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Escribe una reseñaStory is good but the writing is confusing and bad. I dropped at 61 and still dont know why he cant level up or what levels really mean or how others see levels. Does others have a system that tells their levels? It doesn't explain the world really much either. I learned at chapter 10 that the story passes in a middle age fantasy world. Characters are bad. He suddenly changes and starts gaining strength and publicly uses ms but nobody questions how he does that. His eyes literally turns red bro why doesn't any character say anything about it. Anyways I don't recommend reading this.
Revelar spoilerThis one is a bit... flat. The characters almost speak with one 'voice' and its easy for my mind to drift due to the monotony. The mythical 'rewrite' could fix it, it has decent bones, but that hardly ever happens and doesn't help what we have now. If I manage to stick with it, I might change this review
My assumptions about extremely bad fanfiction on English and Asian platforms are becoming a reality. Such disgusting stories featuring characters from different worlds. You can write a story without these "Game Systems". Well, or an author is Asian who has a very poor understanding of Western fantasy. And even more so, they ruined Obito Uchiha. A classic for such works.
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It irritates me that I describe a dialogue, rather than making abut,I like everything else. MC is not straight-laced, but he is not cruel, and he does good if a problem appears in front of him.
Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
I like the story at the start but the way the paragraphs change or the lack of dialogue make the story lack something that doesn't make me like the characters are alive
The whole plot doesn’t make sense. This is a trash novel. The good reviews on this novel are either bots or payed people to rate this novel high. Their are a lot of plot holes in this novel. You won’t understand anything starting from chapter 1 onwards
Story is good but the writing is confusing and bad. I dropped at 61 and still dont know why he cant level up or what levels really mean or how others see levels. Does others have a system that tells their levels? It doesn't explain the world really much either. I learned at chapter 10 that the story passes in a middle age fantasy world. Characters are bad. He suddenly changes and starts gaining strength and publicly uses ms but nobody questions how he does that. His eyes literally turns red bro why doesn't any character say anything about it. Anyways I don't recommend reading this.
Revelar spoilerThis one is a bit... flat. The characters almost speak with one 'voice' and its easy for my mind to drift due to the monotony. The mythical 'rewrite' could fix it, it has decent bones, but that hardly ever happens and doesn't help what we have now. If I manage to stick with it, I might change this review
My assumptions about extremely bad fanfiction on English and Asian platforms are becoming a reality. Such disgusting stories featuring characters from different worlds. You can write a story without these "Game Systems". Well, or an author is Asian who has a very poor understanding of Western fantasy. And even more so, they ruined Obito Uchiha. A classic for such works.
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It irritates me that I describe a dialogue, rather than making abut,I like everything else. MC is not straight-laced, but he is not cruel, and he does good if a problem appears in front of him.
Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
I like the story at the start but the way the paragraphs change or the lack of dialogue make the story lack something that doesn't make me like the characters are alive
The whole plot doesn’t make sense. This is a trash novel. The good reviews on this novel are either bots or payed people to rate this novel high. Their are a lot of plot holes in this novel. You won’t understand anything starting from chapter 1 onwards