essentially everything's been hyped up that the other worlders are going to be sent to war on the front lines and that it still doesn't happen. It's the elves that are fighting and that's who we get to. See, first after 650 chapters, the first Real battle with the dragons that isn't a the forced conflict from the author no offense, but honestly, the first raid on the capitol was so yeah, forced.I couldn't enjoy any of it. It literally only served as a reason to nerf. The main character that was the whole point of it. Maybe it was also to add the stakes in that the other rollers can in fact die. But yeah, honestly, the only thing it accomplished was making me not care about it. It just felt so funny forced upon us that I couldn't be bothered reading about how some of the other rollers died, or that alicia got put into a coma or all that stuff. And honestly, that leads me to my next biggest gripe, is just the amount of sidetracking that happens in the middle of a fight. There's way too much talking. There's too much side shit happening in the middle of a very life-threatening fight that. It takes me out seeing that a fight starts at.For example, we'll say chapter one and ends at chapter fifty. Is that a bit exaggerated? Yes, but any fight scene that goes on for longer than 2 chapters. Isn't worth reading at that point, just skip to the very last chapter in the entire fight sequence. And anything that's important happens there. Or I'll do you one better skip to the chapter? After the fight scene, and you'll get a nice summary of what happened. And you won't have to spend ten to fifteen bucks on chapters that essentially are meaningless. Sure, it's a bit mean to put it that way. But we all know that the none of the other rollers can hold a candle to the dragons. It has been stated multiple times it has been hammered in at the point of that fight happening, that none of them are prepared for even one of the weakest dragons.Maybe they can just barely eke out a victory against a commander, but the fight has many of those. And then the author kind of realized his buck up with the power scaling and had to somehow draw out a reason for them. Not all to die before ray got there and that led to the bitch Alicia, summoning a divine Beast. And then we know that in no way shape or form, should ray be able to survive it yet, because of plot armor he does and he kills it and he saves a couple of them. my other complaint is that the a whole who should Rey pick between Esme and Alicia. I can't stand either of them. Esme with her whole, I need to look out for all the good people in the world. And I'm just gonna trust the status panel in my vision on, if someone's a good person or a bad person, honestly hated that bitch and even after she's been with our main character for quite a while. mainly because we know he's going to have to pick one or the other at least I would hope he would, but it's just been drawn on for so long that any suspense in their relationship is just, it's boring at this point I just hope he picks 1 and doesn't give a shit about the other honestly, or I hope he picks neither Because I just hmm, hate the way the romance situation is playing out. It's so, corny and horribly delivered in my opinion.
Watsup Author?!. Alright I think it's time I drop a review on this book. I went through other reviews and saw some giving positive reviews and I shaked my head cause maybe those readers haven't read a good book before. This book started quite well,the first 100 chapters were OK but it took a downhill when Rey became so obsessed with the wellbeing of his classmates,alright maybe that's like an attachment to keep him in check and not become a killing machine, but does he have to be a simp for them? Dude has an OP ability, tasked with the responsibility of saving the world and he's busy being soft,too soft even. I 100 percent prefer Ater to him,smart, cunning, does what have to be done,has leadership traits and is goal oriented, instead of Rey to learn from him,he's distrusting him and paranoid,we'll I'd be distrustful and paranoid too if I have that kind of subordinate, Ater is perfect for the position of MC...and please don't start by telling me Rey is still a kid,none of those summoned are kids anymore after experiencing deaths. I still have alot say but all in all Rey could be better. You can do better I'll probably not come back to this book again cause I lost interest, you would too if you read the kinds of book I've read(you'll get there) Just adjust for ur future readers or maybe do better on your next work Thank you
this is one of the best novels i read for a while it made me totally engulfed within its world and actually if you just can finish the first like 5 to 6 chapters because they are boring you will definitely enjoy the story as it develope it becomes better and it have everything thing romance and action and even comedy, while also the writer made sure to give you another pov of the other characters and even the monsters wich i was near to tear while he was giving us their pov while mc is killing them 🙂🙂🙂 like why do you do this if you plan to kill them but anyways it will be fun experience
Amazing it’s been a very interesting read and is probably one of the best novel on here, only thing that sucks is the upload rate but it’s worth the wait, much thanks to the author 🙏
Hey author I hope you read this. I have some problem i have personally as a reader that i'd like to address, the biggest of of them is the protagonist. He decides to hide his ability out of spite? Cool, that's absolutely fine. Though I still don't understand why he still decides to hide it after the dome practice chapter, though you could argue that he purely did because he ned not to show it. And to the next, how unhinged he is with gore. In chapter where the first heroine was kidnapped he was with some assasin/thug of the blackmarket group, and saw some very heavy gore. Now, tou could here also argue that he is already immune to gore because of his previous farming. But humans and humanoid creatyre are pretty different in practice. Even so, I can still understand that, but he dod not recoile after burning his literal hands? I had been to a few hunting and saw some people dismembering a deer, bull etc. without problem but I still gagged the first time I had to do practical witnessing of surgery, though that maybe a personal problem. Regardless on the next part, I don't know if the protagonist have no empathy in his previous life but, why did he never show such? He did not feel very human like. I don't know if this personality/line of thought is shared in this kind of novel protagonist ie., the fantasy novel where mc suddenly gain power, regardless I find it largely unrealistic to the point it broke my immerssion. And to the last point, the hero is a phenomenal character, personally and writing wise. To the protagonist and everyone, knowing the guy was in a problem the protagonist refused to participate in his pandamonium. I can still understand if he refuse to antagonize billy? I believe that girl was her name, anyway. Instea dof tipping him off or anything, even though the protagonist himself largely knows adon was still intrigued by the problem involved with adam he just kept quite, I find that largely unrealistic/mechanical as well. Even in the case he don't want problem, he can indirectly solve it by telling the hero. P.S. I read this up to around chapter 106 and dropped it becausw of this some.... these points that I find broke my immersion. Hope this review find you. Adonu.. was it... I forgot his name... The hero was the most well written and human like/realistic in my opinion... Hope you even more success, but i'll drop it here
Revelar spoilerI don't understand one thing. Since the start of the novel, once he recognized his feelings for Alicia, he kind of restricted his feelings (maybe 'male instincts' is the right term?) towards other girls. But even after all that, he still fell for Esme, and it took him a lot to acknowledge that. When Rey realizes that his and Alicia's paths are opposite, he understands they can't be in a relationship, which I get. But he still has feelings for Esme. I understand he wants to give her the space she asked for, but can't he at least send her a letter explaining what's happening, his feelings, and what might happen between them? Rey could send her a letter and wait for her answer after he comes back from the Dragon Continent, right?. I think one should be selfish in some matter no matter what, but you are making him think that he shouldn't be selfish at all. In his past life Rey & Lucielle are a thing but I'm sure Esme is a variable and I think one small change can change everything. I just hoped he would send a letter or act selfishly towards Esme, but not to the extent of taking away her choice. I mean, he almost lost the people he loved, so I expected him to act that way.
Revelar spoilerThe story has reached chapter 850 and the FL has not been chosen yet. I also don't want Esme to be the FL because I don't like elves and she is also annoying to me.
Privilege is ending in 24 hours plus I need Mass release Mass release Mass release Mass release
I would absolutely 10/10 recommend this book. For anyone who likes anything along the lines of Isekai or overpowered weakling, it’s great! The characters develop really well and the story is told in such a manner you can’t help but appreciate. There’s not just action, but other elements too and it really balances it out. S-Tier book in my opinion. 10/10 can’t recommend this enough.
I love it so much! The depiction of the story by different characters make it so lively and so immersive! Best story and lots of love to the author❤️❤️
Great book. I’m team Esme btw. Jus wanna speak my mind about the romance part of this book which I think is pretty well written. I think that Alicia is that crush a guy has in those Highschool romance anime’s and Esme as that best friend with them along the way and by the end of it the guy realised the person they actually loved is that best friend aka Esme :) I’m typin this before the next chapter after her confession and yes I’m reading this on another account if u wondering.
Revelar spoilerthis novel is really good. the plot, world building, power system, and characters make it such an enjoyable read. if you’re looking for a sign to start this story here it is! stuff on webnovel can be really hit or miss but this is definitely on my list of webnovel gems. keep up the good work author!
SPOILER ALERT Well, I am at ch 181 when I write this review, cause "The Mastermind" appeared (supposedly), and it's one of mc's classmate... HERE is a thing tho, can't mc just kill him or AT LEAST incapacitated him early on, sure he got one SSS rank skill, but hey, with how many skills mc has at least he could put a fight to test him out or try put a leash on him, plus he can copy the "Mastermind" skills while at it... It kind of a bummer cause the "Mastermind" got exposed early on, should have done that during some critical battle or something, AND how does the "Mastermind" knew mc appraised him? Does he have skill for it? Items maybe? Cause the "Mastermind" low level not really supporting that UNLESS he also a regressor like the true MC of the story. Other review The writing quite solid as the reader not confusing while reading it. Update stability? well also good as its 700+ chapters already from what I can see. Story development? I'm kind of bummed by how some supposedly hidden information got exposed so easily with appraisal eye. Character design? I feel they are too straightforward, sure some are good when its straightforward but some others like the schemers need more complex personality as they are schemers (imo), can't scheme if you put wear your heart on your sleeves yea? World background, same old same old, magical world filled with monsters and dragons. *Take this review with bunch of salt as I am a layman*
Revelar spoilerHonestly, the beginning is a bit shaky, but believe me when I say if you keep reading you are going to wish you had more fast passes, because after Magecrafter starts cooking he DOES NOT STOP. I should not have doubted how well Mage could cook based on the beginning.
The fact that this book isn't in the top 5 makes my heart sore. Author is a genius. I'm 415 chapters in and I'm floored. The writing quality hasn't lessened in any way. The characters are still developing. There are actual side characters! With plot lines! And their own development! Love this novel. Love Rey. Even the OP isn't awful as the humanity that the author brings out makes it all relatable. A master of build up and execution. Makes it all real.
I know you said no harem but I truly believe in this situation it’s good and I can trust you with handling everyone. Everyone is too good to pick one, give my boy his harem [img=recommend]
Author I have read the whole novel and I had notice that some chapters name is like you took inspiration from famous web novels like shadow slave ' mass teleportation incident and such ? Is it intensnal or not ??
Revelar spoilerI love the hype! This takes me back when I'm so immersed in reading light novels. Keep up the good work!
It 's a decent read. Lots of content available. World building felt pretty solid and fleshed out. Story is developing and has potential. Most of the characters are well written. My main issue is with the MC. It's like he gets the most story time but the least emotional development of all of the characters. Many chapters in, and he is still very much an out-of-touch teenager that struggles with his insecurities. His sense of justice is very skewed and relatively confusing. The moral dilemmas that he's faced has NOT given him much maturity at all. It's also a tough read when he struggles as he is not a graceful struggler (compared to say Adonis). He feels and remains overall toxic and emotionally stunted. The otherworlders in Adonis' group, in comparison, feel more relatable and dynamic. They grow from their experiences and it shows in their dialogue and actions. When I read their sections, it feels like I'm reading about young adults, not teenagers. This basically results in a static MC that has become increasingly difficulty to root for after hundreds of chapters. As this novel leans into tropes, it's pretty ironic as well that MC (as the OP Extra) feels more like a puppet vs his enigmatic rival (who feels like he should be the Extra)... Just my opinions. Thank you to the Author for giving me content to consume and hopefully my mind gets changed in the future chapters.
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Every thing is good except the way stretch a simple chapter into a complicated one.... bruh I got it that u want a goof world build, but it's just too much man u just gives info of 1 villain for 2 chapters n in third chapter he'll just die!! What is the freaking reason is there to give so much elaborate character, it's not even helping in world building, it just make it really boring, a simple 3 chapter arc is stretch out to 30 chapters just because of some nonsense, and what the freak is DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DI E DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE 30X what is this bruh ... just fill up the pages u do this isn't is too greedy of you
Has FML already been chosen? ........................................................... .................................?????????????????? ??????????......
The writing quality is perfect and I would read more books by the author. The fact that I don’t like the MC and am still reading this @ch400 shows this. The story develops well and the MC isn’t totally OP since there are people who can match him, which leads him to discover other feelings like inferiority and frustration. I like that almost every character develops, but I don’t like how biased the author is in making it clear that Rey is the only one for Alicia, how Alicia is so soft, getting angry everytime someone confronts Rey about something he’s done which is … The last thing I don’t like is how the MC always feels guilty about keeping secrets from her. It really is none of her business what his ambitions are and what he does. And why’d he get posessive over her from the start. Last degrading comment is how I would have really liked if advancing and leveling up was based on developing and understanding magic and its theory. It would have given us a greater sense that the MC actually works hard. And from the start it was amazing how Billy was made to be the villain.( It was obvious the moment, he talked about how his friend started hanging out with the big shots). Billy abandoned him because Rey was weak, though this was wrong, what would have happened if Rey actually went and talked it out with him. It’s not like there are a lot of people who liked him for who he is it was just because of situations. Alicia liked Rey because she had bad relations with past boys, was feeling lonely and Rey was literally the only person she observed most of the time causing her to develop interest in her loneliness. Adonis probably let the break up happen because he was thinking about the future where Billy and Alicia were together. BUT THE BIGGEST AND TRASHIEST THING IS HOW REY ACTUALLY LIKES A RELATIONSHIP WHERE HE IS SUPERIOR TO HIS FAMILIAR. THE BEST FAMILIAR RELATIONSHIP IS THAT WHERE YOUR FAMILIAR GIVES YOU ADVICE JOKES WITH YOU AND MAKES COMMENTS THROUGH YOUR MENTAL CONNECTION, AND ONE WHERE BOTH OF THEM NO EACH OTHER BETTER THAN ANYONE EVER COULD.
Hello! Author here, and here is my review of this novel. There’ll be elements of bias since I’m the author, but I feel they’re all valid. Firstly, this novel follows a trope you’ve all heard of before. Classmates get reincarnated into a new world and they have to save it. Of course, the book does a little spin on some things, but you know what you’re getting. Secondly, the MC is a background character who is average at everything. His life changes once he gets his hands on an OP Skill that acts as his golden finger. He’s very pragmatic and calculating, but he’s not a genius, so don’t expect 1,000,000 IQ from him. Thirdly, it’s a progressive fantasy, so the story evolves (including the worldbuilding and many interesting aspects of it) the more you read and the further you go. There are many unique aspects of the book, and it’s very easy to grasp what it’s all about once you start reading it. I won’t spoil anything here, but I’d really urge you to give it a try. Of course, this novel isn’t for everyone so after the tenth chapter, if you don’t like what you’re reading, then maybe it’s just not your cup of tea. I’d like it if you were active in the comments and let me hear your thoughts. Please be nice and cordial since I’m a human with a heart too. Thanks for reading this review, and I hope you have a good time with the novel. Cheers!