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I have read the first four chapters and all I can say... WOW!!!! I love Serenica already nitty gritty get down in the dirt and fight. Excellent knowledge of the weapons she used, too. I can see you have done your homework. The flow, grammar, and pacing of this novel are on point. I would just like to see a tad more emotion.
I have read the first four chapters and all I can say... WOW!!!! I love Serenica already nitty gritty get down in the dirt and fight. Excellent knowledge of the weapons she used, too. I can see you have done your homework. The flow, grammar, and pacing of this novel are on point. I would just like to see a tad more emotion.