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this story will hit you with one cliche after another. basically there is some story is a novel full of cliche. ..... not good at all. it have every urban cliche you can imagine..
Love the story and i enjoy the fast paced, you are not wasting chapters with too much detail. Straight to the point. Hope to have more update because one chapter a week is terrible
So author great story just as I like an overpowered novel.But there are some problems such as1.Story is too fast paced.Try to explain everything a little.2.It seems emotionless. Dont't focus on a single character's emotion while avoiding others'. 3.MC is overpowered no doubt but why he is not using his powers. Hiding his powers like a coward. Make him intelligent not extremely cautious.4. Give some illustrations while you are at it.5. I am from India also
Captivating and great storyline. I hope it does not develop into a story that has mindless harem.
Hi bro, I hope you recover soon. Your story development, Character Design and world Background are really good, especially your pace of developing a story I like. There are spelling mistakes but no problem. I really hope you will continue to write the story at least 3000 chapters or more and don't drop it please. I really hope there will be stable and mass updates.
so here's my review on this novel Story is to fast faced character 👌 Up dating stability do mass release bro, I like to read this type of novel so it's good try reading it if you want. 😉😉😉😉
wish theres more chapters tbh :) good book so far looking forward to the future chapters
Hello Everyone. The story for now is in its initial phase and the the real plot development will begin now. The setting will move forwards in a wider scale and our main lead will explore the world. Continue reading and leave behind some power stones and also review and write your opinions.
Writing this after 70 Chapters.1. I know the language in my starting chapters is not at good level but it has improved with time. So if you are dropping the novel because of mistakes in language persist with few chapters.2. I have also been trying to edit my previous chapters as soon as possible. So with time all my chapters will rise up in quality.3. Now the story has started to build its base and soon it will move forward with many intriguing scenes to come. Enjoy the novel.
this story will hit you with one cliche after another. basically there is some story is a novel full of cliche. ..... not good at all. it have every urban cliche you can imagine..
Love the story and i enjoy the fast paced, you are not wasting chapters with too much detail. Straight to the point. Hope to have more update because one chapter a week is terrible
So author great story just as I like an overpowered novel.But there are some problems such as1.Story is too fast paced.Try to explain everything a little.2.It seems emotionless. Dont't focus on a single character's emotion while avoiding others'. 3.MC is overpowered no doubt but why he is not using his powers. Hiding his powers like a coward. Make him intelligent not extremely cautious.4. Give some illustrations while you are at it.5. I am from India also
Captivating and great storyline. I hope it does not develop into a story that has mindless harem.
Hi bro, I hope you recover soon. Your story development, Character Design and world Background are really good, especially your pace of developing a story I like. There are spelling mistakes but no problem. I really hope you will continue to write the story at least 3000 chapters or more and don't drop it please. I really hope there will be stable and mass updates.
so here's my review on this novel Story is to fast faced character 👌 Up dating stability do mass release bro, I like to read this type of novel so it's good try reading it if you want. 😉😉😉😉
wish theres more chapters tbh :) good book so far looking forward to the future chapters
Hello Everyone. The story for now is in its initial phase and the the real plot development will begin now. The setting will move forwards in a wider scale and our main lead will explore the world. Continue reading and leave behind some power stones and also review and write your opinions.
Writing this after 70 Chapters.1. I know the language in my starting chapters is not at good level but it has improved with time. So if you are dropping the novel because of mistakes in language persist with few chapters.2. I have also been trying to edit my previous chapters as soon as possible. So with time all my chapters will rise up in quality.3. Now the story has started to build its base and soon it will move forward with many intriguing scenes to come. Enjoy the novel.