Reviews of House Of The Dragon: Vengeance of Valyria by Divinedream - Webnovel

So far the story is excellent, not only that but the writing style is neat and expressive and the lore seems to be respected. The author manages to preserve the spirit of the universe (so no weird Naruto or DxD abilities) while innovating and taking the universe in a new, more magical and religious direction. I'd like the release pace of the chapters to be a little faster and the MC to have more struggle in his confrontations with the disciples of the others gods, because in my opinion that would give more weight to the idea that this is a battle that will dictate the course of the world and the death or ascendancy of an entire religion, peuple, culture and even a God. Otherwise, I have a humble request that doesn't need to be listened to if you have your own plans, but I'd like to see some kind of "clan building" or, in this case, race building. The Valyrians are a very small people at this point, and every time a Targaryen dies or they fight among themselves, it kinda hurts my heart. I'd like, if possible, if the MC doesn't kill his half-brother and father (after all his father helped his people greatly), etc - and if possible, helps them to stay alive if they're threatened. It would be fun to see if his lineage and extended family develop stronger powers as they reconnect with their gods and as the MC has children who have children of their own.