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A primordial entity who is a fan of human creations has decided to create an alternative reality to correct certain mistakes made in the writing of his favorite secondary characters. Here he will try to create a different Jacob from the pitiful puppy of the original films to give him the direction that he deserves.
I don't own any main characters from this franchise except two or three characters that I'm going to create. The cover picture is not mine and I hope the author doesn't come after me and kill me for borrowing it. This fanfiction is an English version of the one posted on my second account which is unfortunately inaccessible now. English is not my first language so there will definitely be syntactic mistakes so bear with me.
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Escribe una reseñaFrom one author to another, you have my appreciation. Short but fulfilling, well executed, not boring at all, keep writing you are a natural, you should also do an original story.
So he remains a simp, always jumping hoops for Bella and the Cullens. Loses the girl he loves twice. Fights his brothers for the Cullens, and still imprints on Renesmee.... He's an even bigger simp than canon.
Vamos lá, a história é boa se você ignorar as inconsistências da trama, mas tirando isso é muito bom para uma leitura rápida.
another fantastic story, just wow. characters, suspense, twists all somehow crammed into 20 chapters. this story is an excelent read even if you don't love the twilight franchise
Gostei muito do livro, foi uma nova experiencia. Não existe muitos livros que seja continuado igual ao desse autor Espero que continue com o magnifico trabalho, e continue a melhorar cada dia mais.
absolutely unreadable dialog. makes no sense sound like AI. the idea is good but he sitll seem like hes simping for bella.
My Respect i think that was one of the best Twilight fan-fics that i have read and i have read many so Readers Twilight Lover WHO want a different end for Jacob read this it May Not be for all people but many will Love it
ughhhh, the kind of story goes.with script-pt like format. and more talking less doing, cant work.my imagination throughly, though writings are alright, characters.show.emotion... just.that it lacks details... bit still.its.good though
Thanks for the story. ......................................... I enjoy it!! ......................................... Eternity is the End! Love it!
Autor The3Entities
Good one, but I demand Justice for Grammar...