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I believe that a good story is one that people read. That is why this is a good novel to me as long as people read it. Thank you. This novel doesn't generate income. It is here to feed me dopamine, meaning it is generated by love. So please reward me with positive comments. I don't like one-sided love. I hope more readers continue to read this fanfic despite its flaws. I am currently rewriting while uploading. I have updated chapters 1 to 22. They have more wordcount now, and more proper structure. That is all.
The start is a bit hard to get past, but at the same time you can eat the chapters and before you noticed you finish them all. Currently the direction of the plot is completely different from the original and new things are appearing.In conclusion, once you pass the rough start it will keep you wanting more.
I'm glad you rewrote it but please explain to me the ending why Hajin had to kill hyung [img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Why]
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Oof, just barely started reading yesterday and next thing I know all the chapters get deleted and the series gets renamed. Maybe not the best way to rewrite something, now all the reviews are irrelevant. The comments have been nuked scorched earth style as well, with everying having been deleted and all. Going from 200+ ch to 4...it's a bit much.
estaba leyendo tranquilamente, continuando el capítulo 100, y de repente me lo borran... que triste, espero la reescribir sea buena ánimos al autor
It's really fresh and different from TNE and I like how while the MC is OP af he doesnt likr severely overshadow other characters too. Theres also a loooot of foreshadowing and people actually have a character
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Hello dear author, could you please clarify a doubt? In the original work, the author made the 4 heroines like Hajin, but in the end he is left with just one. And that's what I liked least, because I would have liked it to have been a harem. Can you tell me if the same thing happened in your work? Like, several heroines fall in love with Hajim, but he stays, with only one in the end?
Umm.. I don't know what to say neither I am good at writing a Review. But I must say it's very good story. MC here is unique in its own way. Even though it's a fanfic but it's writing quality is amazing where it reached a point that only semblance you would find between original TNE and this is characters' name. I think Alfer can also write original stories and I hope he will write very soon. All in all it's a masterpiece
It's nice to have the same novel preferences. This is one of my favorite novels. And after reading this I feel like I had one of my best days. I'm very happy. I can only say thank you very deeply🔥🔥🔥
Hello, Kim Jae here! So I feel like the overall story is great and the characters are pretty good but ( This is Constructive criticism ) The storyline appears to be a bit disoriented and random buffs to random characters. Some plot events seem unpredictable and confusing, but the rest is fine. I enjoy your way of writing and hope you continue
Honestly it boring and below average at best. Some user point it out but author claim he's getting amazing response but i seriouly doubt it. I mean it barely have 30 novel review + gets like 2-3 chapter comment after writing over 150 chapter then its pretty clear people arent wasting their time on this. 😂
Gee oh crikey.Haven't read yet but i'd be lying if i said i wasn't giddy.hope the man doesn't decide to pull my special move 'Ghostu da reader'
This is one of the best fanfictions I've read. (Too lazy to write a proper review)
Well written , hard work and well done author-nim ~ Well written , hard work and well done author-nim ~ Well written , hard work and well done author-nim ~ Well written , hard work and well done author-nim ~
Five stars. Worth the read if you are a TNE fan. The MC is fun, and honestly unhinged. Volume 1 has him as a talkative scheming weakling who barely has strength to get by, but MC becomes OP quickly in Volume 2.
good... good....good... good....good... good....good... good....googood... good....d... good....good... good....good... good....good... good....
I've read till akimbo part 4 or sum, to summarize it the mc is a shiver me timbers(coward) mega load and dumb naruto who is a system user(broken system for cool mysterious vibe) became an assassin cuz his perk/gift is so mysterious, i bet the author made the mc loud mouth so the side character would go "he can't possibly the giga chad assassin cuz he's so loud uwu" and then "oh my gawd he's so cool so stwong assassin" mc would go "HEHEHEHE YOU DIDN'T THINK I'M THE GIGACHAD ASSASSIN CUZ I'M SO LOUD OBNOXIOUS MC RIGHT!!!????
This novel is certainly good, but the kissing yeonha i think unnecessary, and i dont remember if there is such scenes in original I will wait till this series completed before i read it, because from what i read till now ,if there is a hangings it will left bad after taste
One of the best fanfic in webnovel and definitely the best novel’s extra fanfic in internet so far
I appreciate the work you put into this piece of story. I’m not a very patient reader but here I am visiting this novel and waiting for new chapters…
Passed the G.E.N test. Good grammar. Entertaining. No harem. My only gripe is Hyon revealing to everyone that they are characters in a book Hajin wrote and that he read and no one even reacts as if that fact is nothing to them.
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As of chapter 21, this fic is well written with an interesting main character and it isn't just blindly following canon. This is the best "The Novel's Extra" fanfic out and i'm not just saying this because it's the only one i've read lol
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Honestly, when I saw the synopsis I thought it was going to be the typical half-badly done fan-fic, but I noticed the rating was 4.8 and I thought: We have to give it a chance, people don't give almost 5 stars just because. The truth is that the author has known how to make a well-made fan-fic, obviously he has altered the plot but that has made it better than the original work, the author has known how to give the development that Hajin deserved, in regards to the good protagonist ... he's pretty good except for some extra nonsense, but hey it's part of his personality so it's not bad. I like that the fights are more intentional and detailed than the original work. The only "complaint" I have about the novel is the fact that it covers a lot of the fact that a large part of the main characters know the future and that feels strange, but hey, depending on how the author directs the story, I could keep my mouth shut. . PS: Author, don't screw up like the author of TNE did in the end :)
I believe that a good story is one that people read. That is why this is a good novel to me as long as people read it. Thank you. This novel doesn't generate income. It is here to feed me dopamine, meaning it is generated by love. So please reward me with positive comments. I don't like one-sided love. I hope more readers continue to read this fanfic despite its flaws. I am currently rewriting while uploading. I have updated chapters 1 to 22. They have more wordcount now, and more proper structure. That is all.
The start is a bit hard to get past, but at the same time you can eat the chapters and before you noticed you finish them all. Currently the direction of the plot is completely different from the original and new things are appearing.In conclusion, once you pass the rough start it will keep you wanting more.
I'm glad you rewrote it but please explain to me the ending why Hajin had to kill hyung [img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Why]
Revelar spoiler Oof, just barely started reading yesterday and next thing I know all the chapters get deleted and the series gets renamed. Maybe not the best way to rewrite something, now all the reviews are irrelevant. The comments have been nuked scorched earth style as well, with everying having been deleted and all. Going from 200+ ch to 4...it's a bit much.
estaba leyendo tranquilamente, continuando el capítulo 100, y de repente me lo borran... que triste, espero la reescribir sea buena ánimos al autor
It's really fresh and different from TNE and I like how while the MC is OP af he doesnt likr severely overshadow other characters too. Theres also a loooot of foreshadowing and people actually have a character
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Hello dear author, could you please clarify a doubt? In the original work, the author made the 4 heroines like Hajin, but in the end he is left with just one. And that's what I liked least, because I would have liked it to have been a harem. Can you tell me if the same thing happened in your work? Like, several heroines fall in love with Hajim, but he stays, with only one in the end?
Umm.. I don't know what to say neither I am good at writing a Review. But I must say it's very good story. MC here is unique in its own way. Even though it's a fanfic but it's writing quality is amazing where it reached a point that only semblance you would find between original TNE and this is characters' name. I think Alfer can also write original stories and I hope he will write very soon. All in all it's a masterpiece
It's nice to have the same novel preferences. This is one of my favorite novels. And after reading this I feel like I had one of my best days. I'm very happy. I can only say thank you very deeply🔥🔥🔥
Hello, Kim Jae here! So I feel like the overall story is great and the characters are pretty good but ( This is Constructive criticism ) The storyline appears to be a bit disoriented and random buffs to random characters. Some plot events seem unpredictable and confusing, but the rest is fine. I enjoy your way of writing and hope you continue
Honestly it boring and below average at best. Some user point it out but author claim he's getting amazing response but i seriouly doubt it. I mean it barely have 30 novel review + gets like 2-3 chapter comment after writing over 150 chapter then its pretty clear people arent wasting their time on this. 😂
Gee oh crikey.Haven't read yet but i'd be lying if i said i wasn't giddy.hope the man doesn't decide to pull my special move 'Ghostu da reader'
This is one of the best fanfictions I've read. (Too lazy to write a proper review)
Well written , hard work and well done author-nim ~ Well written , hard work and well done author-nim ~ Well written , hard work and well done author-nim ~ Well written , hard work and well done author-nim ~
Five stars. Worth the read if you are a TNE fan. The MC is fun, and honestly unhinged. Volume 1 has him as a talkative scheming weakling who barely has strength to get by, but MC becomes OP quickly in Volume 2.
good... good....good... good....good... good....good... good....googood... good....d... good....good... good....good... good....good... good....
I've read till akimbo part 4 or sum, to summarize it the mc is a shiver me timbers(coward) mega load and dumb naruto who is a system user(broken system for cool mysterious vibe) became an assassin cuz his perk/gift is so mysterious, i bet the author made the mc loud mouth so the side character would go "he can't possibly the giga chad assassin cuz he's so loud uwu" and then "oh my gawd he's so cool so stwong assassin" mc would go "HEHEHEHE YOU DIDN'T THINK I'M THE GIGACHAD ASSASSIN CUZ I'M SO LOUD OBNOXIOUS MC RIGHT!!!????
This novel is certainly good, but the kissing yeonha i think unnecessary, and i dont remember if there is such scenes in original I will wait till this series completed before i read it, because from what i read till now ,if there is a hangings it will left bad after taste
One of the best fanfic in webnovel and definitely the best novel’s extra fanfic in internet so far
I appreciate the work you put into this piece of story. I’m not a very patient reader but here I am visiting this novel and waiting for new chapters…
Passed the G.E.N test. Good grammar. Entertaining. No harem. My only gripe is Hyon revealing to everyone that they are characters in a book Hajin wrote and that he read and no one even reacts as if that fact is nothing to them.
Revelar spoiler As of chapter 21, this fic is well written with an interesting main character and it isn't just blindly following canon. This is the best "The Novel's Extra" fanfic out and i'm not just saying this because it's the only one i've read lol
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Honestly, when I saw the synopsis I thought it was going to be the typical half-badly done fan-fic, but I noticed the rating was 4.8 and I thought: We have to give it a chance, people don't give almost 5 stars just because. The truth is that the author has known how to make a well-made fan-fic, obviously he has altered the plot but that has made it better than the original work, the author has known how to give the development that Hajin deserved, in regards to the good protagonist ... he's pretty good except for some extra nonsense, but hey it's part of his personality so it's not bad. I like that the fights are more intentional and detailed than the original work. The only "complaint" I have about the novel is the fact that it covers a lot of the fact that a large part of the main characters know the future and that feels strange, but hey, depending on how the author directs the story, I could keep my mouth shut. . PS: Author, don't screw up like the author of TNE did in the end :)