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Escribe una reseñait doesn't feel like a story a bunch of events mashed together in a specific order , there's a hardly any conversations between the characters and even when they exist they feel forced and the main characters personality is bland and overly obsessive all in all a good concept but a poor execution.
Great additional worlds. Chapters are short but story is coming along nicely. I would like to add big bang theory. Either way keep writing please
I enjoy the story a lot, but I want author-san to post more consistently. Other than that 10/0
5 estrellas.... Por fin una versión donde mc está Haley y no con Alex es bueno el cambio y hasta ahora va interesante pensé que habías dejado morir la novela por qué no actualizadas desde hace bastante tiempo.....
No la abandones plisss..................................................................................................................................................................................................................
it doesn't feel like a story a bunch of events mashed together in a specific order , there's a hardly any conversations between the characters and even when they exist they feel forced and the main characters personality is bland and overly obsessive all in all a good concept but a poor execution.
Great additional worlds. Chapters are short but story is coming along nicely. I would like to add big bang theory. Either way keep writing please
I enjoy the story a lot, but I want author-san to post more consistently. Other than that 10/0
5 estrellas.... Por fin una versión donde mc está Haley y no con Alex es bueno el cambio y hasta ahora va interesante pensé que habías dejado morir la novela por qué no actualizadas desde hace bastante tiempo.....
No la abandones plisss..................................................................................................................................................................................................................