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hello author can you please continue this story it will be sad if a story like this end up being dropped / disconnected
this fan fiction is quite good. I only watch marvel Cinematic universe and still enjoy this novel very much. Shame author got some writer block. Hope he will come back soon.
Udh fix bintang 5 no debate, masterpiece!!!!!!!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This has to be one of the best fan fiction with tony Stark as mc reincarnated
Спасибоолслслсл лслсш шшш шслсшсш лскиктктктктктутутутутутутутутутутутут р р иутуиуиуиур р р р р о р иутуиуиуиур р р р р р р о о о о о т т о
It was really good for me till MC adopted Rocket and the rest, i mean it came out of nowhere, and the scene where they appear and you have Rocket(the most broody MCU character ever) call Tony "Dad" is just the cringiest and weirdest thing ever
Revelar spoiler
Very good, Managed to explore Tony Stark's power, The harem is alive and has personality. Very good, Managed to explore Tony Stark's power, The harem is alive and has personality.Very good, Managed to explore Tony Stark's power, The harem is alive and has personality.
The one thing I complain about this was that the songs were not to my taste everything else is like the best. One of the best development ff with consequences to mc actions and he is not the type of mc which is too op or not too op it's like his development is at the perfect for solving the situation. He is not at all solo and has no exaggerated trust issues like most mc out there in ff. This ff is a total recommended gold no.. precious as a infinity stone in this galaxy hahahahaha and no this is not an alt acc of the author for exaggerating this much
🥹👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Just read all the current chapters, and my verdict is it's quite good.. keep up the good work and don't go AWOL
Great Story, do not trash talk it, you do not like it.? just stop reading and move on,no need to be Toxic about it.
the story's ok n all, I just don't like light heroes and the rocket the 3 extras and sylvie part just ruined it more and more, i actually liked this before the rocket as his son part.
This story is one of the best Tony Stark Reincarnation story. I liked the story very much. Good work. Keep it up. 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
One of best work based on the marvel universe i have read so far and hope to continue this for a long long time.
Nothing new. Literally feels like a better translated Chinese fanfic. Has all the usual tropes like: - All of MCs plans and ideas easily falling into the place. Nothing can ever go wrong.- MC collecting women like Pokemon.- Women falling in love with MC in less than a day and behaving completely out of character. 😑
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Ugh sorry dude, this Tony Stark isn't to my taste. At least I like the development of the technology and Mc doesn't waste his time. It's just that the problem with this fanfic is the romance (a planned and strange harem) and too many time skips. I stopped reading when Tony Stark met the Ancient One and he called her "wife" and was sure Tony loved her very much. Come on, seriously, bro, do you like bald women who are hundreds of years old?? Very unreasonable. That's all!!
Author plain sucks at romance, pacing and story. The only reasson I read is for women.Everything else sucks, he could have taken his time, and build everything slower and better, instead the Author wants to jump to modern MCU era as soon as possible. I rather he started in 2005+, he would still have had time to invent technology, get women, and would have been much closer to Author's goals.
what can I say about this story hmm let's see first of all first you chapter are quite rush so that about it and author also say that if he write the story then he will text there problem so with that it conclude.and after that I just read first volume of the novel and truth be told this is one of the best Iron man (or aka Tony Stark) portrait by any other authors so that's a big pointand author also goes out of this way to create some elements like multiverse and " what fi " so that's an activity point of a story.and that's all but if I have any request for author is please make Tony a little Arabic so the overall the Iron Man will be complete.according to other where is volume 2 and here will be the start of Canon events in Marvel so we ready to see what the author will do with the story so stay with the story and see bay~😉
Harem. Harem.Harem. Harem.Harem. Harem.Harem. Harem.Harem. Harem.Harem. Harem.Harem. Harem.Harem. Harem.Harem. Harem.Harem. Harem.Harem. Harem.Harem. Harem.Harem. Harem.Harem. Harem.Harem. Harem.Harem. Harem.
Poorly written. Pacing is all over the place and feels like speed running plots rather than telling them. As a result, everything feels so shallow and superficial
hello author can you please continue this story it will be sad if a story like this end up being dropped / disconnected
this fan fiction is quite good. I only watch marvel Cinematic universe and still enjoy this novel very much. Shame author got some writer block. Hope he will come back soon.
Udh fix bintang 5 no debate, masterpiece!!!!!!!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This has to be one of the best fan fiction with tony Stark as mc reincarnated
Спасибоолслслсл лслсш шшш шслсшсш лскиктктктктктутутутутутутутутутутутут р р иутуиуиуиур р р р р о р иутуиуиуиур р р р р р р о о о о о т т о
It was really good for me till MC adopted Rocket and the rest, i mean it came out of nowhere, and the scene where they appear and you have Rocket(the most broody MCU character ever) call Tony "Dad" is just the cringiest and weirdest thing ever
Revelar spoiler Very good, Managed to explore Tony Stark's power, The harem is alive and has personality. Very good, Managed to explore Tony Stark's power, The harem is alive and has personality.Very good, Managed to explore Tony Stark's power, The harem is alive and has personality.
The one thing I complain about this was that the songs were not to my taste everything else is like the best. One of the best development ff with consequences to mc actions and he is not the type of mc which is too op or not too op it's like his development is at the perfect for solving the situation. He is not at all solo and has no exaggerated trust issues like most mc out there in ff. This ff is a total recommended gold no.. precious as a infinity stone in this galaxy hahahahaha and no this is not an alt acc of the author for exaggerating this much
🥹👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Just read all the current chapters, and my verdict is it's quite good.. keep up the good work and don't go AWOL
Great Story, do not trash talk it, you do not like it.? just stop reading and move on,no need to be Toxic about it.
the story's ok n all, I just don't like light heroes and the rocket the 3 extras and sylvie part just ruined it more and more, i actually liked this before the rocket as his son part.
This story is one of the best Tony Stark Reincarnation story. I liked the story very much. Good work. Keep it up. 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
One of best work based on the marvel universe i have read so far and hope to continue this for a long long time.
Nothing new. Literally feels like a better translated Chinese fanfic. Has all the usual tropes like: - All of MCs plans and ideas easily falling into the place. Nothing can ever go wrong.- MC collecting women like Pokemon.- Women falling in love with MC in less than a day and behaving completely out of character. 😑
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Ugh sorry dude, this Tony Stark isn't to my taste. At least I like the development of the technology and Mc doesn't waste his time. It's just that the problem with this fanfic is the romance (a planned and strange harem) and too many time skips. I stopped reading when Tony Stark met the Ancient One and he called her "wife" and was sure Tony loved her very much. Come on, seriously, bro, do you like bald women who are hundreds of years old?? Very unreasonable. That's all!!
Author plain sucks at romance, pacing and story. The only reasson I read is for women.Everything else sucks, he could have taken his time, and build everything slower and better, instead the Author wants to jump to modern MCU era as soon as possible. I rather he started in 2005+, he would still have had time to invent technology, get women, and would have been much closer to Author's goals.
what can I say about this story hmm let's see first of all first you chapter are quite rush so that about it and author also say that if he write the story then he will text there problem so with that it conclude.and after that I just read first volume of the novel and truth be told this is one of the best Iron man (or aka Tony Stark) portrait by any other authors so that's a big pointand author also goes out of this way to create some elements like multiverse and " what fi " so that's an activity point of a story.and that's all but if I have any request for author is please make Tony a little Arabic so the overall the Iron Man will be complete.according to other where is volume 2 and here will be the start of Canon events in Marvel so we ready to see what the author will do with the story so stay with the story and see bay~😉
Harem. Harem.Harem. Harem.Harem. Harem.Harem. Harem.Harem. Harem.Harem. Harem.Harem. Harem.Harem. Harem.Harem. Harem.Harem. Harem.Harem. Harem.Harem. Harem.Harem. Harem.Harem. Harem.Harem. Harem.Harem. Harem.
Poorly written. Pacing is all over the place and feels like speed running plots rather than telling them. As a result, everything feels so shallow and superficial