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I don't want to be rude but, I cant help but say the grammar isn't of the best quality, but all in all, the story has a decent flow, and we can see how each character voices their thoughts and opinions quite nicely, thank you Author San!
Overall a nice story In my opinion but I think you are lacking in writing in grammar and especially your updates are quite unstable I think you should increase the rate of production or else the reader would not read it.
I might rate myself 2 Star cause I know that my grass and writing absolute terrible and especially the stability of updates which would be one star cause I write as a hobbies so reader pls bear my terrible grammar ok.
First time seeing such a unique approach in writing including the plot. Its certainly interesting and I hope your writing style would change a bit because it feels like a short story. Like past passive and active for example. GG
Everything is a 5 out of 5. Just amazing story line that Carries everything. This is a great parody book. Love it and hope you pick it back up in the future. I’m giving you 5 stars for update stability as you were updating fine before you began a break
I don't want to be rude but, I cant help but say the grammar isn't of the best quality, but all in all, the story has a decent flow, and we can see how each character voices their thoughts and opinions quite nicely, thank you Author San!
Overall a nice story In my opinion but I think you are lacking in writing in grammar and especially your updates are quite unstable I think you should increase the rate of production or else the reader would not read it.
I might rate myself 2 Star cause I know that my grass and writing absolute terrible and especially the stability of updates which would be one star cause I write as a hobbies so reader pls bear my terrible grammar ok.
First time seeing such a unique approach in writing including the plot. Its certainly interesting and I hope your writing style would change a bit because it feels like a short story. Like past passive and active for example. GG
Everything is a 5 out of 5. Just amazing story line that Carries everything. This is a great parody book. Love it and hope you pick it back up in the future. I’m giving you 5 stars for update stability as you were updating fine before you began a break