Starting Today I'll Work As A City Lord

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TrashyWriter01

Is this the same MC as the manwha or a different one? Bcuz i read this manwha already still reading it actually.

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Revox

good so far (= reminds me of "release that witch", one of my favourite novels. it lacks a little in the details of the kingdom building and the use of his golden finger(like how does he know certain things ?cement, glassmaking,traingplan for speacial ops etc ). but for a fanfic worth a read so far.

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GreenBlue17

I have decided to become shameless. It's because of readers who read the novel and left without giving this extremely beautifully written novel a review.

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Powwll

really good, its just that still no there yet. timeline its all over the place ( contruct 8 houses less than 10 days , Train a army of 100+ soldies less ta 15 days , if it continue in this pace, he will construct a whole city in 30 ) < < < that without any supernatural power . the history can be refined to be really good, its just not there yet.

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wormmusimsenja

I've been hoping for a good continuation of the story. So far, it's been quite good, although Lucas hasn't fully utilized his abilities, which I understand since it's still in the early stages. My suggestion is that Lucas should pay more attention to his people because, in my opinion, he's underutilizing them. Also, regarding his original world, I believe you could explore Lucas's story in his original world, such as learning to create something, finding a blueprint, or depicting Lucas's life back then.(translitor)

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CliffkunLolRekt

Pretty good i do hope the mc will get some seeds from earth to plant Every fruit and vegetable over time could be planted even forign plants Also if the mc can bring some of the more sturdy wood sapplings they could use that also May i give a suggjestion have the mc use poison on some of his enemys Cyanide would be interesting as i dont think that world has knollage about it Apple seeds would do wonders for it The mc could also line the streets with fruit trees and baskets bellow them to catch any fallen fruit they would be free to eat and help prevent starvation Btw the mc has not tried to bring animals to the new world yet he could bring some animals to be raised into a food sorce

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Hajun_G0d

I hope the buffalo girl is not in his harem. She's too dumb in the original story. ,.....,,...............,.....,,...............,.....,,...............,.....,,...............

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abandon_ship

Modernity is skillfully integrated into a fantasy world, with extremely likeable characters. Regarding supernatural forces... which maybe start apoearing when the snow melts? I suggest using dans: natural batteries corresponding to certain phenomena. Example: consuming a water and fire dan evolves your body to be able to manipulate or derive from nature fire & water, or maybe [evaporation] (not necessarily based on temperature). Or, you can make this world based on vitality. Supervitality energy starts appearing (ki) and devouring or digesting natural dans (like superbeasts or vitality crystals in their corpse or in herbs) allows you to grow your vitality & lifespan, gaining super evolutionary characteristics or even developing an exclusive 【skill】. [Throughout history, the question in pokitics has been: Who owns who? America answered it: *I own myself.]

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NORBOY6_hjc

Muy buena novela la trama va un poco lenta en general , pero aun asi es muy buena

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DaoistpIwg0B

amazing story 👏😀👏 im loving it so far. But I have mixed feeling with the update I want more chapters but I don't want it to be rushed and I know it is hard to write a story. So I will just wait and stockpile chapters. But keep going author [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Mr_Chess

I hope this is a better version than the original because im disappointed, i will return to read it when its 200+ chapters dont disappoint me author.

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Sky_TheEnder132

it's all good. It's because the original was already good and the grammar is good too. and nothing changes much from the original. i expect more from the Author.

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Xilionx

realmente espero que esto continúe... es una historia interesante e coerente ...............................espero de todo corazón que las personas dejen su honesta reseña para darle más visibilidad a la historia

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perroelquelolea1

la verdad la historia me está gustando mucho puede que sea algo parecida a la historia original pero me está gustando los cambios que estás haciendo en la historia espero con ansias los próximos capítulos

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DukeMaster

so far I'm enjoyed the fic i like how the mc abit more decisive and he actually used his system

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ParkerWD

Me gusta la historia, además de la personalidad del protagonista es muy buena, no se si esto es un fanfiction o una novela original, pero independientemente de ello, he disfruto mucho de esta novela.

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Setuka

I rlly like this novel

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shiro_2

Haven't read the Original, but i can tell it's better Please don't drop this.... I love a good Kingdom Building Stories and this is one of them

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Overseer123

good story like it a lot keep up the good work

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J3ffinh000

Muito bom mesmo. ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽 ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ 👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊