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Tensura: Rosemarry
Autor: Super3xlu5ive
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"I name you Rosemarry"
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This is my very first Fiction that I'm writing so there may be some Plot holes
English is also my 2nd language so my grammar may not be up to par so I'm saying sorry in advance for that
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Última versión:
Chapter 22: NOTICE: 1 years ago Volumen 1 : Prologue
Volumen 2 : An interesting Daemon
Volumen 3 : The Ancient Race
- 13 The Western Plains 1 years ago
- 14 The 3 giant brothers 1 years ago
- 15 A certain Scientist 1 years ago
- 16 A certain fairy in a certain labyrinth 1 years ago
- 17 The pink haired Daemon 1 years ago
- 18 The Roseate Lineage 1 years ago
- 19 The musings of the green haired Daemon 1 years ago
- 20 The red haired Daemon's offer 1 years ago
- 21 The aftermath 1 years ago
- 22 NOTICE: 1 years ago
Overall, it's quite good but the pace is a lil bit fast. The grammar is understandable enough but it would be better if the pov is in 3rd person. Try to also make the first letter of a sentence a capital just to its better to read. Story has potential to be good atleast. Keep up the good work author!