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The overpowered tag is a lie. For being a serial reincarnator, dude is pathetic. Author also doesn't mind nerfing him, on top of him already being far too weak. Dxd isn't a joke. If he's that weak to not even reach ultimate class in 15 years(with his so called 9 lifetimes experience), he should wash his neck to later on offer it to the exe gods. Just my honest opinion .
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overall it's good. The only reason i'm bored with this is the lack of interaction with OG DxD characthers. Especially with Rias and Akeno... dude, give them some love will ya? Anyway, good luck, author
This novel is goated. Even tho I didn't know abt all the characters since I haven't watched DxD (tried to but even the first 2 episodes were too shitty), the author still explains everthing. Even tho the Harem is too big for my liking, atleast the MC cares for them as individuals rather than object. The author should limit the harem. However, that's just my own opinion. The novel's still pretty good.
Hate the MC personality, so dropping. ...............................................................................................................
Well I'm only giving this low rating because this story has cultivation, which is just a stupid way of getting power, you start at king kong level then to progress to the next one you need to sit still at the pinnacle of Mt Dickinson for years just to reach Hong Kong level and unlock some stupid heaven defying technique that no matter how long its name is it still can be parried by a piece of underwear if you want.
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absolute gem 💎 the way author has represented this story is unique to say the least i haven't enjoyed reading fanfics this much before tbh it didn't felt like a fanfic either the depth and unique elements author has introduced are really something else ✨
I’m so happy that this is back. Absolutely love this story. The last month without it was agonising. If you’re thinking about reading this, I fully recommend it.
A Great read 😵💫😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😵💫😎😵💫😎😵💫😎😎😵💫😎😎😎😎😵💫😵💫😎😎😵💫😵💫😎😎😵💫😎😵💫😵💫😎😎😵💫😵💫😎😎😵💫😎😎😵💫😎😵💫😎😎😵💫😎😎😵💫😵💫😎😎😵💫😎😵💫😵💫😵💫😵💫😵💫😵💫
I am gonna keep it short, character design- it seems closer to the original but I am no expert in the characters of the shows involved as it's been a long time since I have watched the OG of respective shows, so take that as a grain of salt, story Developement? awesome along with the plot as you might have found the synopsis of this book interesting, so is the rest of the book- mainly focused on drama, but there is a fair share of smut and action along with individual progress... World background? Yup, awesome...Writing quality? well in the later chapters, more specifically in some chapters you will find that the use of AI is obvious, but overall I am not against AI as it's very hard to know in this case, it's probably master4th writing most of part and using ai to enhance it which is completely fine, in fact, people should use it to make more time for actual story elements... Overall, it's a banger as master4th delivers yet again, this is my favourite story of all of his works, I have read his TCG and HSV(Half)... that's it
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This story is one of the best I have ever read.The concept of always reincarnating having an immortal soul is innovative although you have implemented it in your other story as well, the multiple personalities are also interesting, especially that of the venerable One In my opinion this story is wonderful and the only bad thing is that some parts are not clearly understood when I use the translator. I read this in Spanish because I don't understand English, but it's c fault of the translator and not the author, I complain for pleasure xD
this entertained me more than I hope for. mix world make it kinda hard to navigate but it's so well placed that made the story more interesting. Highly Recommended😍✊ Oh and also this has lemons too 😋
Love it............................................................................................... plz change the cover
This is one of the Masterpieces, even by the standards of Master4thwall. The MC is knowledgeable, powerful, manipulative, cunning, caring and wise. What more do we need from a MC. The story flows wonderfully with each arc being planned and author has added his original elements which enhances the the World Building by a LOT. I had 1000 more words to describe it but I will stop for now. So just go and read it.
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This is an amzing fanfiction. Main character is very interseting given he has lived many lives. My only concern is that please don’t make this fanfic into power creep.
Well, what i can say. Masterwall is one of my favourite authors on webnovel im reading his books, for a long time since his first fanfic. And i really like all of them. Writing quality is like always very good, when you read this book you feel like you are on smooth sailing ship, and you know that this trip will give you a lot of joy, and pleasent ending. Story development is very interesting a lot of characters get their stories so much extended, and from mere boring prototypes from original they get their unique abilities. Main character is cool too, he is experienced and you feel it, his powers improve steadily, and power system is very intersting too, cant wait to see his future development. Updates are very frequent, and you dont forget anything, world background is very nice too, DxD has very intersting concept of the world unlike main character who is really hateful. So in conclusion, i can say that anybody who is reading fics on this app should try this story, and see for himself did he like it or not. But im giving it 5/5. Sorry, for bad grammar, because english is not my main language
I had read for the first 20 chap the story is good good backgrounds and starting point and good depiction of other characters except MC the character development you want for MC do not feed in MC Background for excample he have been reincarnated for several time that's mean he is old the older you are the wiser you became but I do not see any of it you have to consider the character development before your story timeline started the feeling is feel when I see MC is any other teenage boy that have knowledge beyond his age that's all i do not feel his vast amount of experience of living for milinia
The story development is kinda annoying. And the mc is cringe( not the entertaining one) the savings grace(to me) is the diverse fml from different anime that i like
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Honestly, at first it looked interesting to see the MC's development and a fresh plot like "Samsara", but still, has the MC forgotten his true personality? I mean oh come on it's just Mai Sakurajima, what's so special about her? The man who had influence over millions of worlds in a universe was so tempted about the idea of having a girl in his Harem like that someone who is so frustrated, he even says bad things about MC and MC remains normal, whereas when he is with others he might get very angry. That made me wonder about "Aqua"'s personality, in my opinion, MC's personality in his 9th life was probably much better than the current MC.
Mehn, I wanna give a better review and I tried so much to keep reading but I can't. The first few chapters were fine and all, but nothing after that matched the premise of what we had before. I believe that there is a good balance between choosing your character traits, making claims and fulfilling those claims. The Mc was shown to be one with his own morality. Not good nor bad. Aiit, bet, less than 20 chapters forward, we get a chapter where he is battling with morality choices and thinking. Of course one can say that, the MC is getting character development, but the reason was wack, there was no reason. Emotional depth in the story is almost non existent. Mc has lived multiple lives and has fought countless foes, but his statements are annoying before a fight. "This fight might be tough", that guy is powerful, next thing, the opponent is dead, no difficulty or anything. That kills the whole reading experience mehn. Also, conversation are annoying in this book. Not only is there no depth, there's a annoying type of conversation that happens. Good things tho are the pics. like fr, the pics are hot 🥵 but nothing again. I stopped at ch 60 and could not continue again and even getting to ch 60 was a stretch.
The overpowered tag is a lie. For being a serial reincarnator, dude is pathetic. Author also doesn't mind nerfing him, on top of him already being far too weak. Dxd isn't a joke. If he's that weak to not even reach ultimate class in 15 years(with his so called 9 lifetimes experience), he should wash his neck to later on offer it to the exe gods. Just my honest opinion .
Revelar spoiler overall it's good. The only reason i'm bored with this is the lack of interaction with OG DxD characthers. Especially with Rias and Akeno... dude, give them some love will ya? Anyway, good luck, author
This novel is goated. Even tho I didn't know abt all the characters since I haven't watched DxD (tried to but even the first 2 episodes were too shitty), the author still explains everthing. Even tho the Harem is too big for my liking, atleast the MC cares for them as individuals rather than object. The author should limit the harem. However, that's just my own opinion. The novel's still pretty good.
Hate the MC personality, so dropping. ...............................................................................................................
Well I'm only giving this low rating because this story has cultivation, which is just a stupid way of getting power, you start at king kong level then to progress to the next one you need to sit still at the pinnacle of Mt Dickinson for years just to reach Hong Kong level and unlock some stupid heaven defying technique that no matter how long its name is it still can be parried by a piece of underwear if you want.
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absolute gem 💎 the way author has represented this story is unique to say the least i haven't enjoyed reading fanfics this much before tbh it didn't felt like a fanfic either the depth and unique elements author has introduced are really something else ✨
I’m so happy that this is back. Absolutely love this story. The last month without it was agonising. If you’re thinking about reading this, I fully recommend it.
A Great read 😵💫😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😵💫😎😵💫😎😵💫😎😎😵💫😎😎😎😎😵💫😵💫😎😎😵💫😵💫😎😎😵💫😎😵💫😵💫😎😎😵💫😵💫😎😎😵💫😎😎😵💫😎😵💫😎😎😵💫😎😎😵💫😵💫😎😎😵💫😎😵💫😵💫😵💫😵💫😵💫😵💫
I am gonna keep it short, character design- it seems closer to the original but I am no expert in the characters of the shows involved as it's been a long time since I have watched the OG of respective shows, so take that as a grain of salt, story Developement? awesome along with the plot as you might have found the synopsis of this book interesting, so is the rest of the book- mainly focused on drama, but there is a fair share of smut and action along with individual progress... World background? Yup, awesome...Writing quality? well in the later chapters, more specifically in some chapters you will find that the use of AI is obvious, but overall I am not against AI as it's very hard to know in this case, it's probably master4th writing most of part and using ai to enhance it which is completely fine, in fact, people should use it to make more time for actual story elements... Overall, it's a banger as master4th delivers yet again, this is my favourite story of all of his works, I have read his TCG and HSV(Half)... that's it
Who's the chick on the cover... WORD COUNTWORD COUNTWORD COUNTWORD COUNTWORD COUNTWORD COUNTWORD COUNTWORD COUNTWORD COUNTWORD COUNTWORD COUNTWORD COUNT
This story is one of the best I have ever read.The concept of always reincarnating having an immortal soul is innovative although you have implemented it in your other story as well, the multiple personalities are also interesting, especially that of the venerable One In my opinion this story is wonderful and the only bad thing is that some parts are not clearly understood when I use the translator. I read this in Spanish because I don't understand English, but it's c fault of the translator and not the author, I complain for pleasure xD
this entertained me more than I hope for. mix world make it kinda hard to navigate but it's so well placed that made the story more interesting. Highly Recommended😍✊ Oh and also this has lemons too 😋
Love it............................................................................................... plz change the cover
This is one of the Masterpieces, even by the standards of Master4thwall. The MC is knowledgeable, powerful, manipulative, cunning, caring and wise. What more do we need from a MC. The story flows wonderfully with each arc being planned and author has added his original elements which enhances the the World Building by a LOT. I had 1000 more words to describe it but I will stop for now. So just go and read it.
It's a good story jdjhdkfbdhxkbxhxkxbcjnxvxjxbxlxbxjxbbxkxbxjxbxhxmxvxbxvxkxbjxbxhxnxvxj xjx x by xkvxjxbxux NCG xnvxixvfjfvfudnvdidvf un vxhf
This is an amzing fanfiction. Main character is very interseting given he has lived many lives. My only concern is that please don’t make this fanfic into power creep.
Well, what i can say. Masterwall is one of my favourite authors on webnovel im reading his books, for a long time since his first fanfic. And i really like all of them. Writing quality is like always very good, when you read this book you feel like you are on smooth sailing ship, and you know that this trip will give you a lot of joy, and pleasent ending. Story development is very interesting a lot of characters get their stories so much extended, and from mere boring prototypes from original they get their unique abilities. Main character is cool too, he is experienced and you feel it, his powers improve steadily, and power system is very intersting too, cant wait to see his future development. Updates are very frequent, and you dont forget anything, world background is very nice too, DxD has very intersting concept of the world unlike main character who is really hateful. So in conclusion, i can say that anybody who is reading fics on this app should try this story, and see for himself did he like it or not. But im giving it 5/5. Sorry, for bad grammar, because english is not my main language
I had read for the first 20 chap the story is good good backgrounds and starting point and good depiction of other characters except MC the character development you want for MC do not feed in MC Background for excample he have been reincarnated for several time that's mean he is old the older you are the wiser you became but I do not see any of it you have to consider the character development before your story timeline started the feeling is feel when I see MC is any other teenage boy that have knowledge beyond his age that's all i do not feel his vast amount of experience of living for milinia
The story development is kinda annoying. And the mc is cringe( not the entertaining one) the savings grace(to me) is the diverse fml from different anime that i like
Revelar spoiler Honestly, at first it looked interesting to see the MC's development and a fresh plot like "Samsara", but still, has the MC forgotten his true personality? I mean oh come on it's just Mai Sakurajima, what's so special about her? The man who had influence over millions of worlds in a universe was so tempted about the idea of having a girl in his Harem like that someone who is so frustrated, he even says bad things about MC and MC remains normal, whereas when he is with others he might get very angry. That made me wonder about "Aqua"'s personality, in my opinion, MC's personality in his 9th life was probably much better than the current MC.
Mehn, I wanna give a better review and I tried so much to keep reading but I can't. The first few chapters were fine and all, but nothing after that matched the premise of what we had before. I believe that there is a good balance between choosing your character traits, making claims and fulfilling those claims. The Mc was shown to be one with his own morality. Not good nor bad. Aiit, bet, less than 20 chapters forward, we get a chapter where he is battling with morality choices and thinking. Of course one can say that, the MC is getting character development, but the reason was wack, there was no reason. Emotional depth in the story is almost non existent. Mc has lived multiple lives and has fought countless foes, but his statements are annoying before a fight. "This fight might be tough", that guy is powerful, next thing, the opponent is dead, no difficulty or anything. That kills the whole reading experience mehn. Also, conversation are annoying in this book. Not only is there no depth, there's a annoying type of conversation that happens. Good things tho are the pics. like fr, the pics are hot 🥵 but nothing again. I stopped at ch 60 and could not continue again and even getting to ch 60 was a stretch.