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It's Good Novel Great grammar and proper wording. ..But your fight scene is suck like «Their newfound power clash blah blah»No fight scene where they use jutsu or techniques .I think you don't know much about the Jutsu in narutoverse. Just check it at fandom bro. [img=proud][img=recommend]
lo peor. esta echo con chat gpt lo puedes notar claramente por como están estructuradas las frases y el uso extremo de frases como con gran determinación o con lo conocido, el futuro recae sobre o cosas por el estilo
100% sure this is produced using A.I. The style is mechanic, without portraying any feeling. Only bland description of events. It is still interesting as a source of inspiration, but it is not entertaining since it's just paper characters moving from point A to point B without motivation driving them.
As story progressed it made no sense... 1. decisions and actions of characters don't align with each other 2. I know the characters will have plot armor but if in usual stories plot armor is 100% then in this story is over 9000(nine thousand DBZ reference)
It's Good Novel Great grammar and proper wording. ..But your fight scene is suck like «Their newfound power clash blah blah»No fight scene where they use jutsu or techniques .I think you don't know much about the Jutsu in narutoverse. Just check it at fandom bro. [img=proud][img=recommend]
lo peor. esta echo con chat gpt lo puedes notar claramente por como están estructuradas las frases y el uso extremo de frases como con gran determinación o con lo conocido, el futuro recae sobre o cosas por el estilo
100% sure this is produced using A.I. The style is mechanic, without portraying any feeling. Only bland description of events. It is still interesting as a source of inspiration, but it is not entertaining since it's just paper characters moving from point A to point B without motivation driving them.
As story progressed it made no sense... 1. decisions and actions of characters don't align with each other 2. I know the characters will have plot armor but if in usual stories plot armor is 100% then in this story is over 9000(nine thousand DBZ reference)