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I'll be honest, the plot is all over the place. It has an interesting concept, but not well executed. The main reason for that in my option is the introduction of too many new characters and franchise each chapter. There isn't enough time for the already introduce characters to flesh out. The MC's system is interesting but the plot ruins it.
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This fic has good potential! especially it is my first time seeing a fanfic about Detroit:Become Human, hopefully the author also included my other anime&manga series like Fate,Oshi no Ko and etc
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As an author, I feel compelled to give my own fanfic a five-star review. The story weaves together numerous anime series, resulting in a rather chaotic world due to the multitude of series integrated into it. Expect elements from Honkai Impact, Sword Art Online, and others. Also, it's worth mentioning that my motivation for writing this stems from being inspired by a top-tier fanfic from my home country. It's so well-written that I'm confident it would gain immense popularity if translated into English.
sometimes less is more, but oftentimes the crazier the merrier ... this fic is the later. it feels like the author added one or two works in each chapter.
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I'll be honest, the plot is all over the place. It has an interesting concept, but not well executed. The main reason for that in my option is the introduction of too many new characters and franchise each chapter. There isn't enough time for the already introduce characters to flesh out. The MC's system is interesting but the plot ruins it.
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This fic has good potential! especially it is my first time seeing a fanfic about Detroit:Become Human, hopefully the author also included my other anime&manga series like Fate,Oshi no Ko and etc
TA bueno,y pus ya esperaré más caps para rellenar las letras que faltan.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
As an author, I feel compelled to give my own fanfic a five-star review. The story weaves together numerous anime series, resulting in a rather chaotic world due to the multitude of series integrated into it. Expect elements from Honkai Impact, Sword Art Online, and others. Also, it's worth mentioning that my motivation for writing this stems from being inspired by a top-tier fanfic from my home country. It's so well-written that I'm confident it would gain immense popularity if translated into English.
sometimes less is more, but oftentimes the crazier the merrier ... this fic is the later. it feels like the author added one or two works in each chapter.