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Es entretenido y aun más importante no tiene harem lo cual es bastante bueno, lamentablemente hay muchas situaciones absurdas y con nula coherencia por lo que este Fanfic no es mi taza de tea, igualmente lo recomiendo si buscan una lectura casual y no realista.
It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! I like it!!! 😍😍 It have great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. I like that MC/Akashi is Uzumaki and he help to prevent Uzumaki clan destruction.. He have a new doujutsu and be a jinchuriki will make this story more interesting.. The joining of Chinoike clan to Uzushio also good.. They will improve them with they power/specialty (ninjutsu and genjutsu, especially with they ketsuryugan).. If you want to add more clan, I think Yuki clan will be good addition.. Love your story author san.. Hope you don't leave hanging/stop this story.. Keep up the great job 😁👍😍😍
Это могло бы быть топовым романом но автор не обновляет так что оценка 3.8🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧
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Bro this story is so good I can even read 1000 chapters like this I personally am thinking that it would be better to just live life like this in the Naruto world with powers like this and caring people like Uzumaki clan always around and I think that in later future try to recruit Senju Uchiha and Hyūga clan and if possible Kaguya clan(some only though) for their survival and uzusiyo power increase to later be able to even face Ōtsutsuki clan on the Homura dependents on moon. I certainly have high hopes for later chapters.
The story is really food. It is so hard to find a story without konoha being the main place. I love the story and the development of ghe MC ! Hope the author will continue to update regulary !
This is honestly not bad, maybe some of the scenes aren’t that realistic like the elders readily agreeing with the protagonist without a lot more fighting and criticism than there already was but other than that this is pretty solid. And honestly I don’t think the protagonist would’ve survived if the author tried to make that scene realistic since the man only had an hour before the village was invaded, these guys would’ve got killed while they were in the middle of discussing😂 Other than that this is a solid read and I’d recommend it if you got nothing else to read. But don’t take my word for it, my taste may be different then other people so don’t go raising your expectations unreasonably high💀
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This NARUTO fanfic is one of the best but the updating stability is too slow, like bruh I've been waiting for the next chapter 3 days ago with no assurance if author-san will continue this fanfic. I hope author-san continue this fanfic.Also those who will read this can you suggest some fanfic or orig novel with good grammar and please dont suggest harem, hate it!
I Loved reading this book, from start to finish. It's really interesting how this masterpiece was made. Representing a whole new world filled with our main character's clan. I must say no one can write this story better than you. The cleverness of the storytelling of reincarnation in the beginning, and oh! I just loved the way you gave character development to Akashi as well as the the rest of the unique and interesting characters in the Naruto verse. And when you did Killer B🤣😎🥇i must say as a person who's watched Naruto that's would be something only the real killer B would rap. Kudos to you our wonderful Author. Carpe diem.
It's a great read so far. I enjoyed the MC's growth. The change in POV brings a realistic touch to the relationships formed and explores the humane nature of other personas. Time-skips are well-executed. Overall, entertaining> Thumbs Up Author-San! -Status Ch 29 Return.
Наконец-то фанфик, который приятно читать! Развитие событий ЛОГИЧНОЕ! Я уже читал фанфики такой структуры на русском про узумаки и развитие клана, надеюсь сюжет и дальше будет таким же примерно, главное что бы этот фанфик закончили, а не как аналоги...
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So gooooood, I wish he was more calculating when making plans. Also I want to see more fuinjustu
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Author messed up by making MC 3yr old. So many old geezer changing entire war plan 1hr before it because of his stupidly childish "advise" that no genius uzumaki could came up? Also, changing entire political and cultural tradition of their village because mc said they need varity of clan? Yea, this is clearly written by someone who've never work a single day in real world. A silly imagination of childish fantasy.
well it's a good book it has new way of going about uzumaki clan I hope they don't get involved with mito because she is a married and is a senju now they can also call back kusihna it will be a good twist don't you think
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Exelente, me gusta las historias de construcción de aldeas diferentes a konoha[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
it's always good to read well written uzumaki stories, the clan has the most potential in the Narutoverse but their are still so few stories.Write a long story of a couple hundred chapters and keep up the updating stabiluity.
Grammar could do some work, the characters need more fleshing out. But the idea is good, plot is good and most importantly it makes sense. MC isnt annoying and somewhat logical so that's good. Keep up the good work
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5 star review for a fanfic whose mc is not from konoha( you have no idea how hard this is to find.....everyone seems to love konoha and hiruzen😆😆😆) ps: interesting until chapter 9(no spoilers ...only the mc is a jinchuriki❤️❤️❤️)
Shameless author here giving himself only the best of the best When it comes to reviews! On an other note I am still pretty new to writing so advice is appreciated 👌
my assessment is very biased because the Uzumaki clan, my favorite clan in the Naruto universe. . ......................................................
this is the greatest I have ever read that has an Uzumaki mc. Great grammar as well
Es entretenido y aun más importante no tiene harem lo cual es bastante bueno, lamentablemente hay muchas situaciones absurdas y con nula coherencia por lo que este Fanfic no es mi taza de tea, igualmente lo recomiendo si buscan una lectura casual y no realista.
It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! I like it!!! 😍😍 It have great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. I like that MC/Akashi is Uzumaki and he help to prevent Uzumaki clan destruction.. He have a new doujutsu and be a jinchuriki will make this story more interesting.. The joining of Chinoike clan to Uzushio also good.. They will improve them with they power/specialty (ninjutsu and genjutsu, especially with they ketsuryugan).. If you want to add more clan, I think Yuki clan will be good addition.. Love your story author san.. Hope you don't leave hanging/stop this story.. Keep up the great job 😁👍😍😍
Это могло бы быть топовым романом но автор не обновляет так что оценка 3.8🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧
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Bro this story is so good I can even read 1000 chapters like this I personally am thinking that it would be better to just live life like this in the Naruto world with powers like this and caring people like Uzumaki clan always around and I think that in later future try to recruit Senju Uchiha and Hyūga clan and if possible Kaguya clan(some only though) for their survival and uzusiyo power increase to later be able to even face Ōtsutsuki clan on the Homura dependents on moon. I certainly have high hopes for later chapters.
The story is really food. It is so hard to find a story without konoha being the main place. I love the story and the development of ghe MC ! Hope the author will continue to update regulary !
This is honestly not bad, maybe some of the scenes aren’t that realistic like the elders readily agreeing with the protagonist without a lot more fighting and criticism than there already was but other than that this is pretty solid. And honestly I don’t think the protagonist would’ve survived if the author tried to make that scene realistic since the man only had an hour before the village was invaded, these guys would’ve got killed while they were in the middle of discussing😂 Other than that this is a solid read and I’d recommend it if you got nothing else to read. But don’t take my word for it, my taste may be different then other people so don’t go raising your expectations unreasonably high💀
Revelar spoiler This NARUTO fanfic is one of the best but the updating stability is too slow, like bruh I've been waiting for the next chapter 3 days ago with no assurance if author-san will continue this fanfic. I hope author-san continue this fanfic.Also those who will read this can you suggest some fanfic or orig novel with good grammar and please dont suggest harem, hate it!
I Loved reading this book, from start to finish. It's really interesting how this masterpiece was made. Representing a whole new world filled with our main character's clan. I must say no one can write this story better than you. The cleverness of the storytelling of reincarnation in the beginning, and oh! I just loved the way you gave character development to Akashi as well as the the rest of the unique and interesting characters in the Naruto verse. And when you did Killer B🤣😎🥇i must say as a person who's watched Naruto that's would be something only the real killer B would rap. Kudos to you our wonderful Author. Carpe diem.
It's a great read so far. I enjoyed the MC's growth. The change in POV brings a realistic touch to the relationships formed and explores the humane nature of other personas. Time-skips are well-executed. Overall, entertaining> Thumbs Up Author-San! -Status Ch 29 Return.
Наконец-то фанфик, который приятно читать! Развитие событий ЛОГИЧНОЕ! Я уже читал фанфики такой структуры на русском про узумаки и развитие клана, надеюсь сюжет и дальше будет таким же примерно, главное что бы этот фанфик закончили, а не как аналоги...
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So gooooood, I wish he was more calculating when making plans. Also I want to see more fuinjustu
Revelar spoiler Author messed up by making MC 3yr old. So many old geezer changing entire war plan 1hr before it because of his stupidly childish "advise" that no genius uzumaki could came up? Also, changing entire political and cultural tradition of their village because mc said they need varity of clan? Yea, this is clearly written by someone who've never work a single day in real world. A silly imagination of childish fantasy.
well it's a good book it has new way of going about uzumaki clan I hope they don't get involved with mito because she is a married and is a senju now they can also call back kusihna it will be a good twist don't you think
Revelar spoiler Exelente, me gusta las historias de construcción de aldeas diferentes a konoha[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
it's always good to read well written uzumaki stories, the clan has the most potential in the Narutoverse but their are still so few stories.Write a long story of a couple hundred chapters and keep up the updating stabiluity.
Grammar could do some work, the characters need more fleshing out. But the idea is good, plot is good and most importantly it makes sense. MC isnt annoying and somewhat logical so that's good. Keep up the good work
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5 star review for a fanfic whose mc is not from konoha( you have no idea how hard this is to find.....everyone seems to love konoha and hiruzen😆😆😆) ps: interesting until chapter 9(no spoilers ...only the mc is a jinchuriki❤️❤️❤️)
Shameless author here giving himself only the best of the best When it comes to reviews! On an other note I am still pretty new to writing so advice is appreciated 👌
my assessment is very biased because the Uzumaki clan, my favorite clan in the Naruto universe. . ......................................................
this is the greatest I have ever read that has an Uzumaki mc. Great grammar as well