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Escribe una reseñaSuper disappointing hes dont nothing but try to get more powerful for no reason as he keeps saying hes not afraid of anyone but maybe some op mutant. He remembers but also dosent remeber MARVEL. He is boring with no connection to anyone but himself. Says he helps people but the only life he saved he did it for a car he wanted. Hes selfish and stupid for not remembering an entire franchise worth a billion dollars from his former world. This is just a guy trying to become poweful his ripperdoc clinic has been closed for like a year by now. This whole thing needs a rewrite and you need to ask yourself where this is supposed to be going.
Good premise for this for a story would like to see more. I hope you don't drop any love interest or romance.
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The writing quality is really bad, I spend most of my time re reading paragraphs in order to decipher what the author is trying to say, I think he'd be better off re writing this in his native language since the terrible grammar really drags this fic down.
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It's good so far ................................................................................................................................
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Reincarnated MC that does not remember Marvel at all so what’s the point? Another fake reincarnated MC story. Do not waste your time.
Revelar spoilerSuper disappointing hes dont nothing but try to get more powerful for no reason as he keeps saying hes not afraid of anyone but maybe some op mutant. He remembers but also dosent remeber MARVEL. He is boring with no connection to anyone but himself. Says he helps people but the only life he saved he did it for a car he wanted. Hes selfish and stupid for not remembering an entire franchise worth a billion dollars from his former world. This is just a guy trying to become poweful his ripperdoc clinic has been closed for like a year by now. This whole thing needs a rewrite and you need to ask yourself where this is supposed to be going.
Good premise for this for a story would like to see more. I hope you don't drop any love interest or romance.
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The writing quality is really bad, I spend most of my time re reading paragraphs in order to decipher what the author is trying to say, I think he'd be better off re writing this in his native language since the terrible grammar really drags this fic down.
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It's good so far ................................................................................................................................
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Reincarnated MC that does not remember Marvel at all so what’s the point? Another fake reincarnated MC story. Do not waste your time.
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