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the writing quality in this book is a lot better then I expected (its so good I'm writing a review for the first time in 3 years). the storyline is intriguing and the characters seem interesting. give this book a read, I recommend it.
So far like the plot of the story. MC is average but likable, common MC for me. Characters are ok, some annoying ,some funny and likable. 1 year dead to kill the Ghost king,that killed Original Father.Waiting for the author to make that happened. MC being to forgetful with the events when he suppose the author.(LOL🤣 but the normal for some authors not to remeber all the details😅) curious what is the plan with the original main characters? Still curious how did the MC destory this world.Did everybody dies or was invades by demons. oh well.
It's almost March end , he doesn't even bother to check even his own novel . No updates ,No updates , No updates ... ..
updates are not available . I have already finished reading all the chapters . Not uploaded chapters even though a month had passed .
I'm only a few chapters in but the story is very interesting and the writing is high-tier. I'm excited to see where this goes! The author is a very nice person and I wish them success
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My favorite novel! I just wish there were more chapters. The character development is great and the backstory of the main character is very intriguing.
Never knew I was missing a gangster isekai till now definitely recommend reading! The only thing I wish is that we could get more chaps 🥺
Read about 40 chaps and what can I say this story took me by surprise. I was a little worried because I thought the story would drag but no almost every chapter kept my focus and was interesting. I'm really looking forward to the future chaps and academy arc but i'm going to stack for a while tho~
There are only a handuful of authors that I think could pull of such a good start to a story. You just want to keep reading and you just never lost interest
so basically mc is to become king of underworld but mc following no killing protocol. I am not talking about unneccesory killing- I'm talking about neccessory killing. mc doesn't even killed the villain(done a lot of bad things) who came to assasinate mc... Mostly mc make everyone unconcious even if they could potentially harm him in future or they could become unexpected trouble easily for his plan.. Yeah that is very very annoying and dumb . I don't know what author is thinking but it's already many times happened that mc not kill someone who should be killed to make things easier... It's not as if killing was difficult for him.. and no this is not slice of life- mc have very cruel past of betrayal and fking anihilation of his whole family but still mc following no killing plan .
As of chapter 42, This story is perfect magical mafia fantasy that I never knew I needed. The story telling is wonderfully written with little noticeable grammatical errors. The author updates frequently with every chapter putting the entire story together in an easy to understand way. The background and world-building progresses as the story goes on. The character designs are the only issue I as we are introduced to a big cast early on it’s hard to remember how all of them look like. All in all a very good book with great potential.
is really interesting. I am interested in how the mc will develop , although I still think that it does not seem so much a mafioso as we started the story there is time for a good development. good job if I don’t explain myself well, English is not my mother tongue, I’m sorry,
I'm really enjoying the story, mc is great, and i think the whole beginning was well written. the author clearly knows what he's doing. I'm looking forward to the academy arc. highly recommend.
Well, the story till now was very eye-catching and was great to read the concept of not being a normal mob but a mafia mob who is not free but heavily restricted from the start is also new. And as I see it this story have tremendous amount of capaycity to grow, and i don't know about the future but till now the explaining of the characters and their side story did not make me feel like that the story is detached from the mc because in most story when showing side character story they detached themselves from the main story frame. The grammar is good 👍. Story devlopment till now was also good. But I did think that the chapters are a bit small but the update stability is fare so Idk. If you haven't decided upon reading this than give it a try.
The story seems really thought out, and the main character is somewhat relatable to me...I usually don't read mafia novels, but this one really intrigues me as I can't stop scrolling down. It jumps straight into the main story which I really like. All in all a great novel. Good luck!
Review: As I picked up "I Became The Mafia Boss Inside The Novel", I found myself gripped by a curious mix of anticipation and dread. The synopsis seemed to promise a unique spin on the familiar trope of transmigration, and as a dedicated reader of fantasy, I was intrigued. Here was an author, Elias Vin Castellano, not only reincarnating into his own novel but as a character so insignificant he did not even make it to the original script. And it wasn't just any novel, but a dark tale of a world heading towards ruin, a narrative birthed from the writer's own despair and anger. I expected a story filled with complex characters, unexpected plot twists, and plenty of drama, considering the premise of our protagonist being the successor of a Mafia family imprisoned in a world doomed for destruction. Based on the synopsis, I was certain the narrative would delve deep into Elias' struggle for survival and ascension in the underworld, balancing his knowledge as the author of this world with the harsh realities of his newfound existence. One of my expectations was to witness Elias grapple with his past, his regrets and his hopes as he strives to overcome his fate. How does one survive in a world they themselves designed for destruction? How do you outwit characters when they've taken on lives of their own, diverging from the paths you initially intended? The stakes seemed to be astronomically high, and I was ready to see Elias take them head-on. My other expectation revolved around the world-building. I anticipated seeing the author's representation of the Mafia world - its dark underbelly, power struggles, internal politics, and the omnipresent danger. I looked forward to a vivid, immersive, and possibly unsettling portrayal of this criminal underworld. I expected to be pulled into the narrative, to be just as desperate as Elias for his survival. There was also the interesting aspect of metafiction. Elias' predicament presented the possibility for some truly reflective and self-aware moments. As a reader, I was excited to see how the story would use this element to its advantage, providing an insightful commentary on the writing process itself and exploring the idea of an author's responsibility towards his characters and narrative. In conclusion, "I Became The Mafia Boss Inside The Novel" had me looking forward to a thrilling, dark, and self-reflective tale of survival, one where the protagonist is not only pitted against the world he created but also against himself. It was a novel that promised to challenge my preconceptions about the transmigration trope, while serving up a good dose of suspense and criminal intrigue. And I was more than ready to dive in.
I think this story a lot of potential... and the author writing style is also very good(At least to me).I'm waiting for more, Just don't drop it Author👍👌
It's actually quite good, the writing and it's style is quite good. To the readers I would say give it a try....
Throughout the age of humanity, man has discovered four innermost callings; later generations then referred to such callings as “man's true romance”. Man dreamed to explored the vastness space. Man aspire to pilot mechas and conquer lands and the sky. Man long for a thrilling and exciting battle against fate. And finally, Man discovered their instinctual yearning for the epitome of... coolness. When one thinks of coolness, plenty of things come to mind, but this story is merely one of them. Mafia. Well dressed fancy wiseguys, enormous wealth and beauties, intimidating presence, and a thousand subordinates under his hand. To be a Mafia Boss — a man that conquers people through fear and respect. But this is not a story of being a simple scum. It is not about simply crime. It is about romance, family, redemption and trust... because even among thieves, there is honor to be found. *** The MC is anti-hero not a villain. He's confident, smooth talker, straight forward and ruthless. He would kill and use anyone if needed, but despite that he prefers to not see bloodshed at all as he's traumatized of his past. But if needed, he will do so. He is pragmatic but also emotional. Ask your questions here.
the writing quality in this book is a lot better then I expected (its so good I'm writing a review for the first time in 3 years). the storyline is intriguing and the characters seem interesting. give this book a read, I recommend it.
So far like the plot of the story. MC is average but likable, common MC for me. Characters are ok, some annoying ,some funny and likable. 1 year dead to kill the Ghost king,that killed Original Father.Waiting for the author to make that happened. MC being to forgetful with the events when he suppose the author.(LOL🤣 but the normal for some authors not to remeber all the details😅) curious what is the plan with the original main characters? Still curious how did the MC destory this world.Did everybody dies or was invades by demons. oh well.
It's almost March end , he doesn't even bother to check even his own novel . No updates ,No updates , No updates ... ..
updates are not available . I have already finished reading all the chapters . Not uploaded chapters even though a month had passed .
I'm only a few chapters in but the story is very interesting and the writing is high-tier. I'm excited to see where this goes! The author is a very nice person and I wish them success
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] you are really doing a good job at the book keep it up
My favorite novel! I just wish there were more chapters. The character development is great and the backstory of the main character is very intriguing.
Never knew I was missing a gangster isekai till now definitely recommend reading! The only thing I wish is that we could get more chaps 🥺
Read about 40 chaps and what can I say this story took me by surprise. I was a little worried because I thought the story would drag but no almost every chapter kept my focus and was interesting. I'm really looking forward to the future chaps and academy arc but i'm going to stack for a while tho~
There are only a handuful of authors that I think could pull of such a good start to a story. You just want to keep reading and you just never lost interest
so basically mc is to become king of underworld but mc following no killing protocol. I am not talking about unneccesory killing- I'm talking about neccessory killing. mc doesn't even killed the villain(done a lot of bad things) who came to assasinate mc... Mostly mc make everyone unconcious even if they could potentially harm him in future or they could become unexpected trouble easily for his plan.. Yeah that is very very annoying and dumb . I don't know what author is thinking but it's already many times happened that mc not kill someone who should be killed to make things easier... It's not as if killing was difficult for him.. and no this is not slice of life- mc have very cruel past of betrayal and fking anihilation of his whole family but still mc following no killing plan .
As of chapter 42, This story is perfect magical mafia fantasy that I never knew I needed. The story telling is wonderfully written with little noticeable grammatical errors. The author updates frequently with every chapter putting the entire story together in an easy to understand way. The background and world-building progresses as the story goes on. The character designs are the only issue I as we are introduced to a big cast early on it’s hard to remember how all of them look like. All in all a very good book with great potential.
is really interesting. I am interested in how the mc will develop , although I still think that it does not seem so much a mafioso as we started the story there is time for a good development. good job if I don’t explain myself well, English is not my mother tongue, I’m sorry,
I'm really enjoying the story, mc is great, and i think the whole beginning was well written. the author clearly knows what he's doing. I'm looking forward to the academy arc. highly recommend.
Well, the story till now was very eye-catching and was great to read the concept of not being a normal mob but a mafia mob who is not free but heavily restricted from the start is also new. And as I see it this story have tremendous amount of capaycity to grow, and i don't know about the future but till now the explaining of the characters and their side story did not make me feel like that the story is detached from the mc because in most story when showing side character story they detached themselves from the main story frame. The grammar is good 👍. Story devlopment till now was also good. But I did think that the chapters are a bit small but the update stability is fare so Idk. If you haven't decided upon reading this than give it a try.
The story seems really thought out, and the main character is somewhat relatable to me...I usually don't read mafia novels, but this one really intrigues me as I can't stop scrolling down. It jumps straight into the main story which I really like. All in all a great novel. Good luck!
Review: As I picked up "I Became The Mafia Boss Inside The Novel", I found myself gripped by a curious mix of anticipation and dread. The synopsis seemed to promise a unique spin on the familiar trope of transmigration, and as a dedicated reader of fantasy, I was intrigued. Here was an author, Elias Vin Castellano, not only reincarnating into his own novel but as a character so insignificant he did not even make it to the original script. And it wasn't just any novel, but a dark tale of a world heading towards ruin, a narrative birthed from the writer's own despair and anger. I expected a story filled with complex characters, unexpected plot twists, and plenty of drama, considering the premise of our protagonist being the successor of a Mafia family imprisoned in a world doomed for destruction. Based on the synopsis, I was certain the narrative would delve deep into Elias' struggle for survival and ascension in the underworld, balancing his knowledge as the author of this world with the harsh realities of his newfound existence. One of my expectations was to witness Elias grapple with his past, his regrets and his hopes as he strives to overcome his fate. How does one survive in a world they themselves designed for destruction? How do you outwit characters when they've taken on lives of their own, diverging from the paths you initially intended? The stakes seemed to be astronomically high, and I was ready to see Elias take them head-on. My other expectation revolved around the world-building. I anticipated seeing the author's representation of the Mafia world - its dark underbelly, power struggles, internal politics, and the omnipresent danger. I looked forward to a vivid, immersive, and possibly unsettling portrayal of this criminal underworld. I expected to be pulled into the narrative, to be just as desperate as Elias for his survival. There was also the interesting aspect of metafiction. Elias' predicament presented the possibility for some truly reflective and self-aware moments. As a reader, I was excited to see how the story would use this element to its advantage, providing an insightful commentary on the writing process itself and exploring the idea of an author's responsibility towards his characters and narrative. In conclusion, "I Became The Mafia Boss Inside The Novel" had me looking forward to a thrilling, dark, and self-reflective tale of survival, one where the protagonist is not only pitted against the world he created but also against himself. It was a novel that promised to challenge my preconceptions about the transmigration trope, while serving up a good dose of suspense and criminal intrigue. And I was more than ready to dive in.
I think this story a lot of potential... and the author writing style is also very good(At least to me).I'm waiting for more, Just don't drop it Author👍👌
It's actually quite good, the writing and it's style is quite good. To the readers I would say give it a try....
Throughout the age of humanity, man has discovered four innermost callings; later generations then referred to such callings as “man's true romance”. Man dreamed to explored the vastness space. Man aspire to pilot mechas and conquer lands and the sky. Man long for a thrilling and exciting battle against fate. And finally, Man discovered their instinctual yearning for the epitome of... coolness. When one thinks of coolness, plenty of things come to mind, but this story is merely one of them. Mafia. Well dressed fancy wiseguys, enormous wealth and beauties, intimidating presence, and a thousand subordinates under his hand. To be a Mafia Boss — a man that conquers people through fear and respect. But this is not a story of being a simple scum. It is not about simply crime. It is about romance, family, redemption and trust... because even among thieves, there is honor to be found. *** The MC is anti-hero not a villain. He's confident, smooth talker, straight forward and ruthless. He would kill and use anyone if needed, but despite that he prefers to not see bloodshed at all as he's traumatized of his past. But if needed, he will do so. He is pragmatic but also emotional. Ask your questions here.