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exelente historia que se enriquese con cada capitulo y nos ase desear mas capitulos
Alright, let's do this quick, First of all I wanna apologize to the author for not giving this story a chance for months because of one review that I read and commented on, the review in question said that it was ridiculous for jorah to be given the seat of iron islands, and I agree, but the review made it seem like Jorah Mormont got what he wanted, but he didn't, he compromised for a deal in which if the iron born rebel, he would get them (the iron island seat.) From Jon Arryn, that's pretty fair to me if Jorah could contribute to the war massively. Now for the story, it's great, the pacing is amazing, the fleshing out of characters are top notch, even from the simplest merchant from lannister port to the legendary soldier who led the 14 men when the wildlings attacked, as for the plot, well just like how Ned Stark gave Jorah Mormont new plots of lands, the plot of this story is coherent, and consistent too. So yeah overall? Highly recommended story.
Revelar spoiler
It's a very good story so far you have my support keep writing 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Update soon please I love this fanfic I would buy patron but I’m broke soo😂
una historia interesante que evita caer en cliches sobre la rencarnacion en los fanfic
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ridiculous. he asks for the iron islands as a reward for the war. this is the stupidest thing ever. just because he lost soldiers in the war doesn't mean he should be promoted to a lord paramount. if this is the first chapter I'm dreading what happens after.
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I love the story so far. ......................................................................................... ❤❤
I like this fanfiction it's one of the mormont ff👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
The most refined fan fiction on ASOIAF written for our Mormonts. Read it, Love it and then go to Patreon to pay for it. Thank u.
It's a very good story so far you have my support keep writing 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
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will you post the whole story here or will you post some of it and then only post on patreon?..............................................................
The story progression is quite good, but it's a pity that if you want to read the episodes in advance you will have to pay money.Personally, I'd like to know who the characters from the current world are, where they come from, what occupation they do.
exelente historia que se enriquese con cada capitulo y nos ase desear mas capitulos
Alright, let's do this quick, First of all I wanna apologize to the author for not giving this story a chance for months because of one review that I read and commented on, the review in question said that it was ridiculous for jorah to be given the seat of iron islands, and I agree, but the review made it seem like Jorah Mormont got what he wanted, but he didn't, he compromised for a deal in which if the iron born rebel, he would get them (the iron island seat.) From Jon Arryn, that's pretty fair to me if Jorah could contribute to the war massively. Now for the story, it's great, the pacing is amazing, the fleshing out of characters are top notch, even from the simplest merchant from lannister port to the legendary soldier who led the 14 men when the wildlings attacked, as for the plot, well just like how Ned Stark gave Jorah Mormont new plots of lands, the plot of this story is coherent, and consistent too. So yeah overall? Highly recommended story.
Revelar spoiler It's a very good story so far you have my support keep writing 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Update soon please I love this fanfic I would buy patron but I’m broke soo😂
una historia interesante que evita caer en cliches sobre la rencarnacion en los fanfic
[img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
ridiculous. he asks for the iron islands as a reward for the war. this is the stupidest thing ever. just because he lost soldiers in the war doesn't mean he should be promoted to a lord paramount. if this is the first chapter I'm dreading what happens after.
Revelar spoiler [img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I love the story so far. ......................................................................................... ❤❤
I like this fanfiction it's one of the mormont ff👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
The most refined fan fiction on ASOIAF written for our Mormonts. Read it, Love it and then go to Patreon to pay for it. Thank u.
It's a very good story so far you have my support keep writing 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
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will you post the whole story here or will you post some of it and then only post on patreon?..............................................................
The story progression is quite good, but it's a pity that if you want to read the episodes in advance you will have to pay money.Personally, I'd like to know who the characters from the current world are, where they come from, what occupation they do.