I Will Live A Better Life!

LV 2

Fisherman_Dream

It's kind of boring, the protagonist only trusts the 'experience' of his past life, it has a very unstable and disorganized beginning, we can't even know what we're reading, whether it's the future or the present where the protagonist is living.

LV 4

Lazy_Fox111

Just like other fanfics, it has a great start but suffers progressive degradation in quality. Personally, I liked this fic mostly because of its great grammar and the concept of the MC's ability where he can do a simulation of his own future which was actually just him inheriting memories of his iterations from other timelines that was created due to his choices. There's actually a Mushoko Tensei fanfic that used a similar concept though I forgot the name of said fic. Anyway, my problem with this fic was that the delivery was somehow lacking and oftentimes need context. The same could also be said to the characters who tends to be two-dimensional in characterization and interaction. All in all, I dropped this fic because I couldn't no longer take the cringe. Sorry about that but this was what I felt in reading your fic. Well, despite what I said, please take care and 'hope your fic improves.

LV 13

Beamingkangaroo

Other world's magic is too far behind is in this fic? I'M IN BABY!!!!!

LV 4

Anthony_Chavez_6666

This fic is incredibly slow paced, you’ll end up skipping half the chapters. The mc is the classic isekai protagonist or in other words he’s an idiot and a spineless whimp when it comes to women. He keeps forgetting his own plans and past and it’s a complete mess.

LV 1

Random_0P_Being

It's quite a complicated story. At some point the cheat became like a simulation of the Future as the mc keeps getting depressed with the future iterations. And the main world is quite a mess with magic and curses, dragons, deamons. The story went downhill after the timeskip as the previously stated logic about the cheat got changed. Like even after 4 years and him using his cheat 25 times he is still a B rank mage as in he didn't get any feedback from the cheat while before the timeskip he gets feedback. So yeah it's a timepass read at best now.

LV 1

Rubi_Stone

A very boring story till now, cause author can't include his readers in any action so they can relate it to themselves. It s mostly about random power spikes that author gives to his mc, not planing etc. Just walking on a street and here you are a power up, and then mc makes such dumb choices, that you start doubting this authors thinking capabilities. Even earning money is of dumb brats way, just daydreaming about how it could have been, if he used situation In 2012-2013

LV 1

Outer_God_Azathoth

It's a Great Fanfic but if you are planning a harem, can you keep it to minimum like having 3 to 4 people at most. Great Writing, Hope it keeps updating as usual.

LV 3

Lao_Stev

I love your multi-fic world building, I just hate your character, he seems so one dimensional at times. He just has this mary sue type of nice harem guy personality.(Giving gifts to people) The fact that you used regression type cheat, is detrimental to the character. I love it when characters uses science and technology to make up the gap of their talent especially when it was shown he struggles alot with beings even with his advanced technology. But now nobu has grown way way too strong(possibly near creator class), there's not a same sense of danger anymore despite the new enemy being very dangerous. I hope the new arcs introduce new threats, because current Nobu solos the verse except that one entity. (Index and honkai should give him a challenge if you decide to add that.)

LV 4

Henil_Patel_6069

read till ch 15 but so far everything is really chaotic and scenes changes suddenly for example he was talking to saito and zero, and suddenly scene changes. even power he i setting is confusing as this AU mixed universe has differ kind of powers. sometimes author showed that in combat training he got future knowledge but he does not give wht knowledge he got at the a time but will say it in future chapters which makes is less coordinated, less interesting and more frustrating for readers to connect with the novel. as mentioned in synopsis after ch 15 it will be danmachi so, will give this novel a chance for few more chs hoping for some improvement.

LV 14

TheWandaShip

in chapter 1 it says Nobu is 8 years old. But then suddenly in Chapter 3 he is a 5 year old??? what the freak is going on? Is the inconsistancies going to continue for the rest of the story?? if so then i'm out

LV 14

Z_Ril

When one reads a multiverse fanfiction, we expect it to begin with meeting a god that'll give us powers onto our journey, added with cringy sentence and bla bla bla. But this fanfic is different. I can guarantee that this fanfic is going to be the best multiverse fanfiction you'll ever see. The quality is simply out of this world. The mc is not stupid. The mc is not cringy. The mc also has 'cheat' that can allow him to be one of the strongest. and this cheat wouldn't make our mc immediately OP. it's just so fantastic. i highly recommend.

LV 14

ArgonautLifeLine

this was a surprisingly good read, i didn't expect the story to go the way it does but in a good sense. the way author develop the character, the world and the plot is written so intricately that i got confused sometimes but that's on me anyway it's a good fanfic and I wish the author the best in their future endeavors

LV 4

Lone_Philosopher

18 chapters and it's quite good... It would have been great if more context was given for those who aren't familiar with the animes...

LV 14

Gabriel_Rodrigues_4008

I have to be honest and say that at first I wasn't one hundred percent serious about this story, but when I read chapter by chapter I was surprised, great writing with wonderful details such as: the fact that you can only have 3 spells, I've read other novels and I didn't I knew about this rule, I went to the wiki and saw that it really exists, that's all this work and the author won me over. I highly recommend reading, great work.

LV 3

Orsted_sama

Finally caught up with the latest chapter after four months, and I've reread it. I now understand everything clearly. Love your fic, author. However, there was a bit of rush in delving into the FATE aspect. I think you might have added it on a whim. The writing is great, as always, nothing less than my favorite fanfic author. I've read your previous fic too, and that was amazing as well. All in all, what matters most is that your fics maintain logical consistency. Again, thank you for the amazing fic. I hope you consider making the MC less overpowered; I'd love to see him struggle. [Opps.....My Sadistic Tendency Showing again]

LV 2

Fisherman_Dream

It's amazing, you won't regret it, if you don't understand the chapter, go back to the previous chapter and read until the end, all the chapters make a connection with each other incredibly complete, there is no hole in the plot for being in different times or current,

LV 4

Lizrock

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