I Am Uchiha With A Son System

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Abdirahman_Isse

The author has eloquence of 10 year old, I mean just look at the synopsis

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MGSR_Sam

bro, if the comments are asking if this ff is a Chinese translation, you are doing everything wrong because �.9999 of Chinese novels are hot garbage reading the synopsis already caused me brain damage ffs.

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Ryughaa

Feel like A AI made this novel No depth No fight secenes Really short chapters Feels like a biography Barly any explanation this entire novel is just bland and the reason is everything the author adds is like oh here information take it no depth added to the story of how he got it Just a oh yea he killed his siblings for it could have had a fight secene there just isn’t anything that catch’s my eye this is just my opinion you don’t have to agree with me I was just saying what’s on my mind My advice is just to look at any novels that are in the top10 of a category be it fanfic or OG Analyses what they do for the interactions and how they introduce a character I feel like you aight with the understanding of how you need to put madara said or muttered Either way I hope you improve you have a outline already clearly I would just try improving it

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ZoroTraineeWriter

Hi author here, There are people who asked, is this translated version from chinese novel? Answer: its mine, not translated version. Eventhough you saw on my synopsis gundam susanoo. I just feel like it to put gundam susanoo instead of susanoo. Oh dont forget to support me on patreon

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Gabichu_Yeah

Finally an MC who makes changes in Konoha, many protagonists of other stories are only observers and do nothing, useless and lazy protagonists. Luckily in this story the MC is involved in improving Konoha and preventing people like Hiruzen and Danzo in the future.

SECOND REVIEW: Author eventually stops using ChatGPT to write after like 20 chapters or so which boosts the quality. This causes the quality of the book to fluctuate wildly, but the author gets huge respect from me for rejecting the lazy AI writing and giving his story the effort it deserves. Looking forward to more 👍

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YanSur

The writing is pathetically repeating same thing again and again. It's like a story written by a low quality ai bot.I mean if you don't have any idea of what to write at least don't repeat the same thing again and again

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Qwerttipper

This is even sadder that it is not a cn translation but instead written by the author himself. Seems like a typical Canon seeking mc who makes things happen in his Head Canon more than actual Canon as it is AU if it is not the og story. Also, why does he hide his mangekyo technique during the confrontation.

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sami_funges

Like a typical mtl novel, and almost no logic in it I'm not trying to bad mouth the book I can see that the author tried to put effort into it but there are to many plot holes and some things just don't make sense.

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First_Time_Anal

It’s pretty good but you just have to Work on the grammar but overall I like it[img=update]

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MoeruUchiha

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thesacredmenace

at chapter 16 now & it's a pretty good and interesting story, just hope it is not dropped...................................................................

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Xiaoyunyun

I have seen the idiots, I have seen crazy and I have seen people with brain rot but no amount of preparation or the unbelievable mental fortitude could prepare for this craziness. I seriously believe people who like this fanfic are the people with either absolute dog shit garbage taste and few screw loose or have no life and have lots of time in their hand. There is no in-between them. This is only logical conclusion I can come up with after reading 25 chapter. There is no word that can do justice to explain how dog shit criminally brain rot this is truly. After reading this shit my brain hurt like a hell and lost few of my brain cells. Read it at your discretion, you have been warned.🫵

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Daolord777

The concept of this story is great, an MC that takes control of shaping konoha into a proper powerhouse and prevent all the bad stuff grom happening is amazing. The execution of this is horrible however , the MC became suddenly brain dead and tobirama just pusted him from the center of power because he’s young . Overall i had to stop because I had a headache reading one chapter where he just became suddenly another person

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Kobus_Liebenberg_4211

It’s a ok story but it’s missing emotion in everything This story isn’t emotional in any way but more like a historical tale binge retold by the author and because of it, it’s a direct and emotionless story but it’s a ok story nonetheless I don’t recommend this story to those who are looking for a emotional story at all

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Hamid_Djafri

Hello how are you thank you very much for the chapter yes more chapters come on come on more chapters come on come on

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Haze_Smoking

This fanfic have a potential, however the update is to slow and the words have only 350-450 words to short

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Dio_The_Sage

not bad to pass time on. the early chapt quality is quite bad but it gets better.