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An enthralling beginning, captivating carrying itself with elegance to tell a gripping story one that indicates the testament and will for the survival of the human race and it's capabilities. I really feel like an author leaves chunks of their personality through out their works and I do see it here *cough cough* xD Please mind you I am not well versed in grammar nor will I pretend to be, but this story is able to engage with its impressive environments! Aaron and Serena are written very well while their situation gives. This is one of the best planned out books I seen in awhile as it knows how to keep the action going without getting boring which is amazing! The flow keeps it exciting and fresh so I can see why people would flock to read Aaron as it is gripping and compelling. I am an ample judge of well produced titles and this one I can keep going back to. Good Job!
Very good Grammer, word choice, and structure. It was very fun to read and had tropes which built upon each other quite well. I think that this book has great potential. Keep writing author!
I like the world-building and the element of Sci-fi post-apocalypse in the story. The start of the story is also written pretty well, and it is enjoyable to follow the MC's journey. Overall, this is a solid good work for the Scif-fi genre.
This is a well-written, action packed, sci-fi story. Every chapter leaves you at the edge of your seat for more. There are typographical errors here and there, but nothing too distracting from the reading experience. Definitely worth the read.
its my basically second novel and im loving it, loved the MC and Serena is just soooo good action and story pacing is amazing!
This is what happens when you let AI do everything for you! A world ended by AI, good concept and with a good story line. Highly recommended for those who like AI and post-apocalyptic world.
First off this story is really engaging and pulls you into the plot right away. Loved the author's writing style and vivid descriptions, both enhancing the plot and making it easy to understand what was happening. Grammar was also on point. As for world-building, it was pretty good although I did feel a little weird about Clara, not sure what to make of her yet. It's mixed feeling rn but maybe she'll grow onto me as the story goes (who knows). Anyway, other characters were really well done, again amazing descriptions of them. Author also portraited their emotions brilliant, allowing for the reader to feel and understand what the characters were feeling in the moment. Aaron's character especially was well written. I typically don't like stories with characters who have lost their memories (mostly because it's not done correctly / becomes cringe) but I actually want to continue reading this because it's really good. Great job author! Can't wait to see what you have in store for the rest of the book.
The premise is truly captivating. The pacing is a bit fast and perhaps rushed on timed but I feel like you slowly get used to the pace. I must say, I couldn't stop reading once I started. The grammar needs a bit of work but would recommend it if you are looking for fun read
This book was as entertaining and unpredictable as a game of charades with a group of mime artists. The characters were so vivid and amusing, they could easily have their own stand-up comedy show. The plot weaved a riotous journey with more unexpected turns than a meandering river. Every chapter was an explosion of humor, suspense, and sheer entertainment. To put it simply, if you're looking for a read that's as refreshingly funny as it is intriguing, this book is your ticket to a fun-filled escapade. So, sit back, relax, and let the laughter commence! Rating: 5/5 stars. It's a chuckle fest from start to finish!
Sci-Fi novels about apocalyptical theme or A.I stuffs aren't that much of my cup of tea but I read some if the whole story caught my attention and this novel is one of them. I won't comment any further since for me, this is great. Keep writing! ^_^
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four chapters, four chapters, why only four chapters???? Fay you can't do this to me man! How can you write something this good and ask me to review at only four chapters?? There isn't enough to make a proper review on but this book, im def sticking around, Fay don't ever drop this book ;-;
Great story Mc starts with a loss of memories, it has a lot of potential, the novel is still early and it will grow with more chapters added. If you like this kind of theme give it a try, I would like more pictured scenes thats my only downside, other than that its good.
Here's a critical review for this book. Please do not read if you're not prepared to face criticism (nah, just kidding [img=recommend]) The writing style was definitely constant and engaging, however, there are times when the scenes felt rushed or lacks details. I pointed some out through comments, but I'm not really that good when it comes to grammar (I rely mostly on grammar checkers, but still have a lot of slip-ups), so pardon me if you find it hard to understand sometimes. The worldbuilding is good, but I still find it hard to understand one scene where the the doctor asked for them to "save humanity". I mean, they just got suddenly attacked by a robot, and then that line came. It was a surprise, literally. The emotional ups and downs were a big plus. And the description of their appearances were great. Other than that, I guess I'm cool. Again, it's a wonderful work full of promise! Keep it up, author!
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Honestly one of the most unique stories I have read in a while. I love how smooth and interactive the characters are. Very fun and easy to read, I enjoyed it a lot.
Great novel! An MC that starts with amnesia + an AI system, as a Sci-Fi fan, Aaron has the makings of an exciting adventure! Quality writing, which is relatively rare nowadays... Check it out for a fun thrilling read~
It's too early to rate properly, but the four chapters that have been released have blown my mind. The synergy between events and the careful yet smooth choice of words are both easy to understand and fun to read. Aaron seems like an interesting protagonist, and the premise of the story is unique. As I said, it's too early, so it isn't easy to judge other characters. However, even with the minuscule number of chapters, this novel has caught my fantasy. Keep up the good work, author!
Its a 5 star for, due to the amount of chaos going on, I'm quite the fan of Chaos, its very exciting, the only part i hold dislike in this novel, is the fact that the dad died, I know its for the Plot but like.... COME ON MAN! I already started to like him, But thanks for the good read Author San!
The writing quality is good. Just have minimal typographical and grammatical errors and it'll be perfect. I immediately fell in love with the character, especially Aria. The plot is really interesting!
The plot of the story is quite interesting, a little chaotic, but it is interesting what will happen next.I hope the chapters will not keep you waiting :)
The story is good, in general terms, I liked it. I will wait for new chapters from the author and further development of the plot. Thanks for the chapters, champ.
Can I say "wow" out loud, this is a truly well written book that depicts so much emotion within the walls of its characters, this book literally jumps to life. Love the story telling and the theme, an inspirational work of art for sure that will keep you glued to the screen!
An enthralling beginning, captivating carrying itself with elegance to tell a gripping story one that indicates the testament and will for the survival of the human race and it's capabilities. I really feel like an author leaves chunks of their personality through out their works and I do see it here *cough cough* xD Please mind you I am not well versed in grammar nor will I pretend to be, but this story is able to engage with its impressive environments! Aaron and Serena are written very well while their situation gives. This is one of the best planned out books I seen in awhile as it knows how to keep the action going without getting boring which is amazing! The flow keeps it exciting and fresh so I can see why people would flock to read Aaron as it is gripping and compelling. I am an ample judge of well produced titles and this one I can keep going back to. Good Job!
Very good Grammer, word choice, and structure. It was very fun to read and had tropes which built upon each other quite well. I think that this book has great potential. Keep writing author!
I like the world-building and the element of Sci-fi post-apocalypse in the story. The start of the story is also written pretty well, and it is enjoyable to follow the MC's journey. Overall, this is a solid good work for the Scif-fi genre.
This is a well-written, action packed, sci-fi story. Every chapter leaves you at the edge of your seat for more. There are typographical errors here and there, but nothing too distracting from the reading experience. Definitely worth the read.
its my basically second novel and im loving it, loved the MC and Serena is just soooo good action and story pacing is amazing!
This is what happens when you let AI do everything for you! A world ended by AI, good concept and with a good story line. Highly recommended for those who like AI and post-apocalyptic world.
First off this story is really engaging and pulls you into the plot right away. Loved the author's writing style and vivid descriptions, both enhancing the plot and making it easy to understand what was happening. Grammar was also on point. As for world-building, it was pretty good although I did feel a little weird about Clara, not sure what to make of her yet. It's mixed feeling rn but maybe she'll grow onto me as the story goes (who knows). Anyway, other characters were really well done, again amazing descriptions of them. Author also portraited their emotions brilliant, allowing for the reader to feel and understand what the characters were feeling in the moment. Aaron's character especially was well written. I typically don't like stories with characters who have lost their memories (mostly because it's not done correctly / becomes cringe) but I actually want to continue reading this because it's really good. Great job author! Can't wait to see what you have in store for the rest of the book.
The premise is truly captivating. The pacing is a bit fast and perhaps rushed on timed but I feel like you slowly get used to the pace. I must say, I couldn't stop reading once I started. The grammar needs a bit of work but would recommend it if you are looking for fun read
This book was as entertaining and unpredictable as a game of charades with a group of mime artists. The characters were so vivid and amusing, they could easily have their own stand-up comedy show. The plot weaved a riotous journey with more unexpected turns than a meandering river. Every chapter was an explosion of humor, suspense, and sheer entertainment. To put it simply, if you're looking for a read that's as refreshingly funny as it is intriguing, this book is your ticket to a fun-filled escapade. So, sit back, relax, and let the laughter commence! Rating: 5/5 stars. It's a chuckle fest from start to finish!
Sci-Fi novels about apocalyptical theme or A.I stuffs aren't that much of my cup of tea but I read some if the whole story caught my attention and this novel is one of them. I won't comment any further since for me, this is great. Keep writing! ^_^
Revelar spoiler four chapters, four chapters, why only four chapters???? Fay you can't do this to me man! How can you write something this good and ask me to review at only four chapters?? There isn't enough to make a proper review on but this book, im def sticking around, Fay don't ever drop this book ;-;
Great story Mc starts with a loss of memories, it has a lot of potential, the novel is still early and it will grow with more chapters added. If you like this kind of theme give it a try, I would like more pictured scenes thats my only downside, other than that its good.
Here's a critical review for this book. Please do not read if you're not prepared to face criticism (nah, just kidding [img=recommend]) The writing style was definitely constant and engaging, however, there are times when the scenes felt rushed or lacks details. I pointed some out through comments, but I'm not really that good when it comes to grammar (I rely mostly on grammar checkers, but still have a lot of slip-ups), so pardon me if you find it hard to understand sometimes. The worldbuilding is good, but I still find it hard to understand one scene where the the doctor asked for them to "save humanity". I mean, they just got suddenly attacked by a robot, and then that line came. It was a surprise, literally. The emotional ups and downs were a big plus. And the description of their appearances were great. Other than that, I guess I'm cool. Again, it's a wonderful work full of promise! Keep it up, author!
Revelar spoiler Honestly one of the most unique stories I have read in a while. I love how smooth and interactive the characters are. Very fun and easy to read, I enjoyed it a lot.
Great novel! An MC that starts with amnesia + an AI system, as a Sci-Fi fan, Aaron has the makings of an exciting adventure! Quality writing, which is relatively rare nowadays... Check it out for a fun thrilling read~
It's too early to rate properly, but the four chapters that have been released have blown my mind. The synergy between events and the careful yet smooth choice of words are both easy to understand and fun to read. Aaron seems like an interesting protagonist, and the premise of the story is unique. As I said, it's too early, so it isn't easy to judge other characters. However, even with the minuscule number of chapters, this novel has caught my fantasy. Keep up the good work, author!
Its a 5 star for, due to the amount of chaos going on, I'm quite the fan of Chaos, its very exciting, the only part i hold dislike in this novel, is the fact that the dad died, I know its for the Plot but like.... COME ON MAN! I already started to like him, But thanks for the good read Author San!
The writing quality is good. Just have minimal typographical and grammatical errors and it'll be perfect. I immediately fell in love with the character, especially Aria. The plot is really interesting!
The plot of the story is quite interesting, a little chaotic, but it is interesting what will happen next.I hope the chapters will not keep you waiting :)
The story is good, in general terms, I liked it. I will wait for new chapters from the author and further development of the plot. Thanks for the chapters, champ.
Can I say "wow" out loud, this is a truly well written book that depicts so much emotion within the walls of its characters, this book literally jumps to life. Love the story telling and the theme, an inspirational work of art for sure that will keep you glued to the screen!