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Me encanta esta historia el unico problema son los capitulos un poco cortos y la distancia entre actualisaciones pero me encanta esta historia.
the story was great until harry went to Hogwarts then it goes downhill very fast
First, I must congratulate the author, despite some points that could be improved, It is a well thought out story, in addition to having a certain logic, the world of DxD and Harry Potter as integral worlds Yes, Harry Potter's spells may seem weak, but studying them only adds new ideas for the protagonist with his own demonic magic besides remember, even super powerful attacks started based on ordinary attacks, Madara and his sea of flames is just a fireball super powered by chakra. Don't pay so much attention to the other negative reviews, give the story a chance
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A well written story that keeps my interest throughout and made me smile often.
perfect sink of both worlds and it feels wonderful to read the author had done a fabulous job keep it up man please do update more [img=update]
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It would be a great story it just that i become frustrated reading the ff and its on me its just that as i watched and read both dxd and hp ff reacently it mix me up that i think mc should do this instead of what was going the story so for now i back off from reading this one and be back once i forget some of ff with some other genra otherwise keep up with the story . . . .p.S. i’ll be back
It's a pretty nice read, much better than it's current rating. I usually give a try to any novel with decent grammar(this one qualifies). As with any fan-fic, you always have to close one eye on some details - author's touch, but up to this point(ch ~90) it's rather enjoyable for me. Keep up the good work author!
The chapters are short, which wouldn’t be a problem, but they are released inconsistently, sometimes you’ll get one 2 days in a row, other times you’ll see nothing for days. The story has lots of potential, but isn’t using it to its fullest. Lots of chapters for the first and second year seem to mostly just to show time passing until something happens. The problem also occurs during the summer chapters where barely anything happens. It doesn’t show his progress with magic, but says he made a lot of it. I at least hope they do something interesting during year 3 like taking the dementors, something that makes it less like the books. Also, he should get more contracts with wizards, pureblood, muggleborn, even teachers. More needs to be done to show that the worlds are connected rather than him just being a ‘regular wizard’ during his time at hogwarts. Also needs more interaction with devils, either from the Gremorys or from other houses. They are definitely going to be important later, but there’s been very little interaction with any of them so far. Even less with other devil heiresses Rias knows since he’s only talked to any of them once. Lastly he isn’t using his abilities to his fullest. His sacred gear allows him to learn whatever he wants to from his magus, but also allows him to mass produce things with their help. Despite making them and having them for months, they haven’t done much to have been a good idea to have. He can also gets stronger by adding magical creatures and plants to it, but he has yet to go looking for any of them, despite definitely having the capability to do so. As a character, while he’s well built, you’ve made Harry far too passive when it comes to doing things. He’s wasting his potential, and when he does anything to get stronger its barely or never shown. He also needs to interact with other characters more, since it feels like he doesn’t talk to them unless they start the conversation. The story is great, but that doesn’t mean it shouldn’t get better where it can.
starred out really well, but then the consistency issues started to happen, because the author needed harry to experience his hogwarts struggles for some reason. at first wizards are described as a failed experiment by the devils with only the most powerfull reaching high class. then the founders were ultimate class(very few devils even manage that). once harry arrives in diagon alley he says the average wizard is mid class and that there are quite a few high class around? i'm sorry but the author doesn't seem to understand the difference between those classifications,i would put dumbledore on the peak of low class maybe, sirius bella etc high low class, average adult wizards mid low class, owl level students beginner low class. there is a skill difference between dumbledore and lets say sirius but the power difference is there but its actually not that significant. dumbledores magic is not more potent than other wizards he just has a little more or can channel more and the rest is skill talent and experience.
The story was quite interesting, especially in the beginning, but after he started attending Hogwarts it kinda flopped. It quickly turned into the usual Hermione jerk, where she is suddenly god's gift to mankind, and the smartest witch of the generation as a 12yo... A lot of plotholes are made, and Harry start sharing secrets out of nowhere. I feel like the author fell into the usual cliches of believing in the superiority of muggles and muggleborns, and how it's unfair the muggleborns can't use magic at home. You don't allow kids to use guns at home, I don't know why some people think that giving them access to wands without supervision would be a good idea smh.
It’s an ok story nothing wrong in the grammar or formatting but man it feels like I’m reading a clifnote version of the Harry Potter movies like the story is just dragging on with basically a one to one retelling of the Harry Potter story but with extra added lines every now and then to remind you it’s supposed to be a DXD crossover
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Really, I can’t read this story. First 20 chapters were good, but then… The story became not interesting, half of wrote chapters was about what? About school that doesn’t need for demon. I can’t understand that part, when some people have a good concept and have a good start, but then destroy everything. So, thanks, but no.
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This is my first time reading a Harry Potter FF. And it has been a very good experience so far. A 5 stars from me. Would recommend reading the fic.
The writing quality falls short of expectations. The presence of spelling mistakes, confusing phrases, and poorly structured paragraphs make it challenging to comprehend the intended message. Understanding the content requires significant effort and reflection, which should ideally not be the case. Additionally, the portrayal of different characters lacks depth and distinction, as their personalities all feel nearly identical throughout the story
Well written Story, not the typical bad Crossover where he doesn't attend Hogwarts for some reason. He is based trying to keep a connection to his parents, but isn't the standard goody two shoes Harry easily manipulated.
Amazing, keep up the good work, because I need more. Mooooooooooore. Mooooooooooore. Moooooooooore. Moooooooore. MMMOooooooooooore. Yes please post more.
Personally the Story is interesting, Sadly it falls into the usual Crossover problem.There's no reason at all for Harry to attend Hogwarts, he is a Scion of the Gremory Family. They can literally hire the best Wizarding Tutors for Harry and not Subpar teaching. Problem Number 2, Harry instantly became friends with Hermione and already started revealing secrets to people with no mental defenses.It's an Ok Fic, but it's quite brain dead plot wise lol.
Interesting conceopt which worked well for crossedge in a gamerstory.Writing quality is good and the updateschedule is constannt and daily even if the chapters are a bit on the short medium side.world background is a bit wonky which affects the story development sadly.MC seems pretty underpowered and Wizarding world is too strong in a relation. Normal people are around midclass,, teachers highclass and voldemort ultimate devil class which is overbuffed power and energywise from the scaling.also Harry seems underpowered from his character and changed background .8 pawns reincarnation with a longinus(which can boost power and demonic power growth from the storyplot), imaginebased magic with highly motivated and regularly training harry after a few years is lower middleclass and seems like a mob in .wizardig world.a relation would be like taking someone from like karate kid(low class power setting) and it shares a world with dragon ball nd he gets changed into a sayan and send to train with beerus and after a few years he is challenged in the normal low class world ... thats kinda...also he somehow still needa glasses. the horcrux is probably cleared in the beginning(devils should sense a soulshard too if it was still there) and he still neeeds glasses after reincarnation which heals even misssing organs... and even then there are phoenix tears and more....yeah some devils have glasses but there it seems more for fashion so well...
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Me encanta esta historia el unico problema son los capitulos un poco cortos y la distancia entre actualisaciones pero me encanta esta historia.
the story was great until harry went to Hogwarts then it goes downhill very fast
First, I must congratulate the author, despite some points that could be improved, It is a well thought out story, in addition to having a certain logic, the world of DxD and Harry Potter as integral worlds Yes, Harry Potter's spells may seem weak, but studying them only adds new ideas for the protagonist with his own demonic magic besides remember, even super powerful attacks started based on ordinary attacks, Madara and his sea of flames is just a fireball super powered by chakra. Don't pay so much attention to the other negative reviews, give the story a chance
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A well written story that keeps my interest throughout and made me smile often.
perfect sink of both worlds and it feels wonderful to read the author had done a fabulous job keep it up man please do update more [img=update]
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It would be a great story it just that i become frustrated reading the ff and its on me its just that as i watched and read both dxd and hp ff reacently it mix me up that i think mc should do this instead of what was going the story so for now i back off from reading this one and be back once i forget some of ff with some other genra otherwise keep up with the story . . . .p.S. i’ll be back
It's a pretty nice read, much better than it's current rating. I usually give a try to any novel with decent grammar(this one qualifies). As with any fan-fic, you always have to close one eye on some details - author's touch, but up to this point(ch ~90) it's rather enjoyable for me. Keep up the good work author!
The chapters are short, which wouldn’t be a problem, but they are released inconsistently, sometimes you’ll get one 2 days in a row, other times you’ll see nothing for days. The story has lots of potential, but isn’t using it to its fullest. Lots of chapters for the first and second year seem to mostly just to show time passing until something happens. The problem also occurs during the summer chapters where barely anything happens. It doesn’t show his progress with magic, but says he made a lot of it. I at least hope they do something interesting during year 3 like taking the dementors, something that makes it less like the books. Also, he should get more contracts with wizards, pureblood, muggleborn, even teachers. More needs to be done to show that the worlds are connected rather than him just being a ‘regular wizard’ during his time at hogwarts. Also needs more interaction with devils, either from the Gremorys or from other houses. They are definitely going to be important later, but there’s been very little interaction with any of them so far. Even less with other devil heiresses Rias knows since he’s only talked to any of them once. Lastly he isn’t using his abilities to his fullest. His sacred gear allows him to learn whatever he wants to from his magus, but also allows him to mass produce things with their help. Despite making them and having them for months, they haven’t done much to have been a good idea to have. He can also gets stronger by adding magical creatures and plants to it, but he has yet to go looking for any of them, despite definitely having the capability to do so. As a character, while he’s well built, you’ve made Harry far too passive when it comes to doing things. He’s wasting his potential, and when he does anything to get stronger its barely or never shown. He also needs to interact with other characters more, since it feels like he doesn’t talk to them unless they start the conversation. The story is great, but that doesn’t mean it shouldn’t get better where it can.
starred out really well, but then the consistency issues started to happen, because the author needed harry to experience his hogwarts struggles for some reason. at first wizards are described as a failed experiment by the devils with only the most powerfull reaching high class. then the founders were ultimate class(very few devils even manage that). once harry arrives in diagon alley he says the average wizard is mid class and that there are quite a few high class around? i'm sorry but the author doesn't seem to understand the difference between those classifications,i would put dumbledore on the peak of low class maybe, sirius bella etc high low class, average adult wizards mid low class, owl level students beginner low class. there is a skill difference between dumbledore and lets say sirius but the power difference is there but its actually not that significant. dumbledores magic is not more potent than other wizards he just has a little more or can channel more and the rest is skill talent and experience.
The story was quite interesting, especially in the beginning, but after he started attending Hogwarts it kinda flopped. It quickly turned into the usual Hermione jerk, where she is suddenly god's gift to mankind, and the smartest witch of the generation as a 12yo... A lot of plotholes are made, and Harry start sharing secrets out of nowhere. I feel like the author fell into the usual cliches of believing in the superiority of muggles and muggleborns, and how it's unfair the muggleborns can't use magic at home. You don't allow kids to use guns at home, I don't know why some people think that giving them access to wands without supervision would be a good idea smh.
It’s an ok story nothing wrong in the grammar or formatting but man it feels like I’m reading a clifnote version of the Harry Potter movies like the story is just dragging on with basically a one to one retelling of the Harry Potter story but with extra added lines every now and then to remind you it’s supposed to be a DXD crossover
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Really, I can’t read this story. First 20 chapters were good, but then… The story became not interesting, half of wrote chapters was about what? About school that doesn’t need for demon. I can’t understand that part, when some people have a good concept and have a good start, but then destroy everything. So, thanks, but no.
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This is my first time reading a Harry Potter FF. And it has been a very good experience so far. A 5 stars from me. Would recommend reading the fic.
The writing quality falls short of expectations. The presence of spelling mistakes, confusing phrases, and poorly structured paragraphs make it challenging to comprehend the intended message. Understanding the content requires significant effort and reflection, which should ideally not be the case. Additionally, the portrayal of different characters lacks depth and distinction, as their personalities all feel nearly identical throughout the story
Well written Story, not the typical bad Crossover where he doesn't attend Hogwarts for some reason. He is based trying to keep a connection to his parents, but isn't the standard goody two shoes Harry easily manipulated.
Amazing, keep up the good work, because I need more. Mooooooooooore. Mooooooooooore. Moooooooooore. Moooooooore. MMMOooooooooooore. Yes please post more.
Personally the Story is interesting, Sadly it falls into the usual Crossover problem.There's no reason at all for Harry to attend Hogwarts, he is a Scion of the Gremory Family. They can literally hire the best Wizarding Tutors for Harry and not Subpar teaching. Problem Number 2, Harry instantly became friends with Hermione and already started revealing secrets to people with no mental defenses.It's an Ok Fic, but it's quite brain dead plot wise lol.
Interesting conceopt which worked well for crossedge in a gamerstory.Writing quality is good and the updateschedule is constannt and daily even if the chapters are a bit on the short medium side.world background is a bit wonky which affects the story development sadly.MC seems pretty underpowered and Wizarding world is too strong in a relation. Normal people are around midclass,, teachers highclass and voldemort ultimate devil class which is overbuffed power and energywise from the scaling.also Harry seems underpowered from his character and changed background .8 pawns reincarnation with a longinus(which can boost power and demonic power growth from the storyplot), imaginebased magic with highly motivated and regularly training harry after a few years is lower middleclass and seems like a mob in .wizardig world.a relation would be like taking someone from like karate kid(low class power setting) and it shares a world with dragon ball nd he gets changed into a sayan and send to train with beerus and after a few years he is challenged in the normal low class world ... thats kinda...also he somehow still needa glasses. the horcrux is probably cleared in the beginning(devils should sense a soulshard too if it was still there) and he still neeeds glasses after reincarnation which heals even misssing organs... and even then there are phoenix tears and more....yeah some devils have glasses but there it seems more for fashion so well...
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