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there are parts that are often hard to read. it is like confusing but you don't know why.if you look pass that, the Fan-fic has a potential.
This is a good story, slow and funny with a hint of seriousness. ........................................................ ...........................
Good characters, exciting story, interesting background, Mc abilities? Well enough this time, there's even Laura the daughter of Wolverine! Soooooooo Verryyy Goood
The story is exciting and interesting, makes you laugh and is a little emotional, the plot is quite slow, but I prefer something like this, the MC is kind but firm, affectionate and gentle but sometimes very fierce, quite charismatic, quite a lot because of what is shown, although it seems more takes the comic side compared to the film, but overall it's good.
This is poor. I don't see any potential that others talk about. You'd think that with it being a Diablo fan-fic the author would be somewhat of a nerd and think things through but nope. So much stupidity within the first 6 chapters, it is astounding. To begin with, the author makes Natasha immediately expose that she is a SHIELD agent and then somehow Natasha loses all her braincells and starts screaming how she is a SHIELD agent and that the MC has to help her secretly investigate a criminal, in a public restaurant. And then when the MC refuses, Natasha threatens to arrest him and spouts some other BS. When the MC questions whether she is really from SHIELD, Natasha for some reason refuses to show proof, despite her shouting it from the rooftops. Finally, Phil steps in and as Natasha leaves, the MC has his dogs/wolves assault Natasha and then threaten them while forcefully detaining them that unless they pay up they can't leave, and he'll sue them for abuse of power, threatening etc when he has 1) Threatened officers 2) Forcefully detained the officers 3) Wants to extort money from the officers and 4) Assaults said officers. There was also mention of adding the charge 'Threatening pets of civilians' after Phil took out a gun when Natasha was assaulted by said animal. Like sure MC could sue but not only would it not go anywhere now, he'd also be made into a criminal and jailed for at least a decade. Like what? This novel has no potential when the author can't even use his brain to make a reasonable plot interaction between SHIELD and the MC. If you do plan to read ahead, switch off your brain Oh yea, they also introduce a bunch of characters and just expect you to know them without and introduction beforehand. Some of them are obvious, like Matt, but then there are ones like Dalia and Jessica. It was then later mentioned, in chapter 6 that Jessica was mind controlled by Killgrave so she was confirmed as Jessica Jones but prior to this there was no indication to who she is despite being a waiter at the MC's restaurant. Not saying this is a bad thing, but when you introduce a character and make her important only to not say anything about her for 4 chapters, it kinda signifies that you can't introduce characters at all. As for Dalia, all I know is that she takes care of some girls who come into the country and help them escape to other cities.
Revelar spoiler Every week, 10 New Chapters will be added on Patreon! For just 3 Dollars, you can access chapters that are far ahead of others! You can enjoy 10 chapters every week! Far ahead of Webnovel! For just 3 Dollars, you can access and enjoy chapters that are far ahead! Thank you to those who have subscribed on Patreon!
there are parts that are often hard to read. it is like confusing but you don't know why.if you look pass that, the Fan-fic has a potential.
This is a good story, slow and funny with a hint of seriousness. ........................................................ ...........................
Good characters, exciting story, interesting background, Mc abilities? Well enough this time, there's even Laura the daughter of Wolverine! Soooooooo Verryyy Goood
The story is exciting and interesting, makes you laugh and is a little emotional, the plot is quite slow, but I prefer something like this, the MC is kind but firm, affectionate and gentle but sometimes very fierce, quite charismatic, quite a lot because of what is shown, although it seems more takes the comic side compared to the film, but overall it's good.
This is poor. I don't see any potential that others talk about. You'd think that with it being a Diablo fan-fic the author would be somewhat of a nerd and think things through but nope. So much stupidity within the first 6 chapters, it is astounding. To begin with, the author makes Natasha immediately expose that she is a SHIELD agent and then somehow Natasha loses all her braincells and starts screaming how she is a SHIELD agent and that the MC has to help her secretly investigate a criminal, in a public restaurant. And then when the MC refuses, Natasha threatens to arrest him and spouts some other BS. When the MC questions whether she is really from SHIELD, Natasha for some reason refuses to show proof, despite her shouting it from the rooftops. Finally, Phil steps in and as Natasha leaves, the MC has his dogs/wolves assault Natasha and then threaten them while forcefully detaining them that unless they pay up they can't leave, and he'll sue them for abuse of power, threatening etc when he has 1) Threatened officers 2) Forcefully detained the officers 3) Wants to extort money from the officers and 4) Assaults said officers. There was also mention of adding the charge 'Threatening pets of civilians' after Phil took out a gun when Natasha was assaulted by said animal. Like sure MC could sue but not only would it not go anywhere now, he'd also be made into a criminal and jailed for at least a decade. Like what? This novel has no potential when the author can't even use his brain to make a reasonable plot interaction between SHIELD and the MC. If you do plan to read ahead, switch off your brain Oh yea, they also introduce a bunch of characters and just expect you to know them without and introduction beforehand. Some of them are obvious, like Matt, but then there are ones like Dalia and Jessica. It was then later mentioned, in chapter 6 that Jessica was mind controlled by Killgrave so she was confirmed as Jessica Jones but prior to this there was no indication to who she is despite being a waiter at the MC's restaurant. Not saying this is a bad thing, but when you introduce a character and make her important only to not say anything about her for 4 chapters, it kinda signifies that you can't introduce characters at all. As for Dalia, all I know is that she takes care of some girls who come into the country and help them escape to other cities.
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