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I really like the red hair girl. But the story is really good, the character is overpower but still weak because there other people who are stronger than him. but overall I give this book a 8/10 in my opinion
Chapter 13 please. This good he women seems op she could defientely beat people like anos voldigoad, akutosai and even featherine. I love how loving she is to Noboru
I appreciate the mysterious red-haired girl looking out for Noboru. The character Noboru is overpowered, but not due to a boring system like other novels, which is a positive aspect. He is also a disowned prince which is trope i have not seen
The protagonist feels real; he's not evil from the beginning, unlike other novels where they get a system and start R*ping or mind-controlling others. This isn't even sexually exploitative, which is good. The character is overpowered, not because of the boring system like every other protagonist who needs to be Sung Jing Woo. This is good. I like the mysterious red-haired girl looking out for Noboru.
This is actually really good for your first novel and compared to your fan fiction. The world background could use some work cause you only have one kingdom the Phoenix kingdom but I like how all other nations' leaders are related. the writing quality can be improved there are some mistakes or missing words
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Ayo this is fire, You need cook up more chapters my g. Noboru is too hard man. This just keep terminating them weak elite knights the cronus.
Revelar spoiler Post more. Everything is good. The MC is betrayed, neglected, and scapegoated. He is OP, like more OP than Anos. He goes from innocent to savage. He is like Gohan.
Oh God, you've set up the perfect plot with neglect and betrayal. It kind of reminds me of fanfiction but done right. I love how overpowered Noboru is; he's definitely outerversal. I can't wait to see how Noboru humbles his siblings and puts Kaito Danzo in his place, as well as his parents.
I love the character Noboru and how he changes from a naive, innocent boy to a savage. The red and black omni energy seems deadly, and the red-haired girl watching him is interesting. You make it so easy to hate the kingdom and Noboru's family, apart from his grandpa. I can't wait to see who this Shin is.
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Amazing book, super cool concepts and is amazing at portraying power dynamics such as boundless, outterversel etc! A MUST READ AND SUPPORT YALL!!
I really like the red hair girl. But the story is really good, the character is overpower but still weak because there other people who are stronger than him. but overall I give this book a 8/10 in my opinion
Chapter 13 please. This good he women seems op she could defientely beat people like anos voldigoad, akutosai and even featherine. I love how loving she is to Noboru
I appreciate the mysterious red-haired girl looking out for Noboru. The character Noboru is overpowered, but not due to a boring system like other novels, which is a positive aspect. He is also a disowned prince which is trope i have not seen
The protagonist feels real; he's not evil from the beginning, unlike other novels where they get a system and start R*ping or mind-controlling others. This isn't even sexually exploitative, which is good. The character is overpowered, not because of the boring system like every other protagonist who needs to be Sung Jing Woo. This is good. I like the mysterious red-haired girl looking out for Noboru.
This is actually really good for your first novel and compared to your fan fiction. The world background could use some work cause you only have one kingdom the Phoenix kingdom but I like how all other nations' leaders are related. the writing quality can be improved there are some mistakes or missing words
Revelar spoiler Ayo this is fire, You need cook up more chapters my g. Noboru is too hard man. This just keep terminating them weak elite knights the cronus.
Revelar spoiler Post more. Everything is good. The MC is betrayed, neglected, and scapegoated. He is OP, like more OP than Anos. He goes from innocent to savage. He is like Gohan.
Oh God, you've set up the perfect plot with neglect and betrayal. It kind of reminds me of fanfiction but done right. I love how overpowered Noboru is; he's definitely outerversal. I can't wait to see how Noboru humbles his siblings and puts Kaito Danzo in his place, as well as his parents.
I love the character Noboru and how he changes from a naive, innocent boy to a savage. The red and black omni energy seems deadly, and the red-haired girl watching him is interesting. You make it so easy to hate the kingdom and Noboru's family, apart from his grandpa. I can't wait to see who this Shin is.
Revelar spoiler
Amazing book, super cool concepts and is amazing at portraying power dynamics such as boundless, outterversel etc! A MUST READ AND SUPPORT YALL!!