His Precious Possession

LV 13

Snorlax777

Just from the synopsis enough to make me want to read it. The genre and plot is suited me well, even though i only read 8 chapter but i can see the potential from the story, i like the Fl personality a lot. overall its good novel, i'll add it to my library and cheer on the author to keep updating!

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Amesaya

If you read the synopsis of the book, it won't lie to you. You get what it promises you, and that's not a bad thing. It's a cute contemporary romance story told in a somewhat unconventional double-first person method. That is to say, it shifts between the two leads, but will use first person in both cases. It clearly delineates between those shifts, however, so it shouldn't be too confusing. The grammar feels a little bit stilted, and the pacing at the beginning of the story feels a bit rushed. However, the grammatical errors to not so plague the book as to really cause problems with reading it, and the pacing works itself out once the author gets a little more comfortable with the story. Overall, I'd consider this story a worthwhile read if you enjoy the genre or if the synopsis appeals to you. It doesn't shake things up too much, but it doesn't have to. It knows what it's about, and it's focused on delivering that to the reader. Personally, I can always appreciate a story that gives me exactly what I signed up for. I give a thumbs-up.

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nekrom1

really good novel, the romance is good and the flow of words going well, I will keep it in my library for binge reading, keep up the work author.

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kkworld

Great novel, full five star review, there are only eight chapters for now, so I will come again after a thorough reading. Good luck! I love the name Alisha btw! keep writing!

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LAMx

Loving the story so far. I love how the ML loves and protects his FL. I hope the relationship keeps sailing smoothly. Looking forward to more chapters. Nice read so far. Kudos to the author.

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LotusLin

Author writes absolutely beautifully. The novel has so much potential. She does a great job at building a background story and personality for her characters, so that the reader would understand their motivations. Plus the storyline moves along rather quickly, so it is always exciting. Great job author! Can't wait to read more.

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yoojee

A solid start for a FL novel. I am personally not a fan of 1st POV narrative but I do agree that the chapters that shift between the characters' POVs have a personal feel to them. While the plot itself or the character design doesn't bring anything really "fresh", you can't deny that there is always a sense of intrigue when we encounter the clash of the "cold" ML character and the "pure and sincere" FL character. I wish you all the best with this work and hope it will attract more readers!

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Juniper_breeze1

Loved this story! Well written. I recommend 🤍

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Enola20

What a sweet story you have written Author! Loved it. This story is short, sweet, romantic and wholesome. It has a happily ever after end. A must read. Eagerly waiting for your new project. 😘🤗❤️

LV 15

Elizabeth_Crawley

Wonderful story. I highly recommend this to anyone who enjoys a possessive, bad boy who loves his queen. Well, written and satisfying.

I started reading because I saw this is a short novel and the chapter is below 100. It was so interesting to read this novel as the author is actively using Pov of both FL and ML. Hope to get a good and happy ending.

LV 4

Jason_Struart

I'm reading this after its completion, and it's a nice story with amazing flow and developments. I'm glad I stumbled upon this piece. The story moves at a smooth pace, making every development and scenario feel quite apt. I do wish there were more scenes with the supporting characters, but that would mean adding more chapters. Overall, I'm happy with this happily-ever-after kind of book.

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Galata_Sky

it looks good, especially the visuals are so beautiful, I would love to read it!!! 😍😍😍😍

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rina_fatmawati

saya sangat sangat menyukai ceritanya, terima kasih buat penulis yang sudah membuat cerita ini, ketika pertama kali membacanya saya langsung suka dan menambahkan ke daftar perpustakaan dan menjadi favorit, keren dan salut buat penulis, semangat 💪💪💪 untuk menulis cerita bagus lainnya 👍👍👍❤🥰😘🙏🙏🙏

LV 4

BambooFirefly

With a synopsis like that, would you except me to not read? The first chapter? Immediately got me hooked, I don't like 1st POV and don't usually read them. But this one is different. I haven't read a lot of chapters, but this much is enough for me to love this book almost immediately!

LV 4

IkkiTodoroki

Never a disappointing chapter, don't skip because of few chapters.

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Velveta

I loved the story of Alexander and Alisha! I also loved the supporting characters. It was very well written and not drawn out. Thank you, dear Author!

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MaxisonlyforRiftan

What a story really enjoyed it, short and sweet

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Bernice_Johnson_5473

the book was detailed and a very 3xciyibg reF. Able to keep up with all characters.