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Ok the story is actually good ,the characters are great,i see nothing wrong with it ,the only thing that’s questionable is the author’s taste in women (it’s sucks a**)but hey I don’t care,as long as she has good character then that’s fine.
hey author this is a good novel and why the heck are you not posting more ch for 2 months please author post a minimum of 5 to 6 ch a week this novel has good potential just plz don't ruin it
Minha expectativa para essa fanfic era muito baixa, mas essa fanfic se mostrou surpreendente interessante, espero que o autor volte a postar. ........................................................
Ok... i must say im F impressed. I read all the current 55 chapters in 2 days. All categories have 5 stars. Nothing to whine about or things to improve comes to mind. The ONLY BUT is that lemons are short and barely detailed. We need good lemons. Not ecchi enough. Also they can have segs inside the dungeon for a month straight with no consecuences. He just gotta bring a bed there and check if they can sleep on it without leaving the dungeon. Its also a good idea to construct a proper house there with handmade shower and bring some food to eat something once in a while.
one of the best dxd fanfic . waiting for more chapters ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯.
Muito bom muito obrigada. Por favor não desista e continue. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] Ele irá compartilhar a falna com Rias e Sona?
This is not a review just want to ask a question then will write proper one if its mh kind of novel. Will there be any yuri in this not a fan?
Okay, I've just read the first chapter, and it is a good start, the story looks primising and the protagonist looks likeble to me, though the story description need improvements, like a lot, otherwise you risk people not giving a chance because of it.
bro iIlike this novel very much with julis being female lead but please don't add Sona into harem plz iIthink u can add inori she is atleast better
Liked it. The writing is good I just hope there’s no harem even tho theirs that tag. I’d like it if it was just him and Julis.
I like the concept of the lottery wheel but getting his tickets seems pretty tough. 100(common)=1(uncommon), 100(uncommon)= 1(rare) and so on only for him to roll some mediocre gear at uncommon and an app that makes him use 100 more common tickets to get rid of 1 scar. still really enjoy it so far just hope it's either not such a grind in the future or he finds a very efficient way to grind up to at least epic.
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A good story, but endeed the waifu was super Op. I would like to see the development of the character in a comming future. Also it would be interesting how the MC explors the dungeon and how his SG of DD would react about his host. It´s gonna be interesting the development of the main heroin also.
The story is quite exciting and the MC becomes quite strong easily, that's predictable and acceptable because of the system. Power scaling is still not clear because mc's power is based on the falna of danmachi. Lv2 is the weakest level of strength in the supernatural world and it is still unknown what level the strong people are in dxd.
I don't know why you didn't have julis join mc for the dungeon raids it's a miss opportunity to really accelerate their bond and trust for each other Life and death situation will create unshakable bond between the two. also I think mc should ask Julis' opinion more have them be more a partner really I really don't want her to be just a trophy wife do something like have the mc ask on what should he get from the store, creating training programs together etc. And them remembering their bodies' past memories felt cheap. Everything else is fine
Revelar spoiler
Everything’s good but what makes no sense is his lengendary pull. A waifu summoning card but pulled a (at most) uncommon green waifu, then to make matters worse she was NERFED from an Uncommon green to a Common grey, now you need to remember he got this from a LEGENDARY pull. The choices went from ALL the True magics from fate to a waifu summoning Thats not even legendary. Even the epic pulls made no sense, Mc’s first epic pull went from the doujutsu’s from naruto to which in all honestly should’ve been blue to a falna from danmachi which should’ve been green at least. Then his next epic pull was which in all honestly shouldn’t even be a pull at all was the merging of his original world with the DxD world. Something that could’ve happened when he was struck by lightning. The writing is good. The characters are good. Everything is good except for the things i just listed off.
The Dragon GOAT? Real romance and characters that feel genuinely refreshing to read with a fun concept? I read current chapters too fast. Take my 5 stars, I'm begging you!
"My armor is like tenfold shields, my teeth are swords, my claws spears, the shock of my tail a thunderbolt, my wings a hurricane, and my breath death!" ~ A True Dragon
I give ⭐⭐⭐⭐, it may change when it exceeds 50 chapters. I haven't read it yet but hopefully this story won't be one of the ones left out. ............... ........ . . .
What a great day gentlemen, I will finally have some hope of updates, I'm looking forward to the next chapters.
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Ok the story is actually good ,the characters are great,i see nothing wrong with it ,the only thing that’s questionable is the author’s taste in women (it’s sucks a**)but hey I don’t care,as long as she has good character then that’s fine.
hey author this is a good novel and why the heck are you not posting more ch for 2 months please author post a minimum of 5 to 6 ch a week this novel has good potential just plz don't ruin it
Minha expectativa para essa fanfic era muito baixa, mas essa fanfic se mostrou surpreendente interessante, espero que o autor volte a postar. ........................................................
Ok... i must say im F impressed. I read all the current 55 chapters in 2 days. All categories have 5 stars. Nothing to whine about or things to improve comes to mind. The ONLY BUT is that lemons are short and barely detailed. We need good lemons. Not ecchi enough. Also they can have segs inside the dungeon for a month straight with no consecuences. He just gotta bring a bed there and check if they can sleep on it without leaving the dungeon. Its also a good idea to construct a proper house there with handmade shower and bring some food to eat something once in a while.
one of the best dxd fanfic . waiting for more chapters ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯.
Muito bom muito obrigada. Por favor não desista e continue. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] Ele irá compartilhar a falna com Rias e Sona?
This is not a review just want to ask a question then will write proper one if its mh kind of novel. Will there be any yuri in this not a fan?
Okay, I've just read the first chapter, and it is a good start, the story looks primising and the protagonist looks likeble to me, though the story description need improvements, like a lot, otherwise you risk people not giving a chance because of it.
bro iIlike this novel very much with julis being female lead but please don't add Sona into harem plz iIthink u can add inori she is atleast better
Liked it. The writing is good I just hope there’s no harem even tho theirs that tag. I’d like it if it was just him and Julis.
I like the concept of the lottery wheel but getting his tickets seems pretty tough. 100(common)=1(uncommon), 100(uncommon)= 1(rare) and so on only for him to roll some mediocre gear at uncommon and an app that makes him use 100 more common tickets to get rid of 1 scar. still really enjoy it so far just hope it's either not such a grind in the future or he finds a very efficient way to grind up to at least epic.
Revelar spoiler A good story, but endeed the waifu was super Op. I would like to see the development of the character in a comming future. Also it would be interesting how the MC explors the dungeon and how his SG of DD would react about his host. It´s gonna be interesting the development of the main heroin also.
The story is quite exciting and the MC becomes quite strong easily, that's predictable and acceptable because of the system. Power scaling is still not clear because mc's power is based on the falna of danmachi. Lv2 is the weakest level of strength in the supernatural world and it is still unknown what level the strong people are in dxd.
I don't know why you didn't have julis join mc for the dungeon raids it's a miss opportunity to really accelerate their bond and trust for each other Life and death situation will create unshakable bond between the two. also I think mc should ask Julis' opinion more have them be more a partner really I really don't want her to be just a trophy wife do something like have the mc ask on what should he get from the store, creating training programs together etc. And them remembering their bodies' past memories felt cheap. Everything else is fine
Revelar spoiler Everything’s good but what makes no sense is his lengendary pull. A waifu summoning card but pulled a (at most) uncommon green waifu, then to make matters worse she was NERFED from an Uncommon green to a Common grey, now you need to remember he got this from a LEGENDARY pull. The choices went from ALL the True magics from fate to a waifu summoning Thats not even legendary. Even the epic pulls made no sense, Mc’s first epic pull went from the doujutsu’s from naruto to which in all honestly should’ve been blue to a falna from danmachi which should’ve been green at least. Then his next epic pull was which in all honestly shouldn’t even be a pull at all was the merging of his original world with the DxD world. Something that could’ve happened when he was struck by lightning. The writing is good. The characters are good. Everything is good except for the things i just listed off.
The Dragon GOAT? Real romance and characters that feel genuinely refreshing to read with a fun concept? I read current chapters too fast. Take my 5 stars, I'm begging you!
"My armor is like tenfold shields, my teeth are swords, my claws spears, the shock of my tail a thunderbolt, my wings a hurricane, and my breath death!" ~ A True Dragon
I give ⭐⭐⭐⭐, it may change when it exceeds 50 chapters. I haven't read it yet but hopefully this story won't be one of the ones left out. ............... ........ . . .
What a great day gentlemen, I will finally have some hope of updates, I'm looking forward to the next chapters.
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Great story so far, like the concept behind the story.