One Piece : Luffy is Exposed

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Drako_0692

Of the worst plots the Chinese could come up with, they really have a serious problem with deities and systems, well considering their politics it's obvious.

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Erik_Ramsey

I liked it a lot so I thought instead of waiting i'll go and read the mtl. That was a terrible mistake, the story is good but you'll get a heart attack reading it, so I suggest waiting for the translator to slowly update it as it is much better

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Mr_mysterio

This story has nothing that can be salvaged apart from the translation, yet its plot is terrible. and ridiculous.................................

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Zetsway

I think the author watched a short You Tube video about One Piece and deemed himself an expert. Also, making people aware of betrayals has 0 consequence and characters forget things from one paragraph to the next. An example of this is the Screen shows Nami with the Straw Hats in the Grand Line, yet Arlong isn't even bothered. Maybe he's like "I'm sure that the girl I've enslaved for 10 years left peacefully with that crew capable of killing every singe one of my crewmates in one strike. No need to bother her now."

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DomikPonchiKa

a very intriguing start to the work, I hope the translation won’t be abandoned (I used Google Translate) [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Lizrock

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DaoistP7eWN9

good novel I hope you will continue it and not stop writing this novel............................................................................................

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Skanda_Ganti

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Ceruses

A nice and chill story to read when u just want to have a fun time and nothing to serious. [img=recommend]

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Resident_Daoist

Everything, except Writing Quality and Character Design is a 3. It's a translated novel with a plot that could be best described as a multi-level, reality-breaking reaction video. If you want a story that you can immerse yourself in, this isn't for you, but if you want a somewhat fulfilling/funny story, then this may be for you.

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Riryz

Its decent. Its obviously a chinese translation. A lot of stuff that makes no sense. For example traveling between places takes almost no time for some reason. Also the broadcast just arbitrarily stops and starts for no reason. (shows a couple of fights in succession but then suddenly stops when Luffy travels for a day to rescue a crewmate.) TLDR: Decent chinese translation but turn of your brain when it comes to plot/logic.

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Pedro_Ricardo_1032

Para quem gosta de FanFiction de reação , essa e muito boa. Praticamente é um reação das maiores lutas dos mugiwaras. To gostando bastante, a reação ta sendo bem fiel até. E a ideia do quiz foi muito boa

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Puff_puffmarsh

I like this story of how the character of one piece reacting to luff's fight or journey this is a very interesting story keep up the good work 👍

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Roboute_Gilligan

Amo one piece jejeje asi que me gusta el fanfiction asi gracias por todo xD Jeje je bueno espero con ansias la siguinte pelea y las reacciones de los personajes principales

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Lizrock

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Muhamby

I dont Get What the story is about? Is luffy mc? Who released the system? Was it the mc? I need to know something about the story if u wanna read it..

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Alice_Lima_3781

I can't wait for gear 5 to appear and everyone's reaction

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AnimeLuv328

Arigatou gozaimasu for the update. I wonder how they'll react if Luffy obtained Gear 5th? Am excited for more updates. I wonder if this WebNovel has any other characters React?

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Rizki_Caturianto

It's a great and interesting One Piece fanfiction!! I like it!!! 😍😍 It have a great and interesting storyline/plot, but the translate/english is quite bad (I still understand what it means).. I like that it show Luffy fight, but doesn't that make it a bit different with original story.. Like Zoro come to Luffy in Dawn island (what happen to Coby, Shell Town, etc).. And then Luffy, Zoro, and Nami go to Syrup Village for Ussop (what about Orange Town and Buggy).. I think there few miss about story.. Like Nami hometown is Cocoyashi Village not Orange Town,, it was just Nami who go to God land in Skypea (She go there alone with waver while everyone meet Conis and Pagaya), etc.. But overall it's an interesting and quite good story.. I love it 😍😍 Keep up the good work author san 😁👍👍