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While I loved the concept and butterflies here ,it's totally full of plot holes , unnecessary near death experience and forced romance and one dimensional side characters. Maybe I had higher expectations that's why it was this bad for me still it is what it is.
its's a good story with a fresh perspective unlike what I have read and i would love to see how the story goes
The story premise is good if not overused. But is freshened up with an extremely interesting power. Writing lets down the story as a whole. Grammar is off and it takes reading somethings twice just to understand what was written. The dialogue as well reads like an old ps2 rpg game. It's a bit disjointed and too much like how a shounen protagonist would speak to be realistic. Overall an okay read.
This definitely has potential the premise is great and another thing is that it has no errors. Although it could use some work for pacing and development some character interactions seem a bit forced and fake. I know how much work people like authors put into this kinda thing, I definitely couldn’t put in the effort.
The story has been intriguing and interesting so far, and with the butterfly concept in an apocalyptic setting, it’s something I’m really looking forward to. That said, I can’t help but feel like the progression between the MC and Rose went from an inch to a mile. They didn’t know each other whatsoever before this and they did fight together but I feel it’s unrealistic for her to suddenly want to go through thick and thin with him on account of that. And him going into the dungeon and vanishing for weeks. Overall, besides that this is an good novel and I hope to see more of it.
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Thank you for the chapter I hope you post tomorrow to. the fight part was really good i hope this becomes a big novel with hundreds of chapter.
more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please
Absolutely loved the butterfly theme in an apocalypse setting ❤️❤️ Rooting for your success!! and praying for more chapters to come!! God bless author 🙏😊
It kind of reminds me of blood warlock, yet it's different, so that's pretty good. The two MC's doesn't look much alike, and it's pretty easy to see that, which make the novel original. So please continue author, I wanna see what will come up next!
I like it anyway we are new author so I'll support you ahhahaha ................................................ ................................................. ..............................................
Coming into this, I really thought it was like every other apocalypse novels, and I was determined to leave with a bad review. But even though there were only four chapters for now, I think I fell in love with the story already. Just the power in itself is unique in its own way and I can't wait to see what you will do with it once the MC will be stronger. PLEASE MORE CHAPTERS!!!
I've Saw your post on the webnovel forum and decided to try your novel. I was so surprised by the writing quality and the unexpected power of the mc that it made me feel like reading more! I can't wait to see the next chapters!!
I love the way u write, hehe, and of course, the protagonist. MUAH, chef kiss, i just love the way u make the mc. He was a fun one and of course we shouldn't forget about the butterfly ♥︎. Overall, u make a great story, and it has a lot of potential. I hope u take care of yourself, I also hope u won't drop the story...since it is a fun one. For the other, i recommended this story if u like butterfly♥︎ (seriously though, the story is good. Give it a try!)
While I loved the concept and butterflies here ,it's totally full of plot holes , unnecessary near death experience and forced romance and one dimensional side characters. Maybe I had higher expectations that's why it was this bad for me still it is what it is.
its's a good story with a fresh perspective unlike what I have read and i would love to see how the story goes
The story premise is good if not overused. But is freshened up with an extremely interesting power. Writing lets down the story as a whole. Grammar is off and it takes reading somethings twice just to understand what was written. The dialogue as well reads like an old ps2 rpg game. It's a bit disjointed and too much like how a shounen protagonist would speak to be realistic. Overall an okay read.
This definitely has potential the premise is great and another thing is that it has no errors. Although it could use some work for pacing and development some character interactions seem a bit forced and fake. I know how much work people like authors put into this kinda thing, I definitely couldn’t put in the effort.
The story has been intriguing and interesting so far, and with the butterfly concept in an apocalyptic setting, it’s something I’m really looking forward to. That said, I can’t help but feel like the progression between the MC and Rose went from an inch to a mile. They didn’t know each other whatsoever before this and they did fight together but I feel it’s unrealistic for her to suddenly want to go through thick and thin with him on account of that. And him going into the dungeon and vanishing for weeks. Overall, besides that this is an good novel and I hope to see more of it.
Revelar spoiler Thank you for the chapter I hope you post tomorrow to. the fight part was really good i hope this becomes a big novel with hundreds of chapter.
more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please
Absolutely loved the butterfly theme in an apocalypse setting ❤️❤️ Rooting for your success!! and praying for more chapters to come!! God bless author 🙏😊
It kind of reminds me of blood warlock, yet it's different, so that's pretty good. The two MC's doesn't look much alike, and it's pretty easy to see that, which make the novel original. So please continue author, I wanna see what will come up next!
I like it anyway we are new author so I'll support you ahhahaha ................................................ ................................................. ..............................................
Coming into this, I really thought it was like every other apocalypse novels, and I was determined to leave with a bad review. But even though there were only four chapters for now, I think I fell in love with the story already. Just the power in itself is unique in its own way and I can't wait to see what you will do with it once the MC will be stronger. PLEASE MORE CHAPTERS!!!
I've Saw your post on the webnovel forum and decided to try your novel. I was so surprised by the writing quality and the unexpected power of the mc that it made me feel like reading more! I can't wait to see the next chapters!!
I love the way u write, hehe, and of course, the protagonist. MUAH, chef kiss, i just love the way u make the mc. He was a fun one and of course we shouldn't forget about the butterfly ♥︎. Overall, u make a great story, and it has a lot of potential. I hope u take care of yourself, I also hope u won't drop the story...since it is a fun one. For the other, i recommended this story if u like butterfly♥︎ (seriously though, the story is good. Give it a try!)