Naruto: Chronicles of a Fire Ninja

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FirstHokage

hey guy, here is images of our main characters, I hope you guys will like it these are images of there childhood i will also update there matures form images but when story has progressed till some point /**** Please leave a review about your experience in review or comment section : D *****/ kaida

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FirstHokage

hey guy, here is images of our main characters, I hope you guys will like it these are images of there childhood i will also update there matures form images but when story has progressed till some point /**** Please leave a review about your experience in review or comment section : D *****/ KOMI

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ARSENAL_101

if he is a senju then why is he living in an orphanage????

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DaoistHGUhHf

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The_Best_3329

Really everything was fine until the mc got emotionally blackmailed into accepting another girl. It’s really disappointing. Even the relationship with the other girl is really flat and is just nice to read or to be ignored. And no one ever come at me with strong people alwys have many girls around them. Every strong ninja in Naruto has 1 wife. Was good until chap 54 even tho it was basically a training montage

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Rowan_Wild

Alright this is actually a decent fanfic. No system, no ludicrous wish fulfilment nonsense. There are a few flaws though. The first is that you obviously do not proofread. The second is that your attention to standard writing rules is half assed : You do not start your sentences with capitals, you write numbers with symbols instead of letters. Lastly, sometimes it gets a little too much with other’s reaction of the main character deeds. Many times I have found myself half sighing/cringing when I read Hiruzen thinking "how is he this good oh my god 🥵🥵". No. He is Hiruzen Sarutobi, he has seen Jounin level seven year-old before and all kind of prodigees through his decades of kagedom. Get that fixed, and your story will level up in quality greatly. I wish you the best !

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ChibiPanda65

Love the story and thanks for updating so frequently Also this is what I’m imagining the mc looks like when he gets older

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Efe_Kaymak

I tried to read this book but it became too much for me this book isn’t even about mc himself.. that oc girl is like tail of the mc every single chapter you describe every move of the mc with her, like they went to sleep they trained together bla bla. There is no character development at all. not worth it

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PaTTeS

Logically, the novel is progressing in a manageable way for now. The only problem is that the girl next to the MC can somehow keep up with him. And the girl has no special lineage. It's uploaded almost every day. The average episode length is neither too short nor too long.

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Jerlyn_Wilfred

The work of this fic is nice and really good to read. As a suggestion, It would be awesome to have more interaction with the Rookie 9.

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RealBanana19

The MC is not edge lord and thank god it is not a system novel. Book is good. Atleast Give it a try before passing judgement. My first issue is pacing. The pacing is too fast paced and stabilized somewhere around 50 chapters. Hope author continues it that way otherwise it feels like watching a YouTube video on 4x speed. Second issue is main characters are training day in and day out. There is not enough break. From readers POV it would too overwhelming as they are productive every chapter posted. To offside it, show how MC and similar are interacting like going outside doing something entertaining etc. it kinda takes readers mind off but the transition should be organic. MC is becoming too OP too fast. Even without system cheats MC is becoming OP too fast. Better make the MC settle for sometime and make readers adjusted. Naruto is a story which takes more chapters to fully explore. So it is best if author takes it slow and explores more. Author specific:- If you are serious about writing this fic, Try to look in reddit sub threads for novels with high intense fight narration. It might help writing more flushed out fight scenes. Fight scenes are the bread and butter of Naruto fic. The story premise would be same for all the thousands of fics but if you want your fic to stand out you need to bring in more to the table. Overall it is 4 out of 5. Let me know about the criticism author if you have read the review.

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Lartz

I very much enjoyed the story and the pace though I feel like it could go faster in parts slower in other but overall a great piece so far keep up the good work

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Crypthh

It is a good story I like everything about it apart from the harem part I really think he should only stay with Yomi or it will ruin the story

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behind_your_sister

One of the best Naruto fanfic!!!!!!💓💓💓💓💓💓

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Jude_Ovie

Great book and nice concept especially with the transformation jutsu and the updates are also steady. nice work author

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flim062

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daremetochoosemyna

I don't feel much about anything in this moment. I added to library so its worth reading. It's kind of different narufic. No insta sharingan or wood release. I don't give much for world background in fanfics until authors go for some new places or absolutely reimagine existing places. Rest is fine. I will come back later for update if things go west or south. Good luck.

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Alexx_Sejas

The truth is that I read until chapter 58, the story doesn't bother me that it's slow, but I'm surprised that until this chapter they still haven't solved so many gaps or gaps in the previous chapters. I missed a lot more background and details in the first chapters, for example his early graduation or his relationship with secondary characters. I ignored some things to continue reading but I realized that this is a fic with nice words "to pass the time"

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No_One_1398

The novel is basically a poorly executed ‘Wind Calamity’, with a senju as the MC, borderline unreadable sentences, poor interpunction and spelling, and average grammar. The character is, well, bland, he doesn’t, in my opinion, differ from your average isekai MC. Didn’t read long enough to see any innovative interpretations of the shinobi world, but a ‘canon accurate’ version still deserves 4 stars.