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Hope u countinue this fic unique idea SI into a Great house at the time of the dance pls dont drop updating speed is a bit slow chapters are short IF possible pls try to improve on thoes two things Thanks for the chapter
Great fanfic if you didnt start to forget the plot of the story somehow. For example you have it as they are supporting raenys which is unrealistic women may not inherit she wasn’t even considered in the book. The great council was to decide between her son and visereys never her. You also seem to have his mom bossing them around a bit which is unrealistic as well because the women may not boss the men of the house around in Westeros or medieval times. The men are the leaders and bosses of a household even to their own mother they are set to inherit the household and men are considered superior in every way in Westeros and the medieval times. There are many reasons for this concerning ability to fight and not be out of condition from birthing and the huge risk that comes with it. Imagine for example Raenys took the throne and had no sons or daughters and dies birthing suddenly inheritence is called into question as is others trying to rise in power. Another important one is men can sleep with many women and know he is the father of all their child while a women sleeping with many women calls into question who the father is like what happened to rhaynera.
Interesting looking forward to more chapters Character development is done well enough Pls don’t drop Pls update more frequently 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
4 months and 5 chapters not worth the wait[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I wish to know if the MC will use hammer like Bobby B, or hammer and electricity like this fictional character:
Early to judge, but I appreciate how well the grammar and sentences are put together, and the slight/subtle reactions to the MC made by characters (Borros and Rhaenys body reaction to MC "intelligence/maturity").
I liked this because of the AU changes. I got bored of the same normal pre- Dance Era plot, I want some new unexpected plots and twists.
This is quite the unique take on things, as this is a first time to see a SI who is a Baratheon and in this era.
Read the chapters, they were great! Can't wait to see the legend of our boy grow, since the Author promises that the story would be nothing we have seen before.
Fanatic premise, just want to ask, will there be another reincarnated person in the story or not? Because it is something one would take into consideration when investing in a story.
I like how the MC mindset is mature and how his pasts life Job relates to his knowledge of in-depth knowledge of Westeros lore. Man, I'm just waiting to see how the power system works in this story. Will he be able to beat knights at a young age due to mindset advantage that could make him train harder and better, and understanding martial lessons better? Would he be able to elevate himself? Can't wait.
Great direction. Already like how he seemingly observes and act his mental age without being arrogant about it.
The author has definitely shown his ability in quality of writing, perfectly able to encapsulate the types of speech that the setting holds and lacks any spelling mistakes at all. With enough consistency and a steady developing storyline, I believe this can be a great book. My personal favourite is the justified pre-knowledge of the setting due to the MC’s previous lifes’ occupation. Not only does it perfectly explain the information that he knows, but also makes for a very mature and interesting background which he applies to the story. You have a great book here Author, take my powerstones and I eagerly await more chapters.
Hey there, Guess who? Yup, it's the author checking in! So, I've been deep in the creative zone, hammering away at the second chapter of our fanfiction, and I'm stoked to say that things are really starting to click. 🚀 Now, I'll admit, I'm no seasoned pro when it comes to writing – it's a learning curve, you know? That might mean the release dates for upcoming chapters could be a bit all over the place. But here's the scoop: I'm all in. I'm not hitting the brakes until this fiction is wrapped up and good to go. Your support means the world to me, seriously. Knowing you're along for the ride is like a mega dose of motivation. We're in this together, and I'm totally committed to delivering a story that'll keep you hooked till the very last word. Hang tight for more awesomeness headed your way! Catch you later,
Buenisima ...............,..................................................................................................................................................................................
Hope u countinue this fic unique idea SI into a Great house at the time of the dance pls dont drop updating speed is a bit slow chapters are short IF possible pls try to improve on thoes two things Thanks for the chapter
Great fanfic if you didnt start to forget the plot of the story somehow. For example you have it as they are supporting raenys which is unrealistic women may not inherit she wasn’t even considered in the book. The great council was to decide between her son and visereys never her. You also seem to have his mom bossing them around a bit which is unrealistic as well because the women may not boss the men of the house around in Westeros or medieval times. The men are the leaders and bosses of a household even to their own mother they are set to inherit the household and men are considered superior in every way in Westeros and the medieval times. There are many reasons for this concerning ability to fight and not be out of condition from birthing and the huge risk that comes with it. Imagine for example Raenys took the throne and had no sons or daughters and dies birthing suddenly inheritence is called into question as is others trying to rise in power. Another important one is men can sleep with many women and know he is the father of all their child while a women sleeping with many women calls into question who the father is like what happened to rhaynera.
Interesting looking forward to more chapters Character development is done well enough Pls don’t drop Pls update more frequently 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
4 months and 5 chapters not worth the wait[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I wish to know if the MC will use hammer like Bobby B, or hammer and electricity like this fictional character:
Early to judge, but I appreciate how well the grammar and sentences are put together, and the slight/subtle reactions to the MC made by characters (Borros and Rhaenys body reaction to MC "intelligence/maturity").
I liked this because of the AU changes. I got bored of the same normal pre- Dance Era plot, I want some new unexpected plots and twists.
This is quite the unique take on things, as this is a first time to see a SI who is a Baratheon and in this era.
Read the chapters, they were great! Can't wait to see the legend of our boy grow, since the Author promises that the story would be nothing we have seen before.
Fanatic premise, just want to ask, will there be another reincarnated person in the story or not? Because it is something one would take into consideration when investing in a story.
I like how the MC mindset is mature and how his pasts life Job relates to his knowledge of in-depth knowledge of Westeros lore. Man, I'm just waiting to see how the power system works in this story. Will he be able to beat knights at a young age due to mindset advantage that could make him train harder and better, and understanding martial lessons better? Would he be able to elevate himself? Can't wait.
Great direction. Already like how he seemingly observes and act his mental age without being arrogant about it.
The author has definitely shown his ability in quality of writing, perfectly able to encapsulate the types of speech that the setting holds and lacks any spelling mistakes at all. With enough consistency and a steady developing storyline, I believe this can be a great book. My personal favourite is the justified pre-knowledge of the setting due to the MC’s previous lifes’ occupation. Not only does it perfectly explain the information that he knows, but also makes for a very mature and interesting background which he applies to the story. You have a great book here Author, take my powerstones and I eagerly await more chapters.
Hey there, Guess who? Yup, it's the author checking in! So, I've been deep in the creative zone, hammering away at the second chapter of our fanfiction, and I'm stoked to say that things are really starting to click. 🚀 Now, I'll admit, I'm no seasoned pro when it comes to writing – it's a learning curve, you know? That might mean the release dates for upcoming chapters could be a bit all over the place. But here's the scoop: I'm all in. I'm not hitting the brakes until this fiction is wrapped up and good to go. Your support means the world to me, seriously. Knowing you're along for the ride is like a mega dose of motivation. We're in this together, and I'm totally committed to delivering a story that'll keep you hooked till the very last word. Hang tight for more awesomeness headed your way! Catch you later,
Buenisima ...............,..................................................................................................................................................................................