Basilisk

LV 15

Atkinsopn

It’s easy to read for English readers who don’t really require commas and the like, the words used are advanced so people complaining are probably not native speakers or are pea brains who require such things to understand intended meaning. this is 1000% more palatable than the Chinese Mtl garbage that usually gets posted.

LV 10

Lukeskydrinker

This isnt soo bad like other say,first he is born 900 years before story so what?he would go to sleep and bum meet Harry Potter?better if he make some legends in history to make impact in main story

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ShadowTime

i stoped at around chap 20. not that its bad but i just felt lost with all the info thrown around. the story is really good and a must read and there is a lot of in depth info on magic that i find interesting and pretty cool.tho i would recomend author to put like a word explination to terms and names that some people might not know, understand or ponounce cus there were a few terms i did not understand and didn't fell like looking up(my problem, not yours).

LV 13

MrSimo

the book is good some of the religious stuff kinda bugged me, but I don't really care to be fair. the book is quite easy to read I don't know why people are Complaining. it was a fun and hopefully will continue to be a fun read.

LV 4

ARSENAL_101

I like the setting of the story and the update speed is also good (at ch 31)Though there are some obvious written issues and a lot of exposition(like more than the actual dialogues) I hope the story gets completed if nothing else. don't leave the story hanging and improvement is much appreciated.

LV 4

N_H177013

hes deleted everything to if your looking for the book gl

LV 15

humpedumpe

i dont agree with the negative reviews, it is a good story, what more can i say. so troll dont give negative review, it is worth the read

LV 4

Finnish_man

I love this its very good it dosent feel like a harry potter fic so if u want some harry potter stuff thats related to plot so its not that but thats why it so good its not like everyother HP ff thats why i like it so much and it very high quality most stuff do make sense in the story and the translations good quality in my opinion tho its not my native so i cant say anything for the native speakers but at least for me who dosent speak it nativly find very few mistakes most are just wrongly translated and thos arent that bad like i have read much worse so i dont car my own englhis aint that good neihter is my own launage so like lol but would definetly recomend to read for all who migth like a harry pitter fic thats more on au but still has the core of harry potter better than most harry potter fics that have marvel/mcu most of the are kinda bad cus i feel like hp magic dosent go that well with mcu tho its bit difrent if the fic is a template fic or gacha sytem vut in the end lool AUHTOR KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK 💀

LV 15

minion1

This is one of the more in-depth world building works I have read, it develops multiply factions instead of ’enemy faction crush’ good work mate keep going plz

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Stanie_Thomas

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PrimordialMofu

I really enjoy this but the writing and dialogue structure is a chore to read and comprehend. I struggle to see where the dialogue starts and ends, it's really the only bad thing I can say about the book, besides the fact the MC is supposed to be the first Archmage in centuries and keeps meeting people more powerful than him.

LV 14

Vosss

I like this fanfiction_______________________________________

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ANNU_BARANWAL

A masterpiece to me, how others felt, who cares. The way a lot of different topics are blend together leaves a nice taste

LV 5

onion_ninja

giving 5 stars because people complain about weirdest thing posible

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Skull_of_Life

Hello everyone, as for the translation, I want to say that it is quite normal, it can be worse. As for the novel itself, if someone expects to see here a snake that devours everything it sees, this is not the case here, and also gg is rather boring and uninteresting, I know for myself, I read the original about half a year ago or so. So I do not advise fans of villains and interesting characters to read, forget quickly, and after reading there will be a lump of disappointment from the fact that you have spent your time on this at all.

LV 4

WurstistLeben

Really good Story, but seems like a minimal edited MTL which gets worse in newer chapters. Students get balls instead of points in hogwarts, there are other examples but thats what i mean with minimal edited MTL

LV 1

Black_Sakyra

Like this>:3 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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rozmetovs

In short, this is a more comprehensive and, as it were, the scientific world of Harry Potter, the main character does not have any problems with his character or anything else, according to the chapters read in the original, everything is fine. there is a love component and there is not, since the hero is naga, then a harem in the form of his student who is over 300+ years old and her familiar, an elf and a kitsune, and maybe his two new students in the last chapters(Bellatrix black and green grass girl). I haven't read this translation, but the original in Russian is full of Russian aphorisms, slang when the hero relaxes and speaks impressively, if the author intends to translate simply through a translator, then garbage will come out. And so the story is good, where exactly the essence of wizards and everyday life is revealed, about the Catholic Church, there will be a conversation about this, about the gods and how they get energy.

LV 14

Demiurge_Kami

Give it three chapters, if you enjoy a fresh take on HP you will not regret it. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]