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Let me ask, honorable writer, is this Netorase (written in the description), just with the so-called mc bodies? If so I can try to read it, if not I'll say goodbye. ps: I'll delete this review if I don't get a answer.
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Just for ntr😨😰😥😰😢😨😥😨😥😢😰😥😨😢😰😥😨😮😥😨. . . . . .. . . .. . .. . . . .. . .. . . .. . . . . . . . .. . .. . . . . .. . . .. .. . .. . . .. . . .. . ..... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . .
Ntr 🤮🤮🤮 [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
incredible story so far, full of depravity and weird fetishes like the NTR, which I hate with all my soul, but curiously here I loved how it is handled, since despite the fact that it "shares" its girls, it does so in a way so well written that it doesn't disgust me! I am amazed by this author, my congratulations to the chef (For those who, like me, dislike NTR to death, and back down when they see my review, please don't, give them the opportunity to read it, although they "share" them at the same time, they don't, You have to read it to understand it, I assure you that you will not regret it.)
Don't know if it's the same book most Likley but You Literally Just Copied and Pasted Someone's Intro I'm assuming your just steeling the actual owners book? feel free to correct me if I'm wrong maybe you decided to make a fanfic about his fanfic who knows feel free to let me know though as stealing someone's work isn't cool
Yo, i just see you write Dxd fic Here is my advice never write Dxd story by using Dxd anime as reference, Because unlike in light novel, dxd version anime ruin a lot of characters, especially Issei's characters hard to the point that reduce him into fanservice machine.
No drop please![img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
Let me ask, honorable writer, is this Netorase (written in the description), just with the so-called mc bodies? If so I can try to read it, if not I'll say goodbye. ps: I'll delete this review if I don't get a answer.
Revelar spoiler Just for ntr😨😰😥😰😢😨😥😨😥😢😰😥😨😢😰😥😨😮😥😨. . . . . .. . . .. . .. . . . .. . .. . . .. . . . . . . . .. . .. . . . . .. . . .. .. . .. . . .. . . .. . ..... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . .
Ntr 🤮🤮🤮 [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
incredible story so far, full of depravity and weird fetishes like the NTR, which I hate with all my soul, but curiously here I loved how it is handled, since despite the fact that it "shares" its girls, it does so in a way so well written that it doesn't disgust me! I am amazed by this author, my congratulations to the chef (For those who, like me, dislike NTR to death, and back down when they see my review, please don't, give them the opportunity to read it, although they "share" them at the same time, they don't, You have to read it to understand it, I assure you that you will not regret it.)
Don't know if it's the same book most Likley but You Literally Just Copied and Pasted Someone's Intro I'm assuming your just steeling the actual owners book? feel free to correct me if I'm wrong maybe you decided to make a fanfic about his fanfic who knows feel free to let me know though as stealing someone's work isn't cool
Yo, i just see you write Dxd fic Here is my advice never write Dxd story by using Dxd anime as reference, Because unlike in light novel, dxd version anime ruin a lot of characters, especially Issei's characters hard to the point that reduce him into fanservice machine.
No drop please![img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
trash ntr novel ..... hhhh