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No Harem !?!? Instant 5 star review, and never trust any novel that said the MC(The transmigrator) is an Extra.
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Well, the storyline is good, but I think as another author, the story is progressing quite fast, which most of the readers don't like. I think you should consider the storyline a little, and increase the details. Like in the second chapter when the MC, got that fruit, it would be better if the journey was a little bit more detailed. By the way, a good story, I appreciate your work.
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No Harem !?!? Instant 5 star review, and never trust any novel that said the MC(The transmigrator) is an Extra.
Well, the storyline is good, but I think as another author, the story is progressing quite fast, which most of the readers don't like. I think you should consider the storyline a little, and increase the details. Like in the second chapter when the MC, got that fruit, it would be better if the journey was a little bit more detailed. By the way, a good story, I appreciate your work.