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It’s pretty good but I lost all interest in the fanfic when the mc started making preparation‘s for getting another body deciding he doesn’t want to be a girl
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i haven't read any of the chapters yet, but as a fellow writer myself i gave you 5 stars because I have learned something from the other review, that, what should not write in my book hehehe. btw i will read your book and keep it up don't give up just because people don't like, with time you will improve and believe me when you will write your next work it will become so much easier for you to execute the idea 😉
Started out so well but the MC turned into an insufferable know it all simp and Sakura ended up existing only to be simped for and 'educated' by our infinitely knowledgeable MC. Story was completely unreadable by chapter 90 because I disliked the main characters so much.
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I think you should rewrite this whole story; it lacks a hook to keep people reading. You haven't changed Sakura's personality, even though they share the same body and have known each other for a long time. She's the same Sakura from the canon. You should change the body-sharing thing; it's a stupid idea. I think it's the most foolish idea I have ever seen. Sorry to be rude, but it is. The MC is meant to be smart, but he doesn't act like it. Rather than him sharing bodies with her, why didn't you make him her twin? It's so stupid.do not delete my review because im telling the truth
So one question before I start the novel is the mc sakura , the future version of Sakura or is he trapped inside sakura (like sakuna from Jjk) or he is a oc and love interest is sakura ,is he male or female it’s confusing I just want to know before I start reading this novel.
truth no BS lie..this novel is fun to read. the more I read the more I want to continue to read,[img=recommend] so read this novel and enjoy the ride
ill be honest, this body snatching business and going again and again with original sakura about how this is HER body is too much, when this is the body of baby sakura and both future sakura and anish are occupying wrongly, and after repeatedly saying that sakura isnt useless, u still have her act useless for 10 plus chapters with no change in how she treats others. U said at start it cant be possible to only think about sasuke unless u have brain damange but yet here is future sakura doing exactly that. i like anish but he is too nonchalant about how sakura treats him while shouting he is not M. im not sure if this story is for me. ive done the poison testing, u guys try it out if ur ok with a emotionally stable MC who acts stupid from time to time
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This is well-written and made me laugh from time to time, but there's just no hook.Overall it's quite boring with some good banter.
20 chapters in and so far it Well written and a good story. Alittle slow but MC is still a child I like the twist on Sakuras true lineage. So it's quite a change. Maybe she will be the next Hashirama. Keep up the good work.
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Looking good, well written and liking the MC. Anticipating the reactions between him and Sakura.
This novel so far has been well thought out and written. The idea of two different characters sharing a body is really unique and something that takes a lot of creativity to write. Cant rate it a full 5 stars yet but when I finish reading it this story will be something great I'm sure.
It’s pretty good but I lost all interest in the fanfic when the mc started making preparation‘s for getting another body deciding he doesn’t want to be a girl
Revelar spoiler i haven't read any of the chapters yet, but as a fellow writer myself i gave you 5 stars because I have learned something from the other review, that, what should not write in my book hehehe. btw i will read your book and keep it up don't give up just because people don't like, with time you will improve and believe me when you will write your next work it will become so much easier for you to execute the idea 😉
Started out so well but the MC turned into an insufferable know it all simp and Sakura ended up existing only to be simped for and 'educated' by our infinitely knowledgeable MC. Story was completely unreadable by chapter 90 because I disliked the main characters so much.
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I think you should rewrite this whole story; it lacks a hook to keep people reading. You haven't changed Sakura's personality, even though they share the same body and have known each other for a long time. She's the same Sakura from the canon. You should change the body-sharing thing; it's a stupid idea. I think it's the most foolish idea I have ever seen. Sorry to be rude, but it is. The MC is meant to be smart, but he doesn't act like it. Rather than him sharing bodies with her, why didn't you make him her twin? It's so stupid.do not delete my review because im telling the truth
So one question before I start the novel is the mc sakura , the future version of Sakura or is he trapped inside sakura (like sakuna from Jjk) or he is a oc and love interest is sakura ,is he male or female it’s confusing I just want to know before I start reading this novel.
truth no BS lie..this novel is fun to read. the more I read the more I want to continue to read,[img=recommend] so read this novel and enjoy the ride
ill be honest, this body snatching business and going again and again with original sakura about how this is HER body is too much, when this is the body of baby sakura and both future sakura and anish are occupying wrongly, and after repeatedly saying that sakura isnt useless, u still have her act useless for 10 plus chapters with no change in how she treats others. U said at start it cant be possible to only think about sasuke unless u have brain damange but yet here is future sakura doing exactly that. i like anish but he is too nonchalant about how sakura treats him while shouting he is not M. im not sure if this story is for me. ive done the poison testing, u guys try it out if ur ok with a emotionally stable MC who acts stupid from time to time
Revelar spoiler This is well-written and made me laugh from time to time, but there's just no hook.Overall it's quite boring with some good banter.
20 chapters in and so far it Well written and a good story. Alittle slow but MC is still a child I like the twist on Sakuras true lineage. So it's quite a change. Maybe she will be the next Hashirama. Keep up the good work.
Revelar spoiler Looking good, well written and liking the MC. Anticipating the reactions between him and Sakura.
This novel so far has been well thought out and written. The idea of two different characters sharing a body is really unique and something that takes a lot of creativity to write. Cant rate it a full 5 stars yet but when I finish reading it this story will be something great I'm sure.