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el inicio estuvo bien, pero la verdad donde empezaste a mezclar fue donde siento que perdiste el rumbo.
went from righteous to pure evil and putting slave seals on people halfway through for no reason at all. had to drop.
Revelar spoiler
Bueno, doy mi humilde opinion, la verdad me gusta la trama y el como no pasa de ser un estudiante o persona normal, a un asesino de sangre fria o violador. Eso me agrada, y ya estaba bien con su desarrollo de personaje, soporte que metieran a la hermana (lo cual veo innecesario) pero en serio?, un chat dimensional, la verdad no me gusto para nada este giro, ñero bueno, cada quien es libre de leerlo, de igual forma el fic esta bien hecho y es muy bueno, solo que estas 2 cosas no son mi taza de te
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Please make MC killing Yun Che[img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous]
and this novel is so nice🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Nice ATG FF [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
As much as. i want to put this lower because the family being put in i can't best Atg i read in awhile but he just had to bring them here and now it feels like multiple mc's i wish the best of luck and well see if i can find something simmilar without the family being in...
what a let down, this novel starts good to best but it suddenly become a letdown because of a slave system trope, then the mc also become extreme person who enslave anyone out of little misunderstanding. i thought at first this novel is different coz the mc is just a person who doesn't care about anything but only his friend and love one. but he suddenly become a villain like mc because of the trial of white tiger. and now the mc doesn't care about morals he just enslave or kill anyone he think crossing his path. what a letdown but still thanks and hoping you do much better next time author-san.
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More chapter ...................................................................................................................................................................
Una buena historia con una buena trama y personajes, el protagonista tiene un buen desarrollo y no es como otros personajes que se enloquecen por el poder volviendose arrogantes
Overall pretty good. .................................................................................................... Do you have the original title?
I don't know of others for me the novel title is unappealing .........in this world humans are already at top. though the novel is good 👍 keep it up author
So good ATG novel [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Os primeiros 15 capítulos são bem chatos e irritantes de se ler, mais depois disso até que fica bem interessante. Estou atualmente no capitulo 25, e esta tomando um rumo bem interessante.
well...the story is kinda interesting but the random grammatical errors are ruining the immersion...
Sobarashi [img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift]
Not Bad[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Nice [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I like the personality and development of the mc and the author has excellent work there I will guarantee you that this will be the best of best ATG novel you have read
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i should say it's great to see you back. its really great fanfic better than many others but you have to update really stably you were away for how many months
Truly a hidden gem, it is incredible, well written, fluid, quite entertaining and the mc is not an asdgaksd, in fact, what I like most is that he is empathetic and a good person, I expect a lot from this fanfic, especially more chapters! !!!
очень жду продолжения,наконец-то интересный фанфик по атг,я пишу на русском по скольку я с снг,ааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааа
finally a fanfic where the MC doesn't try to take everything from the protagonist, and just wants to go home.
It starts off good but then it gets horrible, it's not worth continuing to read, you'll only regret it. Reasons why I stopped reading 1-The protagonist forgot his main objective. 2-The author simply forgot about the multiversal group 3-The author does not respect the schedule 4-The author is dragging on a lot in martial peak and it's not about the protagonist exploring and only the protagonist dragging on to get the book, it's basically been more than 10 days in this damn coming party 5- Protagonist slave of the system
el inicio estuvo bien, pero la verdad donde empezaste a mezclar fue donde siento que perdiste el rumbo.
went from righteous to pure evil and putting slave seals on people halfway through for no reason at all. had to drop.
Revelar spoiler Bueno, doy mi humilde opinion, la verdad me gusta la trama y el como no pasa de ser un estudiante o persona normal, a un asesino de sangre fria o violador. Eso me agrada, y ya estaba bien con su desarrollo de personaje, soporte que metieran a la hermana (lo cual veo innecesario) pero en serio?, un chat dimensional, la verdad no me gusto para nada este giro, ñero bueno, cada quien es libre de leerlo, de igual forma el fic esta bien hecho y es muy bueno, solo que estas 2 cosas no son mi taza de te
Revelar spoiler Please make MC killing Yun Che[img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous]
and this novel is so nice🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Nice ATG FF [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
As much as. i want to put this lower because the family being put in i can't best Atg i read in awhile but he just had to bring them here and now it feels like multiple mc's i wish the best of luck and well see if i can find something simmilar without the family being in...
what a let down, this novel starts good to best but it suddenly become a letdown because of a slave system trope, then the mc also become extreme person who enslave anyone out of little misunderstanding. i thought at first this novel is different coz the mc is just a person who doesn't care about anything but only his friend and love one. but he suddenly become a villain like mc because of the trial of white tiger. and now the mc doesn't care about morals he just enslave or kill anyone he think crossing his path. what a letdown but still thanks and hoping you do much better next time author-san.
Revelar spoiler More chapter ...................................................................................................................................................................
Una buena historia con una buena trama y personajes, el protagonista tiene un buen desarrollo y no es como otros personajes que se enloquecen por el poder volviendose arrogantes
Overall pretty good. .................................................................................................... Do you have the original title?
I don't know of others for me the novel title is unappealing .........in this world humans are already at top. though the novel is good 👍 keep it up author
So good ATG novel [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Os primeiros 15 capítulos são bem chatos e irritantes de se ler, mais depois disso até que fica bem interessante. Estou atualmente no capitulo 25, e esta tomando um rumo bem interessante.
well...the story is kinda interesting but the random grammatical errors are ruining the immersion...
Sobarashi [img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift]
Not Bad[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Nice [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I like the personality and development of the mc and the author has excellent work there I will guarantee you that this will be the best of best ATG novel you have read
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i should say it's great to see you back. its really great fanfic better than many others but you have to update really stably you were away for how many months
Truly a hidden gem, it is incredible, well written, fluid, quite entertaining and the mc is not an asdgaksd, in fact, what I like most is that he is empathetic and a good person, I expect a lot from this fanfic, especially more chapters! !!!
очень жду продолжения,наконец-то интересный фанфик по атг,я пишу на русском по скольку я с снг,ааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааааа
finally a fanfic where the MC doesn't try to take everything from the protagonist, and just wants to go home.
It starts off good but then it gets horrible, it's not worth continuing to read, you'll only regret it. Reasons why I stopped reading 1-The protagonist forgot his main objective. 2-The author simply forgot about the multiversal group 3-The author does not respect the schedule 4-The author is dragging on a lot in martial peak and it's not about the protagonist exploring and only the protagonist dragging on to get the book, it's basically been more than 10 days in this damn coming party 5- Protagonist slave of the system