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the story looks like a simple embodiment of the author's sexual fantasies, because of this, logic and plot suffer. ..............................
imma be real honest the writing kinda socks. like it seems very Very wish fulfillmenty to the point where there is zero logic and the character dialog is very bland and npc like.
Okay, I saw the reviews and wanted to make things clear.The fic isn't the best and doesn't the quality of a writer but someone who simply want to share his idea. There are some plot holes and Cringy moments but it is purely for entertainment. The Grammer isn't the best but enough that you can understand it. Yes, it's lack luster but isn't horrible. Story? Yeah, it's wish fulfillment where mc is OVERPOWERED since he had superman powers. Harem. Yes, there are small romances and interaction but it's like any wish fulfillment and should not compare to normal fic. In conclusion, if you want to read some Wish fulfillment to just relax and enjoy while shutting your brain then Read this.
Okay I’m gonna be honest this is not good but also not bad to just read and not think about the consequences of his decision of his choices to me this is a (meh) like this is probably goin to be in my library and when there is no new chapters of the other stories I enjoy I’ll read this. Anyway keep up the work and keep improving your writing move forward you have two stories that has my interest this one and the solo leveling in One Piece.
chapter 11/11 Writing Quality there are few grammatical errors and sudden name change in the story Stability of Updates author never mentioned how many times a week s/he is gonna update Story Development the way the story looks to me is that the flow of the story seems to be forceful and a little bit bland Character Design close to none the MC personality was never mentioned before he transmigrated in the MCU the powers was never been characterized. power 1: what kind of superman he is, superboy-prime, silver superman, all star superman or ultraman power 2: A. the AI, do the intelligence of it the same as the original AI. how he communicate with it, there our times the they converse with each other like the typical System but there times in which he needs to access his phone. B. where is the main body of the AI? in a physical super computer or within the internet C. does the AI have a 100% loyalty towards him. if not, and the AI behaves just exactly like the original brainiac, then peter is pretty much f*cked. World Background close to none the world background is like an amalgamation of multiple Marvel universe. and it was never mentioned which is which summary the main idea of this FanFic have a great potential, it just needed a little bit of elbow grease.
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Plot is rushed, forced and brain-dead. Worst opening to a book I’ve read in a while
the story looks like a simple embodiment of the author's sexual fantasies, because of this, logic and plot suffer. ..............................
imma be real honest the writing kinda socks. like it seems very Very wish fulfillmenty to the point where there is zero logic and the character dialog is very bland and npc like.
Okay, I saw the reviews and wanted to make things clear.The fic isn't the best and doesn't the quality of a writer but someone who simply want to share his idea. There are some plot holes and Cringy moments but it is purely for entertainment. The Grammer isn't the best but enough that you can understand it. Yes, it's lack luster but isn't horrible. Story? Yeah, it's wish fulfillment where mc is OVERPOWERED since he had superman powers. Harem. Yes, there are small romances and interaction but it's like any wish fulfillment and should not compare to normal fic. In conclusion, if you want to read some Wish fulfillment to just relax and enjoy while shutting your brain then Read this.
Okay I’m gonna be honest this is not good but also not bad to just read and not think about the consequences of his decision of his choices to me this is a (meh) like this is probably goin to be in my library and when there is no new chapters of the other stories I enjoy I’ll read this. Anyway keep up the work and keep improving your writing move forward you have two stories that has my interest this one and the solo leveling in One Piece.
chapter 11/11 Writing Quality there are few grammatical errors and sudden name change in the story Stability of Updates author never mentioned how many times a week s/he is gonna update Story Development the way the story looks to me is that the flow of the story seems to be forceful and a little bit bland Character Design close to none the MC personality was never mentioned before he transmigrated in the MCU the powers was never been characterized. power 1: what kind of superman he is, superboy-prime, silver superman, all star superman or ultraman power 2: A. the AI, do the intelligence of it the same as the original AI. how he communicate with it, there our times the they converse with each other like the typical System but there times in which he needs to access his phone. B. where is the main body of the AI? in a physical super computer or within the internet C. does the AI have a 100% loyalty towards him. if not, and the AI behaves just exactly like the original brainiac, then peter is pretty much f*cked. World Background close to none the world background is like an amalgamation of multiple Marvel universe. and it was never mentioned which is which summary the main idea of this FanFic have a great potential, it just needed a little bit of elbow grease.
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Plot is rushed, forced and brain-dead. Worst opening to a book I’ve read in a while