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horrible translation and it's mix of every popular anime ever..too messy
I just want to left a review even though i rather bored with the story, maybe it's because i already read many kinds of fanfiction. This novel is good, you can try it but for me its missing some impact that make me want to read it again and again
An interesting and very unique story, the portrayal of the characters is somewhat strange but good, yes, this is a pretty good story, the writing style is not the best, but it is decent compared to beginners in general, it can be said that this can still be developed, and worth reading!
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quickly made the mc seem narcissistic, made him overly tall like 7' just so girls find him attractive , and started adding bits from Chinese novels
So far this fanfic can be considered "almost perfect". This is due to the quality of the script and how this league of universes can be built.
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nice novel . I have a request can you promote my novel " dragon shall roar " i will be very grateful .
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it's a fun and interesting story with a cool MC. Sometimes it's unclear who the person speaking is and occasional spelling errors but overall I would recommend.
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Author, your story is gold! keep it up! as the saying goes "grant me daily-chapter and i'll grant you daily-power(stones)". Extra chapters? Extra power(stones).
Good System and good world building. The characters are also has interesting interaction with MC. Thanks for the fanfic
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Interesting setting, and the grammar is okay, not too amazing but not too shaby. I look forward to the story building author, god speed.
Besides the wuxia talk which is annoying its a good read. Grammer is more or less good.
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my dad told me not to talk to strangers...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I shall wait for this fanfic to have more chapters for now... Later shall I see if this is worth the wait or not. Here's some random memes
Xxxxxxxx i like this novels and I am not sure if you have any questions or concerns please visit the plug-in settings in the year and I am not sure if you have
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it's a great story! the only thing that bother me is the update stability. Sure, it's okay, but with this kind of great story, i can't help myself to hopes for more chapter! It's not enough! plz Author! (ofc, if that's your limit then don't force yourselves, it'll bring harm for your health. And it'll be bad for us readers too)
Legalzin........................................ Legalzin........................................ Legalzin........................................ Legalzin........................................
horrible translation and it's mix of every popular anime ever..too messy
I just want to left a review even though i rather bored with the story, maybe it's because i already read many kinds of fanfiction. This novel is good, you can try it but for me its missing some impact that make me want to read it again and again
An interesting and very unique story, the portrayal of the characters is somewhat strange but good, yes, this is a pretty good story, the writing style is not the best, but it is decent compared to beginners in general, it can be said that this can still be developed, and worth reading!
Работа класс, затягивает и хочется продолжение прочитать по скорее👍👍👍 С наступающим всех!🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄🥂🥂🥂🥂🥂🥂🥂🥂🥂🥂🥂🥂🥂🥂🥂🥂🥂🥂🥂🥂
quickly made the mc seem narcissistic, made him overly tall like 7' just so girls find him attractive , and started adding bits from Chinese novels
So far this fanfic can be considered "almost perfect". This is due to the quality of the script and how this league of universes can be built.
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nice novel . I have a request can you promote my novel " dragon shall roar " i will be very grateful .
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it's a fun and interesting story with a cool MC. Sometimes it's unclear who the person speaking is and occasional spelling errors but overall I would recommend.
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Revelar spoiler Author, your story is gold! keep it up! as the saying goes "grant me daily-chapter and i'll grant you daily-power(stones)". Extra chapters? Extra power(stones).
Good System and good world building. The characters are also has interesting interaction with MC. Thanks for the fanfic
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Interesting setting, and the grammar is okay, not too amazing but not too shaby. I look forward to the story building author, god speed.
Besides the wuxia talk which is annoying its a good read. Grammer is more or less good.
original, original, original, original original, original, original, original original, original, original, original original, original, original, original original, original, original, original original, original, original, original original, original, original, original original, original, original, original
my dad told me not to talk to strangers...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I shall wait for this fanfic to have more chapters for now... Later shall I see if this is worth the wait or not. Here's some random memes
Xxxxxxxx i like this novels and I am not sure if you have any questions or concerns please visit the plug-in settings in the year and I am not sure if you have
Revelar spoiler 
it's a great story! the only thing that bother me is the update stability. Sure, it's okay, but with this kind of great story, i can't help myself to hopes for more chapter! It's not enough! plz Author! (ofc, if that's your limit then don't force yourselves, it'll bring harm for your health. And it'll be bad for us readers too)