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It’s one of the best stories I’ve read. Writer really knows the characters involved. Only downside is the chapter updates. It takes so long before the following. I almost thought it was dropped.
Very much a ChatGPT story …. Continue reading the prompts if you’re actually interested in doing so.
Unmeasurable IQ and the best manipulator lol that’s what he was written as but somehow gets outsmarted by Ras Al Ghul… and then let’s him announce loudly to everyone his identity lol nah you made him braindead for a forced plot.
Revelar spoiler
This is one of the best Batman with intelligence fan fiction I have read. The novel have everything with character development to crazy comedy. I recommend to read the novel.
sorry, author, but this story is too raw.. couldn't go through the first 10 chapters.. the author concentrates too much on the MC and his egoism and arrogance.. every 3 paragraphs mentioning the MC's age and how he built this and that.. there's no explanation to doing things, just doing for the heck of it or because the MC is a genius. I would recommend building the world better and creating meaning for MC's actions, giving depth to the scenarios and events..
Because I Said So AND I Like IT..............................................................................................................
as someone who has read some of your books before, the only question ehave for you is when? When will you abandon this gem like you have your other books?
one of the most interesting and original fanfictions in terms of character creation with the wish chosen at the beginning of the story and the unfolding of the plot and exciting and you have just want to read more honestly I recommend one of the best fanfiction I've read 💯.
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just a good dc fanfic..............................................................................................................................................................................
How about making a story with the essence of gacha, I read a story with that and I really liked it ..................................................
I really love this story. I am in chapter 52 now but I already love it. The pace is perfect for me and the mc is hilarious. Although not a serious story but it is just the way I like it. But it also has its serious moments when he assumes the batman identity bringing the variety in the story. I personally liked his seriousness taking revenge on morningstar for 'a cup of tea'. Just imaging the interaction makes it all the more hilarious. Thank you for the chapters. Please keep up with updates.
Revelar spoiler
Hands down Best batman fanfic I have ever read literally changed my taste on batman stories for ever I used to hate batman fanfic with no kill rule other stupid cliche but now I hope to find a story helf if not 1/3 good as this
the story is good but I have a few questions that are really bugging me. 1,why isn't the MC just giving himself powers like superman.(I mean if lex can clone super man so can MC then why not do it?) 2, if the MC is able to make serum from marvel and inject himself then why did he not make a perfected sentry serum or something similar.i mean a scientist from earth could do it. 3,why is he not op yet I mean do you think we fans are dumb or something like.its so slow with power it's like your intentionally nerfing him so that you can keep the fight scenes interesting ..there is so much to a story then fighting.. please understand that ..
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I hope author can focus on reaction on what happen after the transfer but that for another day I hope you could go 100 mark chapter please And not be so stress about the ohter comment they are just seeking attention and Just focus on the good part of it not the bad Thank you for the chapter( im just a crave for more so the 4 star of update)
my friend recommended me to read a jujutsu kaisen fanfic I read it expecting the worst and received the best the author has started now for those who want to read it here's the name jujutsu kaisen: butterfly effect
Ждëм продолжения), желательно поскорее................................. ................................................. .................................................
..................................................................................................................................................Good Fic
I LOVE THIS. Hands down, one of the best fanfictions I've ever read. At the beginning I wasn't so sure, because it seemed very *sure I'll give it a go* by the author, but when I read the second and third chapters, I couldn't stop. I love comedy and seriousness, and things the MC creates and use. I do think it's a little odd that the MC only made an improved SSS for his body (he might have made something else, who knows). Overall, I want to read more, but I caught up to the present chapter *sigh*.
Revelar spoiler
[img=recommend]TRUTH THIS NOVEL IS EPIC FUN TO READ..WHAT IF THANOS BECOMES BATMAN WHICH IS FUN TO READ ..CMON DO NOT LISTEN TO DUMB PEOPLE WHO HATE READING, READ THIS NOVEL AND BECOME DUMB FOR A FUN READ STORY. THIS BATMAN STORY IS UNIQUE BECAUSE THEIR ONE AND THIS IS..THANK YOU AOTHER FOR YOUR FUN STORY.
I'm about to embark on this story, and its concept truly captivates me. I hope you maintain this intrigue and persevere diligently, remembering the significance of taking breaks. Balancing hard work and rest is crucial for sustained creativity and productivity. Best of luck your creative journey!
I turned myself into Batman Morty!!!boom!! big reveal I am Batman I am Batman Rickkkkkk!!!!
It's quite good -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Otimo manda ++++ cap 🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↕🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🙂↔🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
It’s one of the best stories I’ve read. Writer really knows the characters involved. Only downside is the chapter updates. It takes so long before the following. I almost thought it was dropped.
Very much a ChatGPT story …. Continue reading the prompts if you’re actually interested in doing so.
Unmeasurable IQ and the best manipulator lol that’s what he was written as but somehow gets outsmarted by Ras Al Ghul… and then let’s him announce loudly to everyone his identity lol nah you made him braindead for a forced plot.
Revelar spoiler This is one of the best Batman with intelligence fan fiction I have read. The novel have everything with character development to crazy comedy. I recommend to read the novel.
sorry, author, but this story is too raw.. couldn't go through the first 10 chapters.. the author concentrates too much on the MC and his egoism and arrogance.. every 3 paragraphs mentioning the MC's age and how he built this and that.. there's no explanation to doing things, just doing for the heck of it or because the MC is a genius. I would recommend building the world better and creating meaning for MC's actions, giving depth to the scenarios and events..
Because I Said So AND I Like IT..............................................................................................................
as someone who has read some of your books before, the only question ehave for you is when? When will you abandon this gem like you have your other books?
one of the most interesting and original fanfictions in terms of character creation with the wish chosen at the beginning of the story and the unfolding of the plot and exciting and you have just want to read more honestly I recommend one of the best fanfiction I've read 💯.
................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
just a good dc fanfic..............................................................................................................................................................................
How about making a story with the essence of gacha, I read a story with that and I really liked it ..................................................
I really love this story. I am in chapter 52 now but I already love it. The pace is perfect for me and the mc is hilarious. Although not a serious story but it is just the way I like it. But it also has its serious moments when he assumes the batman identity bringing the variety in the story. I personally liked his seriousness taking revenge on morningstar for 'a cup of tea'. Just imaging the interaction makes it all the more hilarious. Thank you for the chapters. Please keep up with updates.
Revelar spoiler Hands down Best batman fanfic I have ever read literally changed my taste on batman stories for ever I used to hate batman fanfic with no kill rule other stupid cliche but now I hope to find a story helf if not 1/3 good as this
the story is good but I have a few questions that are really bugging me. 1,why isn't the MC just giving himself powers like superman.(I mean if lex can clone super man so can MC then why not do it?) 2, if the MC is able to make serum from marvel and inject himself then why did he not make a perfected sentry serum or something similar.i mean a scientist from earth could do it. 3,why is he not op yet I mean do you think we fans are dumb or something like.its so slow with power it's like your intentionally nerfing him so that you can keep the fight scenes interesting ..there is so much to a story then fighting.. please understand that ..
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I hope author can focus on reaction on what happen after the transfer but that for another day I hope you could go 100 mark chapter please And not be so stress about the ohter comment they are just seeking attention and Just focus on the good part of it not the bad Thank you for the chapter( im just a crave for more so the 4 star of update)
my friend recommended me to read a jujutsu kaisen fanfic I read it expecting the worst and received the best the author has started now for those who want to read it here's the name jujutsu kaisen: butterfly effect
Ждëм продолжения), желательно поскорее................................. ................................................. .................................................
..................................................................................................................................................Good Fic
I LOVE THIS. Hands down, one of the best fanfictions I've ever read. At the beginning I wasn't so sure, because it seemed very *sure I'll give it a go* by the author, but when I read the second and third chapters, I couldn't stop. I love comedy and seriousness, and things the MC creates and use. I do think it's a little odd that the MC only made an improved SSS for his body (he might have made something else, who knows). Overall, I want to read more, but I caught up to the present chapter *sigh*.
Revelar spoiler [img=recommend]TRUTH THIS NOVEL IS EPIC FUN TO READ..WHAT IF THANOS BECOMES BATMAN WHICH IS FUN TO READ ..CMON DO NOT LISTEN TO DUMB PEOPLE WHO HATE READING, READ THIS NOVEL AND BECOME DUMB FOR A FUN READ STORY. THIS BATMAN STORY IS UNIQUE BECAUSE THEIR ONE AND THIS IS..THANK YOU AOTHER FOR YOUR FUN STORY.
I'm about to embark on this story, and its concept truly captivates me. I hope you maintain this intrigue and persevere diligently, remembering the significance of taking breaks. Balancing hard work and rest is crucial for sustained creativity and productivity. Best of luck your creative journey!
I turned myself into Batman Morty!!!boom!! big reveal I am Batman I am Batman Rickkkkkk!!!!
It's quite good -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------