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Eu estou vivendo um milagre, alguém sabe me dizer porque está sendo lançada tantas novels boas com Ben10? Antes eu procurava não achava 1 Cristo.
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Author here, just wanted to ask readers what are some of the expectations for this fanfic, and what are some elements that need improvement on. Should I make each chapter longer, or do you find the spacing slow. If so please leave a comment down below.
I'm going to be honest I like this a lot dude keep going you got this man do not leave this behind you're doing all right dude I believe you're going to do good
I don't have to say what many have already expressed about this fic [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
please I need more oh and I love your work I hope you have bright and wonderful life your fan from south Africa
The MC is probably a bigger threat than the Hulk in this story and S.H.I.E.L.D. treats him as if he were a 5-year-old, very bad protagonist dumb and weak both physically and mentally
I can't believe it's so hard to find a Ben 10 fic in marvel that's at least so-so, they're all bad and this is no exception, a very silly and manipulable protagonist who thinks he's a genius and is dumber than a rock
Dumb MC. Claims to be genius but gets easily bullied and threatened. Gets easily subdued by so called monkeys and got stripped naked . Very poor character and story development.
MC is a cuck, shield tranquilized him and locked him up, and he just got up and helped them, like what kind of brain dead MC is this? does the author have no self respect
Mc just got attacked and contained in a cell and then he starts cooperating with them as nothing happened
I am sorry I try to be positive but your making the MC a push over. if you didn't do that this story will be better if you fix it I am sure it will get more better reviews.
You are doing well, I can more or less get what you trying to convey form your writing but not all readers have the patience to understand the words. Try to flesh out the Mc's thoughts and emotions a bit. A sentence here and there. Trust me, it will work wonders. As for the progress of strength I am satisfied. The bashing is that Mc just made a Omake joke while Sheild assaulted him and made him uncounsiouss and literally tried to steal Omnitrix. So without, Ben's thoughts on matter, the scene will look he is a pushover.
Honestly Disappointing Most MCU and Ben 10 crossover just portray Ben as weak willed guy and depowering him more than he was in the original series. The fic started strong but the moment things got real the MC just folded........ But the author gave a note and some explanation about it so I will hold on my further judgement for this fic and give it a second chance. I really the author has some good reasoning.
Revelar spoiler Manipulable protagonist with no backbone who literally assaults him and takes his things and he shows no sign of disgust or anger, simply pathetic [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
A dumb and weak MC who is easily manipulated [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
everything is good the only problem is 1 chapter per week you upload that's really frustrating might as well start a patreon so i can read it other than that it's a good Fanfic just upload chapters more
Eu estou vivendo um milagre, alguém sabe me dizer porque está sendo lançada tantas novels boas com Ben10? Antes eu procurava não achava 1 Cristo.
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Author here, just wanted to ask readers what are some of the expectations for this fanfic, and what are some elements that need improvement on. Should I make each chapter longer, or do you find the spacing slow. If so please leave a comment down below.
I'm going to be honest I like this a lot dude keep going you got this man do not leave this behind you're doing all right dude I believe you're going to do good
I don't have to say what many have already expressed about this fic [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
please I need more oh and I love your work I hope you have bright and wonderful life your fan from south Africa
The MC is probably a bigger threat than the Hulk in this story and S.H.I.E.L.D. treats him as if he were a 5-year-old, very bad protagonist dumb and weak both physically and mentally
I can't believe it's so hard to find a Ben 10 fic in marvel that's at least so-so, they're all bad and this is no exception, a very silly and manipulable protagonist who thinks he's a genius and is dumber than a rock
Dumb MC. Claims to be genius but gets easily bullied and threatened. Gets easily subdued by so called monkeys and got stripped naked . Very poor character and story development.
MC is a cuck, shield tranquilized him and locked him up, and he just got up and helped them, like what kind of brain dead MC is this? does the author have no self respect
Mc just got attacked and contained in a cell and then he starts cooperating with them as nothing happened
I am sorry I try to be positive but your making the MC a push over. if you didn't do that this story will be better if you fix it I am sure it will get more better reviews.
You are doing well, I can more or less get what you trying to convey form your writing but not all readers have the patience to understand the words. Try to flesh out the Mc's thoughts and emotions a bit. A sentence here and there. Trust me, it will work wonders. As for the progress of strength I am satisfied. The bashing is that Mc just made a Omake joke while Sheild assaulted him and made him uncounsiouss and literally tried to steal Omnitrix. So without, Ben's thoughts on matter, the scene will look he is a pushover.
Honestly Disappointing Most MCU and Ben 10 crossover just portray Ben as weak willed guy and depowering him more than he was in the original series. The fic started strong but the moment things got real the MC just folded........ But the author gave a note and some explanation about it so I will hold on my further judgement for this fic and give it a second chance. I really the author has some good reasoning.
Revelar spoiler Manipulable protagonist with no backbone who literally assaults him and takes his things and he shows no sign of disgust or anger, simply pathetic [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
A dumb and weak MC who is easily manipulated [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
everything is good the only problem is 1 chapter per week you upload that's really frustrating might as well start a patreon so i can read it other than that it's a good Fanfic just upload chapters more