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It was just awesome. I haven't read this for a long time. I recommend it to everyone. Just a cannon [img=exp][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать]
MC is a complete cuck. Dude watched his girl get f*cked and took her back the next chapter 😭
I liked reading your story, buuut I didn't like how the romance progressed and the power level isn't Claire enough to scale the individuals.
way too obsessed with a Rebekah and the why the power level work makes no since
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Decent but still at the start so hard to tell. But a unqiue approach from all the other tvd fanfics. A bit hardcore at times on the oc but it's not tat bad, idk why everyone is so upset about it because to me its still okay. Yes, i hate it but still its okay for the story.
the story was going well until the part where he died , and it just became terrible. The time with freya and Dahlia wasn't great, but it was understandable, but the Rebecca part after just destroyed the story for me. i saw no reason of having it there if nothing was going to change except make the mc arrogant and stupid. to the writer, good luck. i know everyone has different tastes. im sure you will have people who will enjoy it.
The story had a good start. The mystery behind what the MCs power would be kept me intrigued for the first few chapters. Unfortunately, the reveal was nothing more than disappointing. I definitely won't sit here and act like Harry Potter magic would ever stand a chance against the beasts that exist in TVD. The magic that was already in the show was very strong, and Harry Potter stuff is a huge downgrade if it isn't changed. The MC can do things "just because" where it makes no sense. Like I stated in one of my comments, a vampire would kill him before he could react, just like what originally killed him. I only gave it anything above a 1 star because the writing quality is good, and the initial interactions sort of made sense.
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Story is pretty good the Harry Potter incorporation is truly great well done to the author on that front. Only problem I have with the story is Chapter 17 after Mc suffered an insuferable amount of trials to reunite with his lover, he finds her in the act with another man. Something rather normal as he was believed to be dead for thousands of years but the fact that the author decided to flesh out the s*x scene when Mc x Rebeccah s*x scene was left to readers imagination left to be desired. It makes me believe either the author enjoys seeing Mc suffer or is a c*ck. I truly despised that chapter and would recommend anyone reading this story to completely skip it. As it is simple cause for unecessary heart ache. But a scene doesn’t define a story as a whole so the story is still worth reading as long as you skip/rush over chapter 17.
The Story isn't bad and i like the whole Wizard concept. The only dislike is he's creepy obsession with Rebekah like this dude didn't even touch other women because he felt guilty for betraying Rebekah even though a Thousand of years have passed. All the while she pretty much jumped from relationship to relationships over a thousand years. I mean she thought he was dead so it's fair, but the fact he acts so pathetic it's honestly a huge turn off.
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what about Rebekah cheating with marcel like brooooo and now suddenly its all forgiven make her PAY like what happened to ' ALWAYS AND FORVEVER'
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This is actually good. It start out as a bit eh but after a while it's actually good. Just be patient it will be okay............................
Pretty good. Seems all these little kids are crying over a girl who’s not even real because she had a relationship with someone else when she thought her lover was dead. It’s pathetic really, I couldn’t imagine crying because the MCs girl couldn’t stay faithful 1,000 years after his death
It was just awesome. I haven't read this for a long time. I recommend it to everyone. Just a cannon [img=exp][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать]
MC is a complete cuck. Dude watched his girl get f*cked and took her back the next chapter 😭
I liked reading your story, buuut I didn't like how the romance progressed and the power level isn't Claire enough to scale the individuals.
way too obsessed with a Rebekah and the why the power level work makes no since
Revelar spoiler Decent but still at the start so hard to tell. But a unqiue approach from all the other tvd fanfics. A bit hardcore at times on the oc but it's not tat bad, idk why everyone is so upset about it because to me its still okay. Yes, i hate it but still its okay for the story.
the story was going well until the part where he died , and it just became terrible. The time with freya and Dahlia wasn't great, but it was understandable, but the Rebecca part after just destroyed the story for me. i saw no reason of having it there if nothing was going to change except make the mc arrogant and stupid. to the writer, good luck. i know everyone has different tastes. im sure you will have people who will enjoy it.
The story had a good start. The mystery behind what the MCs power would be kept me intrigued for the first few chapters. Unfortunately, the reveal was nothing more than disappointing. I definitely won't sit here and act like Harry Potter magic would ever stand a chance against the beasts that exist in TVD. The magic that was already in the show was very strong, and Harry Potter stuff is a huge downgrade if it isn't changed. The MC can do things "just because" where it makes no sense. Like I stated in one of my comments, a vampire would kill him before he could react, just like what originally killed him. I only gave it anything above a 1 star because the writing quality is good, and the initial interactions sort of made sense.
Revelar spoiler Story is pretty good the Harry Potter incorporation is truly great well done to the author on that front. Only problem I have with the story is Chapter 17 after Mc suffered an insuferable amount of trials to reunite with his lover, he finds her in the act with another man. Something rather normal as he was believed to be dead for thousands of years but the fact that the author decided to flesh out the s*x scene when Mc x Rebeccah s*x scene was left to readers imagination left to be desired. It makes me believe either the author enjoys seeing Mc suffer or is a c*ck. I truly despised that chapter and would recommend anyone reading this story to completely skip it. As it is simple cause for unecessary heart ache. But a scene doesn’t define a story as a whole so the story is still worth reading as long as you skip/rush over chapter 17.
The Story isn't bad and i like the whole Wizard concept. The only dislike is he's creepy obsession with Rebekah like this dude didn't even touch other women because he felt guilty for betraying Rebekah even though a Thousand of years have passed. All the while she pretty much jumped from relationship to relationships over a thousand years. I mean she thought he was dead so it's fair, but the fact he acts so pathetic it's honestly a huge turn off.
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Revelar spoiler what about Rebekah cheating with marcel like brooooo and now suddenly its all forgiven make her PAY like what happened to ' ALWAYS AND FORVEVER'
Revelar spoiler This is actually good. It start out as a bit eh but after a while it's actually good. Just be patient it will be okay............................
Pretty good. Seems all these little kids are crying over a girl who’s not even real because she had a relationship with someone else when she thought her lover was dead. It’s pathetic really, I couldn’t imagine crying because the MCs girl couldn’t stay faithful 1,000 years after his death