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100% Young Justice: Martian Might / Chapter 3: 3

Capítulo 3: 3

Star City- Docks; July 17th, 23:16 PDT

In the cover of the night, two people are unloading a truck. As they remove the first long, flat, container an arrow drops between the two of them. Red fletching showing off and the nock blinks bright red before releasing gas. The two stumble and the container goes flying, popping open to reveal a high-tech gun. Which slides to the feet of one of their associates. He takes aim, the barrel gaining three red streaks. He looks at the construction set up over his head, finally zeroing in on Speedy, who seems to have fully ditched the hat.

"You again!" Brick yells at the teenager. "I'm starting to get insulted Green Arrow's not messing up my operation personally." then narrows his eyes as he aims for Speedy.

The Arrow-themed protége dives right grabbing onto the next support column, just barely staying in front of the shots. As Brick shoots at the bridge that he nearly grabbed he drops down one level and runs across that bridge instead. Brick shoots just in front of the young man, who changes his momentum so he flips as he nocks an arrow and releases it. Shooting it right down the barrel, causing it to explode in Brick's hand, leaving him physically unharmed even though it shreds his suit.

"Do you know what I pay for a suit in my size?!" he yells even more angry at the Arrow-themed eighteen-year-old. "Scorch the Earth, boys." he commands.

The other four raise their guns to do just that, but a blur comes through and two of them are suddenly left weaponless. The other two turn towards where the blur ran off to, only for their guns to be knocked out of their hands. Robin swings into an opening in the crates with his happy cackle. Bring their attention right to Aqualad.

The Atlantean drops down with his water-bears turning into whips which hit the smugglers in full force. Knocking them into the back of the truck and to the ground, unconscious.

Brick lifts a chunk of concrete and throws it at Speedy who is also using the crates to his advantage as he waits to strike with his already nocked arrow. He comes to a stop, bracing himself in a downward diagonal with his foot on one of the crates as he launches an arrow that explodes as it hits Brick's massive shoulder. It doesn't stop the metahuman from throwing another piece of concrete at Speedy. However, this time Speedy jumps out of the way, nocking another arrow as Aqualad jumps where Speedy was with a mace and sword formed from his WaterBearers. Chopping the concrete in two. Giving Speedy the opening to hit Brick with a gas arrow.

Speedy walks to the slightly out of breath Aqualad as he releases the magic that lets his water-bearers take shape. "The cave is perfect. It has everything the Team will need." the Atlantean tells the older hero.

"For covert missions." Robin says dropping down behind Speedy. "You know, spy stuff."

Kid Flash runs up the crates and lands just shy of the edge with inverted half. "And wait till you see Superboy, Martian, and Miss Martian." he says excitedly. "But I saw her first."

The gas wasn't enough to take out Brick, which is made clear as he lets loose another war cry and throws another piece of concrete at the four conversing teenagers. Speedy, Robin, and Kid Flash all dive out of the way, but Aqualad remains firm. Taking out the concrete with twin maces. Speedy uses two arrows that stick to Brick's chest and release three spurts of flame to knock him back. Though the villain just chuckles. "Tell Arrow he shouldn't send boys to do a man's job." Speedy nocks another arrow taking aim. Brick stands tall, his arms out wide. "Go ahead." Speedy grinds his teeth as he shoots this arrow. Which hits and for a moment nothing happens, then foam releases from the capsule stuck to Brick and traps him in it.

Kid Flash skids to a stop crouched under Speedy's aim, just in case. "High-density polyurethane foam. Nice."

Speedy turns and walks away, but in order to fully get out of the docks, he needs to walk past Robin and Aqualad. Who stand on either side of two crates that create a path that will lead right out of the docks, if you know the way.

"So, Speedy, you in?"

"Pass." the oldest says strongly but does pause to give them the answer. "I'm done letting Arrow and the League tell me what to do. I don't need a babysitter or a clubhouse to hang out with the other kids. Your Junior Justice League is a joke." Aqualad stops leaning against the crate. "Something to keep you busy and in your place." Speedy growls looking right to Robin before walking off. "I don't want any part of it." All three can only watch as their oldest friend, and the one the three of them look up to not only turns it down but insults it as well. Then they turn to each other with shocked expressions.

------

Mount Justice; July 18th, 11:16 EDT

The Mount Justice Computer picks up the Zeta Tube usage, routing the users from North Carolina to the Mountain which the map shows in Rhode Island.

Recognize:

Robin; B-0-1,

Kid Flash; B-0-3.

Both boys appear in their civilian clothes. Smiling brightly, then running out of the Zeta Tube to the room they're connected to. Finding Miss Martian, Martian, Aqualad, and Superboy standing before a HoloScreen.

"Did you ask him?" Robin asks.

"What did he say?" Kid Flash follows up.

"He is arriving now." Aqualad tells the two of them as calmly as always.

Kid Flash friendly punches Robin in the chest. "Then what are we waiting for?" before running off, Robin follows close behind, and finally Aqualad and Martian. Leaving Miss Martian and Superboy, the redhead smiles at the clone as she puts her hands on her hips. Superboy turns, crossing his arms over his t-shirt before walking off. Miss Martian smiles and takes flight to follow the boys. They arrive at one of the entrances which is a ramp that falls down into the cave from the ground above them. All six walk up the ramp, as Red Tornado lands before them.

"Red Tornado!" Kid Flash calls out with a wave as the heroic android lands.

"Greeting." he offers. "Is there a reason you intercept me outside the cave?" his monotone voice makes it rather hard to discern the question portion of his sentence.

"We hoped you had a mission for us." Aqualad conveys to the hero.

"Mission assignments are the Batman's responsibility." Red Tornado states simply.

"But it's been over a week and nothing-" Robin tries, but is cut off.

"You'll be tested soon enough." the android states firmly. "For the time being, simply enjoy each other's company."

"This team is not a social club." Aqualad objects strongly.

"No," Red Tornado agrees. "but I am told social interaction is an important team-building exercise. Perhaps you can keep busy by familiarizing yourselves with the cave." Tornado says, walking past the six teens and into the cave.

All six can only watch as he does.

Kid Flash turns to Robin, punching him in the shoulder again. ""Keep busy"." the speedster nearly growls.

"Does he really think we're falling for this?" Robin questions angrily, catching Superboy's attention in his anger.

"Oh, I'll find out." Miss Martian says excitedly, then turns towards Red Tornado and her expression relaxes slightly.

Recognize:

Red Tornado; 1-6.

Miss Martian sighs. "I'm sorry, I forgot he's a machine, inorganic. I… cannot read his mind."

"I don't believe he ment anything negative with "keep busy", it is common teams to bond over friend activity. Often leading to increased performance." Martian states.

"I know a bonding exercise we can work on." Kid Flash looks up at Miss Martian with a flirtatious smile.

"Oh, shut up." Robin grumbles and elbows the speedster's turned back.

"Ow." he complains, but only seeming half-hearted about it.

"And now we tour the clubhouse." Aqualad says sourly.

"Well, Superboy, Martian, and I live here. We can play tour guides." Miss Martian offers, looking to the two boys.

Robin and Kid Flash instantly turn to Superboy and Martian. "Don't look at me." Superboy tells them seriously.

"I don't mind giving a tour. The cave is actually quite nice, with everything we could need." Martians Offers

"Nah. A private tour sounds so much better." Kid Flash says, looking to Miss Martian again.

"Sh- she never said private." Robin objects.

"Team building. We'll all go." Aqualad says, breaking up the argument before it can even start.

They all turn to go back down the ramp, but Robin grabs Kid Flash's arm and yanks him back.

"So, this would be our front door…" Miss Martian begins.

-----

"And this would be the back." Miss Martian continues as they come out on the other side of the mountain. "The cave is actually the entire mountain."

-----

"It was hollowed out and reinforced by Superman and Green Lantern in the early days of the League." Wally explains what he knows about the history of the mountain.

"Then why abandon it for the Hall of Justice?" Superboy questions.

"The cave's secret location was… compromised." Aqualad explains.

"So they traded it in for a tourist trap?" Superboy questions, confused. "Yeah. That makes sense."

"If the Bad Guys know of the cave, then we must be on constant alert." Miss Martian raises her hand in accentuation, thinking she's figured it out.

"The Bad Guys know we know they know about the place," Robin assures, grabbing her hand and turning her towards him, then putting his other hand on top of hers. "so they'd never think to look here."

"Uh," Kid Flash interrupts and removing Robin's hand from Miss Martian's. "he means we're hiding in plain sight."

"Ah, that's much clearer." Miss Martian still scratches her head, clearly still confused.

Superboy sniffs twice. "I smell smoke."

Miss Martian gasps. "My cookies." then flies down the hallway. Making it to the kitchen and removing said cookies, with telekinesis, before the boys can make it into the room. As she sets them down the boys enter the room, looking at the burnt-black cookies on the tray.

"I was trying Grammy Jones' recipe from episode 17 of-" she cuts herself off with an awkward chuckle. "Nevermind."

"I bet they'd have tasted great." Robin assures then looks back to the other three boys. "He doesn't seem to mind."

Surprised Miss Martian looks back up, finding Kid Flash eating her cookies.

With his mouth still half full and a burnt cookie in each hand, the teens can only watch in stunned silence. "I have a serious metabolism." he offers weakly.

"I'll… make more?" Miss Martian seems unsure how to take that comment.

"It was sweet of you to make any." Aqualad tells her.

"Thanks, Aqualad." Miss Martian says, ducking her head slightly.

"We're off duty. Call me Kaldur'ahm." he insists. "Actually, my friends call me Kaldur." he clarifies with very little hesitance.

"I'm Wally." Kid Flash speaks up, leaning on the island. "See? I already trust you with my secret ID, unlike Mr. Dark Glasses over here." Robin frowns and glares at Wally as he puts his hands on his hips, annoyed by the speedster's slightly accusatory tone. "Batman's forbidden Boy Wonder from telling anyone his real name."

"Mine's no secret." Miss Martian admits brightly. "It's M'gann M'orzz. But you can call me Megan. It's an Earth name, I'm on Earth now." she seems really excited about that fact.

"I talked with J'onn and he allowed me to take the name J'onathan J'onzz, or Jonathan. You may call me what you want. Just not late for dinner." Martian offered while trying to make a joke, and getting a laugh out of Kid Flash.

"Agreed" he laughs between eating his burnt cookies.

Superboy remains slouched against the counter, then turns to leave which catches M'gann's attention. "Don't worry, Superboy." she tells him telepathically.

The clone grunts in shock and his posture tenses, looking at the green-skinned redhead in shock and possibly a tiny bit of fear.

"We'll find you an Earth name, too." she continues, smiling kindly and totally unaware of what she's doing.

Superboy's grips his head for a moment. "Get out of my head!" he shouts, gaining the boy's attention in an instant. They all know what he does when he's angry, they look back to M'gann, a curious expression on their features.

"What's wrong? I don't understand." she says, expanding her telepathic range to include Kaldur, Wally, J'onathan, and Robin.

The three proteges react negatively to it. Robin physically grips his head with both hands, Kaldur turns away from M'gann closing his eyes and grimacing before finally putting his own hand to his head, while Wally brings his own hand to his forehead threading his fingers through his bright red hair, and Superboy's fists clench at his sides as he looks almost ready to pounce.

"Everyone on Mars communicates telepathically."

"M'gann stop." Kaldur commands anger clear in his voice. M'gann closes the link and looks confused and hurt, but listens to Kaldur. "Things are different on Earth. Here, your powers are an extreme invasion of privacy."

Attempting to lighten the mood Wally adds in his two cents. "Besides, Cadmus' creepy little psychic G-gnomes left a bad taste in his brain." saying the last part behind his hand as if that will stop Superboy from hearing him and as if it is some big secret.

"I- I didn't mean to-" M'gann tries.

"Just stay out." Superboy growls cutting her off, his eyes burning bright with rage as he walks into the adjoining room.

"How is it an extreme invasion of privacy? I understand the G'nomes left a bad impression on Superboy but she didn't go through anyone's mind." J'onathan asked in confusion. Even before in his old world he didn't understand that part of this scene.

"She is speaking directly into our minds, we didn't give her permission too." Kaldur explains.

"Yes, but she is essentially just speaking to you. She hasn't tried to read your mind or performed any other actual invasion of privacy." J'onathan responds.

"I understand why you would think that, as you are a Martian but-" Kaldur begins before J'onathan interupts "I may be a clone of Nartian Manhunter, but all of what i learned is from earth. The scientists had no access to any Martian history. I am speaking from a logical standing."

"Look man, it's just not cool." Kid Flash says in exasperation.

"Agreed" Kaldur says, with Robin nodding along.

"Alright, fine. I'm going to speak with Superboy, to check on him." J'onathan finally relents before following after him.

----

"Superboy, are you alright?" J'onathan asks as he walks towards the couch he is sitting on.

"Sure." He grunts in frustration. "I just dont want people in my mind.

"I understand. But I'm sure you understand she meant nothing by it right? It's apart of her culture." J'onathan explains slowly, getting a grunt in response.

"I'm not saying what she did was ok. But she meant no harm."

"Fine." Superboy is response. Though he looks less angry.

-----

"Hello, Megan!" Megan says it brightly, and loud enough that J'onathan and Superboy hear her, despite the fact that she hits her forehead with the heel of her hand. "I know what we can do."

She takes off flying, leaving the five boys to follow her. Wally turns to Robin who shrugs, but all five do follow her.

-----

Coming down the elevator they stop at the hangar. "It's my Martian BioShip." M'gann explains as the doors open. Leading the now curious boys towards a red oblong shape in the hangar.

"Cute." Wally offers. "Not aerodynamic, but cute."

"It's at rest, silly." M'gann smiles brightly, reaching her hand out. "I'll wake it." as she does the oblong turns into a shape recognizable as a ship. She even spins 180° with just a motion of her hand. A small staircase comes off the back, showing off some of the insides. She walks towards it but soon realizes the boys aren't following. "Well, are you coming?"

All five hesitate and board with nervous expressions. Once inside the front opens up to reveal a captain's chair and five more side chairs.

"Strap in for launch." M'gann tells them. Kid Flash and Robin exchange bright grins before sitting down.

As he does Robin goes to lean forward as the chair moves, eliciting a "whoa" from the stunned Boy Wonder. The chair reaches out and creates chest restraints that hold the thirteen-year-old in place.

Kid Flash sits down next now knowing what happens. "Cool." he tells M'gann.

"Red Tornado," M'gann says, sitting in the captain's chair. "Please open the bay doors."

As the bay doors open two control towers form by M'gann's hands.

Once open the BioShip flies out at impressive speeds, only to slow just above the surface of the water and begin a near 90° upward flight, before barrel rolling to face towards the mainland once more.

"Incredible!" Robin tells M'gann, more likely impressed with the responsiveness and her piloting skills than anything.

"She sure is…" Wally agrees, but is entirely focused on M'gann, once she turns towards does he realize what he said. "I- I mean the ship, which like all ships, is a she."

Robin is the first to point out Wally's crappy attempt at covering up what he said. "Fast with his feet, not so much with his mouth."

"Dude!" Wally yells, mostly embarrassed, but clearly still at least a little annoyed with the smaller raven.

Kaldur turns to Superboy. "I may not have psychic powers, but I can guess what you're thinking." Superboy looks at Kaldur out of the corner of his eye. "You overreacted and you don't know how to apologize. Just say sorry." Kaldur treats it as if this happens regularly around him. Superboy doesn't say anything, merely looking out at the view once more.

"He'll come around." Robin offers to M'gann, clearly knowing what the conversation between the two oldest- physically- members was about.

"He doesn't seem to like me very much." M'gann says sadly.

"You guys remember he has Super-Hearing," Wally interrupts, and proving his point by not bothering to whisper. "Right?" sure enough Superboy heard every word.

"Hey, how 'bout showing us a little bit of Martian Shapeshifting?" Robin asks, changing the topic. M'gann nods subtly, thanking him for the change, before stepping up and gaining the boy's attention as her clothes begin to change. Making her look like a feminine version of Robin, costume included. Catching Wally's smirk she turns into a feminine version of Kid Flash.

"Is it wrong that I think I'm hot?" Wally questions.

No one responds to him, and Robin applauds M'gann. "Impressive," she turns back into herself. "but you know you're not exactly going to fool anyone with those."

M'gann smiles softly as she sits down. "Mimicking boys is a lot harder."

"And your clothes?" the Atlantean questions.

"They're organic like the ship. They respond to my mental commands." M'gann explains, pulling on her jacket slightly.

"Can you do that ghosting-through-walls thing Manhunter does?" Wally asks.

"Density shifting?" M'gann questions, though her smile doesn't return. "No, it's a very advanced technique…"

Robin leans forward. "Flash can vibrate his molecules right through a wall." Then chuckles before gesturing to Wally. "When he tries it, bloody nose."

"Dude!" Wally snaps, annoyed that he would tell her that.

"Here's something I can do." M'gann says brightly, then the entire ship disappears from sight. "Camouflage Mode."

"On that note," Martian finally speaks up. "Miss Martian, can you send me all your experiences training your abilities? I can shapeshift but the rest of my abilities are coming to me slowly." Martian asks of her, hoping he can get a crash course on Martian abilities.

"Are you sure can handle that kind of mental load? That would be a lot of information being transferred between minds at once." She asks in concern.

"Yes, I believe I can. Plus who knows when I could need any of it." Martian replies.

"Hold on the." She says as she starts to concentrate. "Ready?"

"Go ahead." Martian affirms.

Immediately he groans from the sudden introduction of many foreign memories. With Superboy jumping up and yelling at M'gann, "What did you do to him!"

"Don't worry Superboy," Martian buts in with a groan. "I asked for this. Just give me a second to assimilate all the new information."

Of course, this is when Red Tornado calls in.

"Red Tornado to Miss Martian. An emergency alert has been triggered at the Happy Harbor Power Plant. I suggest you investigate covertly. I'm sending coordinates." all four are on high alert as the ship bings.

"Received. Adjusting course." M'gann says.

Robin scoffs. "Tornado's keeping us busy again."

M'gann replies optimistically. "Well, a simple fire led you to Superboy. We should find out what caused the alert." As she takes the BioShip down and mere feet above the surface of the parking lot.

Superboy turns out the side window. "I think I know the cause." he growls, right outside the BioShip is a tornado. Heading right for them. M'gann attempts to alter their course so as not to be swept up but is unsuccessful and the BioShip glitches out of Camouflage Mode as they get fully entangled in the tornado.

Trapped inside the tornado all of them hold on and grunt as the wind whips them around. M'gann manages to open her eyes and reorientate herself, as she does her brow drops in concentration and her hands firmly press on the control towers, illuminating them as she gets them out of the tornado and to the parking lot. Where Robin, Martian, Kid Flash, Miss Martian, Superboy, and Kaldur all drop out of a door created in the bottom of the ship.

------

As panicking plant works rush to escape, Aqualad calls out, "Robin are tornados common in New England?" 

Only to find him gone with Kid Flash muttering, "I hate when he does that."

An explosion draws the team's attention to the plant when Martian says, "Come on I'm sure he is in the thick of it." Before lifting off, flying towards the plant.

-----

Inside the Power Plant is a red and black exo-suit, with blue tubing running from his shoulders, up and to his lower back, and a brown scarf covering his mouth. Tornado-like funnels coming from each hand.

The funnels hit Robin directly and slam him into the support pillar nearly eight feet off the ground, then he falls to the ground.

The other members of the Team run in through the loading bay doors just in time to watch, with Superboy jumping the stairs to land beside Robin as the Boy Wonder sits up. "Who's your new friend?"

Robin looks to Superboy, grimacing at the motion. "Didn't catch his name," the clone jumps at the villain. "But he plays kinda rough." he finishes, warning the clone.

The exo-suit wearing villain stands ready, air pulses still coming from his wrists, though the bright blue tubing is now confirmed to be going to the tops of his wrists as well. "My apologies." he says, revealing his robotic tone. "You may address me as Mr. Twister."

Mr. Twister then throws both his hands up, creating two more tornadoes, which Superboy withstands, but before he can gain any more ground Twister redirects the tornado, grabbing Superboy before launching him into the wall, a good fifteen feet off the ground. As he hits the wall dents and he falls to the metal floor, unmoving.

Thats when Martian calls out, "Kid Flash, Aqualad, I have an idea come here." Once they are next to him he explains, "Draw his attention and get his back facing me."

"I shall see to it," Aqualad agrees readily. With Kid Flash complaining, "Who put him in charge?" Under his breath.

While they were running to the opposite side of the building with Kid Flash calling out insults and Aqualad throwing blasts of water at him Martian calls out again, "Superboy, come here. M'gann go help Aqualad and Kid Flash."

Turning to Superboy he starts, "I am going to pick you up and throw you as fast as I can at him. I can't sense a mind so go buck wild when you impact. I want him shut down quick. Ready?"

Superboy growls while nodding, "Good cause here you go." 

With that Superboy is thrown as fast as his telekinesis will let him. 

Superboy hits the unsuspecting villain with a hard punch to the kidney area, before hitting him hard in the head as he grabs the massive arm under his own and hitting him twice more in the back. Causing smoke to start coming out of the seams in the metal plates. Then he reels back, hits him straight in the face, knocking him into the ground with a plum of dust.

As the smoke clears the chest panel on the suit opens, revealing a man, about forty years old, medium-length brown hair in a green and white suit. He falls out of the exo-suit and to the ground. "Foul. I- I call foul." he stutters.

------

As the whole teams confronts the man, Miss Martian speaks up in confusion, "I cannot read his mind," With Martian stepping forward, "I believe he is also an android, Robin do you think you could get anything from him?"

"Hmm, Probably not but maybe Red Tornado could. I can always see though." Robin shrugs while pulling a cord from his wrist holo-computer.

"No need, no need," the man claims hold his hand up in surrender. "I'll tell you everything." At the end he starts to smile, slyly. Only to explode just a second later.

Luckily both Miss Martian and Martian managed to put up a telekinetic shield right before the blast.

"That was close, good thinking gorgeous." Wally says as he steps up and grabs one of the eyeballs. "Cool. Souvenir." flicking in so he can catch it in his fist as he looks to M'gann.

"That was a good plan Martian." Kaldur says with seriousness.

"Yeah, you rocked this mission." Wally agrees. "Though I could do without being told what to do."

As the android's eye turns red Robin mutters an "ignore him." then continues in a brighter tone, I say we head back to base and see if we can get anything from this." As he points to the destroyed pieces of Twister.

"Yeah and some food, I'm hungry." Wally replies.

-----

The live feed from the eye is transmitting to a lab. A man in a blue work suit stands before the screen and a scientist in a white lab coat steps up to him with a chuckle. "Now, Brom, aren't you relieved I didn't let you wear the armor?"

'Brom' turns revealing he is the one the android inside the exo-suit was based on. "Extremely, Professor," he admits shakily. "but you're not upset?"

"I'm convinced our tracking program was operational," this 'Professor' says, he's a taller, slightly tanner man than Brom, with black hair and a small mustache. "and that the real Tornado was somewhere in the vicinity. Besides you know science advances in fits and starts." Brom is still very tense. "Even failure can be instructive, and I'd say we learned quite a lot today."

-----

Inside Mount Justice, the Team is conversing with Red Tornado.

"It was clearly created to sabotage or destroy you." Kaldur tells the Leaguer.

"Agreed." Red Tornado says, looking over the pieces of the android and the computer readouts.

"We would like to help in following up on this." Robin starts.

"No." Tornado says simply. "I believe I should handle my own problems, just you all handled this on your own."

Robin and Wally stop their work getting ready to argue.

"But if you're in danger…" M'gann objects.

"Consider this matter closed." Red Tornado states then walks off.

"Batman, Aquaman, Flash, they'd all have jumped right in to fix things." Wally comments as they all stand to watch him go further into the mountain.

"Guess if we're going to have a babysitter, a heartless machine is exactly what we need." Robin says.

"Dude! Harsh." Wally hisses but doesn't object to it in any other way.

"And inaccurate." both boys stop dead. "I have a heart, carbon-steel alloy. I also have excellent hearing."

Robin forces out a nervous chuckle as. "Right. I'll strive to be... more accurate."

Kaldur grabs Robin's shoulder and brings the Boy Wonder's attention to him. "And more respectful."

Red Tornado says nothing more as he walks away, but M'gann stands at the entrance of the hall as the boys head to the dorm section of the Cave.

"Speedy was so wrong." Wally says happily. "This Team thing…"

"Might just work out." Kaldur agrees.

Superboy goes to follow but stops as he catches M'gann looking at him. He looks down with a small amount of concentration coming over his face before he looks back to her. "Sorry." then leaves.

M'gann smiles softly.

-----

So I hope this is a good enough start for leaving cannon behind. Don't worry the real start of ditching cannon is going to be in the next chapter, with the Santa Prisca mission. I actually have big plans for it, and where it will lead.

Also, shout out to SunnyD7 for pointing out a fantastic Young Justice fic on ff.net called "Assimilation" by Satire Swift. The only problem I have with it is one I have with most superhero stories in that the author doesn't seem to be able to make fights tough without making the MC always seem like he is on the losing end of every fight. It is hard to make a hero who isn't a Gary Stue but also doesn't lose so much that reading his story is pointless. I will strive for the balance but we shall see.


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