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Hi! I am the author of this book and I am here to shamelessly shill my work. First of all, I want to write something different. I love Harry Potter and his magical adventures, and I loved The Jungle Book as well. I am a fan of Mark Twin so you can imagine how much I love adventure. You will be able to see a mix of modern mystery solving, magic, sorcery, love-hate-jealousy themes, jungle adventures, magical beasts and spirits, and so many more. Be ready to discover the lost memory of the protagonists and be shocked. There will be some military and espionage action as well. You will enter a dark world manipulated by devils that look like humans. Their evil plans will send a shiver down your spine. Betrayal, royal romance, and so many other things remain unexplored. If you, dear readers, read and support this work, it will inspire me a lot. So, please, give it a try. I would love to know how you feel about the story. Please leave a comment as well!!! Thank you!
This is quite intriguing. The mysteries from the beginning just made me so curious about a lot of things. The boy and the little girl's connection. I am so curious to what is happening between those two. Curious to find out more and loving the story. Keep up the good work.
It's pretty interesting so far. I enjoy the world building along with the great detail and description in all the scenes. The intro of the little girl was interesting too and sets up a lot of intrigue.
The story is excellent and will hook the reader to read more. Writing, characters and grammar are all good, so keep it up author.
This story has excellent writing, consistent updates, and a nice creative story. At the moment, the names stand out for distinctness. The use of vocabulary is impressive. With that being said, I'd like to see a bit more visual description in terms of environment and the characters look like. My advice to every writer when making a story like this is to remember to have a child-like state of imagination where you can capture people's hearts and minds without getting stuck in the weeds. With that being said, I recommend this story. To the writer, I welcome you to read and analyze my fanfic "Avatar: Lingering Tensions". It is a sequel to "Avatar: Macai's Journey" however, reading the 1st chapter of AMJ could give you some basic context if you are unfamiliar with the storyline.
I’m speachless. There are little to no mistakes, it’s smooth and addictive. It’s easy to imagine the action and enviroment. Great Pacing! I love how everything unfolds with no force/rush. I took liking in Suho, she is truly a well written character! Good job author, I Recomend it 10/10!
I was a bit confused with the switching back and forth of perspectives at first but the further I read the more I got to like the story. Not that far along yet but aside from a few things I enjoyed it. Keep it up!!
A very unique setting with remarkable world-building. I have to say that this story is too underrated(but I do believe it will be more appreciated in the near future). I'm not familiar with this genre but I was quickly entranced by the beguiling narration from start to end. [img=recommend]
A very unique setting, not many jungle books that are of this quality on webnovel, the writing is stellar, with easy to understand descriptions and characters that feel alive with the dialogue weaved together by the author!
An interesting plot with well-paced worldbuilding. Keep up the great work, author! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
synopsis is Great btw . Great story👌👌👌🥰🥰! I love the background, the descriptive writing, as well as the entertaining and enjoyable plot. This novel really has potential.🥰🥰🥰🥰
Okay, in terms of writing, everything is quite good. The sentences are very diverse, so it doesn't get too boring to read. The writing style is well-organized, although there are some parts that could be improved. The depiction of events, locations, and settings is well-written. However, what might make this novel less appealing is the slow pace in finding calming or WOW scenes, and perhaps you could promote your novel more. Because in terms of writing quality, it's already good. Keep writing this novel and strive to improve!
I was sold on the synopsis. The premise is interesting and I characters have substance. I believe, given the premise, your novel will rely on the world building and development a lot so I hope you will keep put thoughts on that area. Keep up the good work.
The story had an interesting jungle setting, and the characters were curious. It was a bit confusing at times, but I wanted to know what happened to the kids. The connection between them kept me curious.
This book is something I really enjoy reading. Why? Because why not. The unique people, plot, adventure and the mystery that grips the readers right from the start and the connections by are subtly hinted by the Author making things more interesting and more mysterious, it makes one want to read and find more about it. The writing quality of the Author is also really good and you won't regret it one bit. I recommend it.
This book is very well written not only with its writing quality but also with its story and character development. It is a hidden gem that contains a great story and a well crafted world building. Keep up the good work, Author.
Phenomenal writing, spellbinding story, well-crafted characters, this is a one-in-all package! Loved it so far and interested to read more in the future.
Hi! I am the author of this book and I am here to shamelessly shill my work. First of all, I want to write something different. I love Harry Potter and his magical adventures, and I loved The Jungle Book as well. I am a fan of Mark Twin so you can imagine how much I love adventure. You will be able to see a mix of modern mystery solving, magic, sorcery, love-hate-jealousy themes, jungle adventures, magical beasts and spirits, and so many more. Be ready to discover the lost memory of the protagonists and be shocked. There will be some military and espionage action as well. You will enter a dark world manipulated by devils that look like humans. Their evil plans will send a shiver down your spine. Betrayal, royal romance, and so many other things remain unexplored. If you, dear readers, read and support this work, it will inspire me a lot. So, please, give it a try. I would love to know how you feel about the story. Please leave a comment as well!!! Thank you!
This is quite intriguing. The mysteries from the beginning just made me so curious about a lot of things. The boy and the little girl's connection. I am so curious to what is happening between those two. Curious to find out more and loving the story. Keep up the good work.
It's pretty interesting so far. I enjoy the world building along with the great detail and description in all the scenes. The intro of the little girl was interesting too and sets up a lot of intrigue.
The story is excellent and will hook the reader to read more. Writing, characters and grammar are all good, so keep it up author.
This story has excellent writing, consistent updates, and a nice creative story. At the moment, the names stand out for distinctness. The use of vocabulary is impressive. With that being said, I'd like to see a bit more visual description in terms of environment and the characters look like. My advice to every writer when making a story like this is to remember to have a child-like state of imagination where you can capture people's hearts and minds without getting stuck in the weeds. With that being said, I recommend this story. To the writer, I welcome you to read and analyze my fanfic "Avatar: Lingering Tensions". It is a sequel to "Avatar: Macai's Journey" however, reading the 1st chapter of AMJ could give you some basic context if you are unfamiliar with the storyline.
I’m speachless. There are little to no mistakes, it’s smooth and addictive. It’s easy to imagine the action and enviroment. Great Pacing! I love how everything unfolds with no force/rush. I took liking in Suho, she is truly a well written character! Good job author, I Recomend it 10/10!
I was a bit confused with the switching back and forth of perspectives at first but the further I read the more I got to like the story. Not that far along yet but aside from a few things I enjoyed it. Keep it up!!
A very unique setting with remarkable world-building. I have to say that this story is too underrated(but I do believe it will be more appreciated in the near future). I'm not familiar with this genre but I was quickly entranced by the beguiling narration from start to end. [img=recommend]
A very unique setting, not many jungle books that are of this quality on webnovel, the writing is stellar, with easy to understand descriptions and characters that feel alive with the dialogue weaved together by the author!
An interesting plot with well-paced worldbuilding. Keep up the great work, author! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
synopsis is Great btw . Great story👌👌👌🥰🥰! I love the background, the descriptive writing, as well as the entertaining and enjoyable plot. This novel really has potential.🥰🥰🥰🥰
Okay, in terms of writing, everything is quite good. The sentences are very diverse, so it doesn't get too boring to read. The writing style is well-organized, although there are some parts that could be improved. The depiction of events, locations, and settings is well-written. However, what might make this novel less appealing is the slow pace in finding calming or WOW scenes, and perhaps you could promote your novel more. Because in terms of writing quality, it's already good. Keep writing this novel and strive to improve!
I was sold on the synopsis. The premise is interesting and I characters have substance. I believe, given the premise, your novel will rely on the world building and development a lot so I hope you will keep put thoughts on that area. Keep up the good work.
The story had an interesting jungle setting, and the characters were curious. It was a bit confusing at times, but I wanted to know what happened to the kids. The connection between them kept me curious.
This book is something I really enjoy reading. Why? Because why not. The unique people, plot, adventure and the mystery that grips the readers right from the start and the connections by are subtly hinted by the Author making things more interesting and more mysterious, it makes one want to read and find more about it. The writing quality of the Author is also really good and you won't regret it one bit. I recommend it.
This book is very well written not only with its writing quality but also with its story and character development. It is a hidden gem that contains a great story and a well crafted world building. Keep up the good work, Author.
Phenomenal writing, spellbinding story, well-crafted characters, this is a one-in-all package! Loved it so far and interested to read more in the future.