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Starts off good but after like 100 chapters, the translation turns extremely trash! Unreadable! Straight up machine translation!
I don't know why this story has such bad reviews if it's really good 10 out of 10 I love thanks for the translation[img=recommend] The truth the only bad thing I find in history is the part of the valley of god but I think that was written before kuma's past came out in the maga the rest is fine a very addictive story
Well, another slave to the system who moves to please it, only to be given powers that break the logic of the world. The guys he summons are slaves with no conscience, so don't expect worthwhile interactions.
oh it's one of the better ff that I had read................................................................................................................................................
i like this... but bit fast and need more but over all good spin in one piece ... ... filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler
i already read this one MTL version and it's fun to read, and it become more interesting when MC summon Makima and tbh i keep read it just because i want to see makima's appearance and what Will she doing in that world.. but after the story enter luffy's era, her appearance become less and less so i stopped reading it..
the story is good, but I would like the original title of the translation to read the original version of the story. because according to my friend there are 475 chapters in English available
a super dominated guy without charisma or attitude or objective ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ... ..... .... .... .... .
this is one of the best one piece fanfic, I really applaud the author for describing the background story very well, even though this is a translation
First review after reading the recent chapter. It has been interesting so far and I do love some planner type MCs on how to get more gains in certain situations. I can't wait to see what the author has plans for after the God Valley incident
You know you should change the tiltle author, this book is one of the interesting and greatest fanfics but title is misleading so it can get more reach
Starts off good but after like 100 chapters, the translation turns extremely trash! Unreadable! Straight up machine translation!
I don't know why this story has such bad reviews if it's really good 10 out of 10 I love thanks for the translation[img=recommend] The truth the only bad thing I find in history is the part of the valley of god but I think that was written before kuma's past came out in the maga the rest is fine a very addictive story
Well, another slave to the system who moves to please it, only to be given powers that break the logic of the world. The guys he summons are slaves with no conscience, so don't expect worthwhile interactions.
oh it's one of the better ff that I had read................................................................................................................................................
i like this... but bit fast and need more but over all good spin in one piece ... ... filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler
i already read this one MTL version and it's fun to read, and it become more interesting when MC summon Makima and tbh i keep read it just because i want to see makima's appearance and what Will she doing in that world.. but after the story enter luffy's era, her appearance become less and less so i stopped reading it..
the story is good, but I would like the original title of the translation to read the original version of the story. because according to my friend there are 475 chapters in English available
a super dominated guy without charisma or attitude or objective ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ... ..... .... .... .... .
this is one of the best one piece fanfic, I really applaud the author for describing the background story very well, even though this is a translation
First review after reading the recent chapter. It has been interesting so far and I do love some planner type MCs on how to get more gains in certain situations. I can't wait to see what the author has plans for after the God Valley incident
You know you should change the tiltle author, this book is one of the interesting and greatest fanfics but title is misleading so it can get more reach