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This took 8 months to write and I am excited to announce that come October Ninth, 2023 this story will officially be completed!! I have sequels in the works as well as a few sidestory's to add to the main story, so stay tuned everyone!! And thanks for reading!! Signed Supergirlfan158
Honestly, the writing itself is atrocious with it swapping scenes so often and I honestly could not tell where I was after a while and how quickly it time skipped to the battle of Kage with no warning whatsoever. Also, you kept repeating lines and switching details about the character, going from a bunny to a wolf mask, and then back to a bunny. This story was so confusing to read that I didn't even get through the first chapter due to how chaotic it was.
This took 8 months to write and I am excited to announce that come October Ninth, 2023 this story will officially be completed!! I have sequels in the works as well as a few sidestory's to add to the main story, so stay tuned everyone!! And thanks for reading!! Signed Supergirlfan158
Honestly, the writing itself is atrocious with it swapping scenes so often and I honestly could not tell where I was after a while and how quickly it time skipped to the battle of Kage with no warning whatsoever. Also, you kept repeating lines and switching details about the character, going from a bunny to a wolf mask, and then back to a bunny. This story was so confusing to read that I didn't even get through the first chapter due to how chaotic it was.