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Take this as a question and answer section. About 100 chaps in, I am sure where the story is headed and I'll answer some possible questions. - Will there be a Harem? Of course. -How big is the Harem? Very big but Mc's inner circle will only have some women. - Will there be Yuri?No, you may rest assured.- Will Mc get Ntred? No, Mc only steal, no get stolen. - Will it have a consistent Fantasy Power system? Absolutely, I love that thing! - Will the clone touch Mc Women? Absolutely No. not even a harmless handshake! You can ask more questions below
Good story. World building is awesome and the mystery hooks you in. Overall a gem and shouldn't be missed. I hope the author, continues with this story. One small improvement author can make is to improve the phrasing a bit more and keep it simpler.
It was confusing at the start but the more you read the more you understand. The best way i can describe this story is that, the story feels the usual eastern trope, but at the same time it's really different. I also heavy fw the smut, would've been better if there was some light yuri in there when they had orgies, but i understand a lot of people hate it too. But overall this story actually got great plot(tho a little confusing at times) and great smut.
The story is too complicated. I skimmed through a few chapters. Booom....... I lost track of what is happening with the novel.( Spoiler Mc goes back in time, a lot of different weird abilities , his daughter from the future goes back in time.....) What a mess. This is not my type of novel
Well, the world building and concept was awesome but the author is a newbie. The sentence making seems to be forced not fluid. Character development, side character development is the worst i have ever seen. He is comparing the MC's 'Long' with a dragon....but chapter size is shorter than my PP. There are some illogical concept that author believes in,,,,such as MC can adjust his sudden increase in strength by practicing with needle and thread...
The most complicated story I've ever read!!! But great read if you are bored and want something to occupy your mind! FYI: author great work however please try to make it simpler in the future!
Too much confusing to read. Least enjoyable. Besides MC isn’t a genius at all. He is a sore loser. Anybody can play with his mind.
Maaaan, I was really starting to like this story but there are are some major flaws that is being an obstacle to enjoy and cherish this story. First of all, way too verbose and too many words used to describe/explain things, it sometimes makes the explanation messy and confusing at times. And I get lost in it and have to read multiple times in order to figure some things out but even then it is not clear. Which leads to, info dump after info dump! Like waaaaay tooo much information and after reading 110 chapters all I can say most of it is irrelevant and doesn’t really add to the story but more like placeholders and blank shots. I felt like the author tried way too hard to make it complex and unique in order to give the story depth but it became way too much of mess and unnecessary information made the story a pain the butt to read. Does it have potential? Sure, but potential will remain potential if the author can’t convert it to kinetic energy. But the way author tries to convert Potential Energy to Kinetic Energy is unnecessarily complex and bulky making the story hard to enjoy.
A book that turns emotions into roller coasters. It tells another story before the main story begins. The parts that are very complicated lose their old meaning with a very simple event. Still, it's a quality book, the characters are very good, I'm waiting for the time when MC will deliver judgment.
Really awesome novel but just the world is not yet stable yet the world is somewhat confusing..but author I liked your novel very much keep it updated
this story is for degenerates everything is good, maybe just little bit complicated, so many timelines and time travel but overall worth reading
at first volume its was gold, but after that it plummet down 👇 everything goes disarray after he return back to past ...1. he got two personalities2. ace the mc's past becomes conqueror ... and from how it explain in novel it was simply a psychopath 3. he forcefully unlock his gift to have the gift of her aunt..(his aunt gift is clone... a useless one at that... a clone that if the clone die he will die too.. basically a weakness)idiotic right?and why does he want the clone so much that he even forcefully open his gift just to have that fck*ng clone??? and my prediction is to be cuck by his own clone...haysss
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An amazing novel with a unique twist but the only problem I have is that the world building hasn’t been established yet
Keep up the good work author .....................................................................................................................................
love your idear keep up and love the girls so keep up kerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrp uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp
i like the first few chapter simple, not complicated, nothing mysterious but after the mc went back time/reborn, i had hard time understanding the way author deliver his story (english is not my native language) it became confusing and mysterious to me. but this will not hinder me reading this novel, i might understand what is happening in the upcoming chapters. just keep pumping chapters don't drop.
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Author, oh dear author, I appreciate your work and I have only one suggestion for you. Please at least capitalize the first letter of each paragraph to make it more pleasant for the eye. Thank you.
So far reading to chapter 19 you’ve set a good pace for the development of the story. As far as the world goes from the transition between it’s pretty good, so far it’s focused on the palace which is where he would get all his powers before going to explore the world he’s in I assume. [To explain the world he’s in maybe have it explained by the people he’s going to go against in the palace]~Just a suggestion. Overall as a system story you’w made it in a unique and interesting way! Keep up the good work!!!🫡✊
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Interesting novel, even though I came for the "plot" I am surprised as it has suddenly become a mystery and now I am waiting to see how it all unfolds.
Take this as a question and answer section. About 100 chaps in, I am sure where the story is headed and I'll answer some possible questions. - Will there be a Harem? Of course. -How big is the Harem? Very big but Mc's inner circle will only have some women. - Will there be Yuri?No, you may rest assured.- Will Mc get Ntred? No, Mc only steal, no get stolen. - Will it have a consistent Fantasy Power system? Absolutely, I love that thing! - Will the clone touch Mc Women? Absolutely No. not even a harmless handshake! You can ask more questions below
Good story. World building is awesome and the mystery hooks you in. Overall a gem and shouldn't be missed. I hope the author, continues with this story. One small improvement author can make is to improve the phrasing a bit more and keep it simpler.
It was confusing at the start but the more you read the more you understand. The best way i can describe this story is that, the story feels the usual eastern trope, but at the same time it's really different. I also heavy fw the smut, would've been better if there was some light yuri in there when they had orgies, but i understand a lot of people hate it too. But overall this story actually got great plot(tho a little confusing at times) and great smut.
The story is too complicated. I skimmed through a few chapters. Booom....... I lost track of what is happening with the novel.( Spoiler Mc goes back in time, a lot of different weird abilities , his daughter from the future goes back in time.....) What a mess. This is not my type of novel
Well, the world building and concept was awesome but the author is a newbie. The sentence making seems to be forced not fluid. Character development, side character development is the worst i have ever seen. He is comparing the MC's 'Long' with a dragon....but chapter size is shorter than my PP. There are some illogical concept that author believes in,,,,such as MC can adjust his sudden increase in strength by practicing with needle and thread...
The most complicated story I've ever read!!! But great read if you are bored and want something to occupy your mind! FYI: author great work however please try to make it simpler in the future!
Too much confusing to read. Least enjoyable. Besides MC isn’t a genius at all. He is a sore loser. Anybody can play with his mind.
Maaaan, I was really starting to like this story but there are are some major flaws that is being an obstacle to enjoy and cherish this story. First of all, way too verbose and too many words used to describe/explain things, it sometimes makes the explanation messy and confusing at times. And I get lost in it and have to read multiple times in order to figure some things out but even then it is not clear. Which leads to, info dump after info dump! Like waaaaay tooo much information and after reading 110 chapters all I can say most of it is irrelevant and doesn’t really add to the story but more like placeholders and blank shots. I felt like the author tried way too hard to make it complex and unique in order to give the story depth but it became way too much of mess and unnecessary information made the story a pain the butt to read. Does it have potential? Sure, but potential will remain potential if the author can’t convert it to kinetic energy. But the way author tries to convert Potential Energy to Kinetic Energy is unnecessarily complex and bulky making the story hard to enjoy.
A book that turns emotions into roller coasters. It tells another story before the main story begins. The parts that are very complicated lose their old meaning with a very simple event. Still, it's a quality book, the characters are very good, I'm waiting for the time when MC will deliver judgment.
Really awesome novel but just the world is not yet stable yet the world is somewhat confusing..but author I liked your novel very much keep it updated
this story is for degenerates everything is good, maybe just little bit complicated, so many timelines and time travel but overall worth reading
at first volume its was gold, but after that it plummet down 👇 everything goes disarray after he return back to past ...1. he got two personalities2. ace the mc's past becomes conqueror ... and from how it explain in novel it was simply a psychopath 3. he forcefully unlock his gift to have the gift of her aunt..(his aunt gift is clone... a useless one at that... a clone that if the clone die he will die too.. basically a weakness)idiotic right?and why does he want the clone so much that he even forcefully open his gift just to have that fck*ng clone??? and my prediction is to be cuck by his own clone...haysss
Revelar spoiler An amazing novel with a unique twist but the only problem I have is that the world building hasn’t been established yet
Keep up the good work author .....................................................................................................................................
love your idear keep up and love the girls so keep up kerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrp uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp
i like the first few chapter simple, not complicated, nothing mysterious but after the mc went back time/reborn, i had hard time understanding the way author deliver his story (english is not my native language) it became confusing and mysterious to me. but this will not hinder me reading this novel, i might understand what is happening in the upcoming chapters. just keep pumping chapters don't drop.
good has threesome this novel?! -------------------‐------------------------------------‐-----------------------------------------------‐-------------------------------
Author, oh dear author, I appreciate your work and I have only one suggestion for you. Please at least capitalize the first letter of each paragraph to make it more pleasant for the eye. Thank you.
So far reading to chapter 19 you’ve set a good pace for the development of the story. As far as the world goes from the transition between it’s pretty good, so far it’s focused on the palace which is where he would get all his powers before going to explore the world he’s in I assume. [To explain the world he’s in maybe have it explained by the people he’s going to go against in the palace]~Just a suggestion. Overall as a system story you’w made it in a unique and interesting way! Keep up the good work!!!🫡✊
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Interesting novel, even though I came for the "plot" I am surprised as it has suddenly become a mystery and now I am waiting to see how it all unfolds.