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Wow, this story really died, it's time to say goodbye 😔.............................................................,.............................................................
I have read the Author's previous work and expected something similar or better but this is relatively mediocre in my opinion. MC becomes full simp despite saying he won't do all that then acts as if he is in some rom-com where when he 'catches a glimpse of Claire (Female Lead?)' he freezes, the world slows down and roses start blooming and rainbows... You get the point. I stopped reading after the chapters got too lovey-dovey and IQ-reducing decisions kept being made (MC knows showcasing or using his powers while witnesses watch is dangerous and could get him hunted but does it anyway).
Revelar spoiler Any chance to write this again .............................................................................................................................?
Well, overall, great book. Would have been cool if you can continue writing. What happened?
I like Chinese authors more, they immediately evoke memories of the former owner! Immediately , his stupidity goes too far , did the author want to write a serious work ? but he has very little experience for this, I only see a stupid gg at first I thought it was because of drugs that his body was like that and he was stupid , but no, he just did that stupid!
I cannot believe this was written by the same author who wrote Virgil. This story started out strong but the way MC went about claire and brody situation was cringy af. I mean as much as i love an anti hero, i wont have minded him helping out her in that situation but the way he went about it was full on emo teen drama cliche was cringy af. He could've solve the problem a thousand way but he choose the most silliest with the most drama. Also, his unwavering loyalty toward her (while claming otherwise like a macho alpha bro) for a friendship they have for a couple of days and his willingness to put himself in harm to satisfy her vanity was nauseating.
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La verdad al principio estaba emocionado por ver un fanfic de héroes y los primeros capítulos eran muy bueno a pesar del ritmo tan lento de la historia, pero los últimos capítulos han decaído mucho digo se supone que cada rato se hace enfasis en que el mc es listo y solo se preocupa por sus intereses pero en los últimos capítulos parece cada vez más idiota e indeciso para hacer las cosas como en el último que leí, porque ponerse a platicar si supuestamente estaba allí para matar algo que no toma ni siquiera 5 segundos, pareciera que haces todo para forzar que al final la historia siga el canon, lastima había empezado muy bien
Great story its just i dont understand his powers or maybe its because im to stupid still great read cant wait for more 👍🏾
love this so such but author why aren't you making any new chapter are you alright you said you contacted a malaria I'm worried please update your condition
Мне нравится многое в этом фанфике. Надеюсь главы будут выходить чаще и автор не бросит его. Т
WQ: 4 - Every now and then there are missing words or sentences that don't make sense but apart from that it's fine. SD: 4 - It's fine but I'm getting bored of random drama. CD: 3 - Main character is a Simp, what more do you need to hear. US: 4 - Its fine. WB: 4 - It's fine.
A well-balanced story with that is easy to read. I literally binged 20 chapters a day and it was very exciting. Hope you continue on giving us,greedy readers more chapters. Also MC's power and the concept behind it are actually well-thought.
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I like the story so far (read thru 4 chapters) I’ve never watched heroes but the story seems great so far, and seeing how the description talks about going into different worlds especially the movie interstellar definitely interests me. I hope you continue like you said!!
This is actually good. The only author who got heroes right was Goldfinger. I just hope this doesn't become a plot-hugging novel.
You already know I have to give that five-star rating because of heroes And how it is my favorite show. Can't wait to see what you do with this keep up the amazing work 👍
it so good the writing the character development not like those other protagonist that are way to dumb or way to delusional its very good can't wait to find out his powers
I have used my unfathomable Precognition abilities to peek into the future. This novel gains Sentience and only those who give 5 stars shall get a place in its new paradise.
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Wow, this story really died, it's time to say goodbye 😔.............................................................,.............................................................
I have read the Author's previous work and expected something similar or better but this is relatively mediocre in my opinion. MC becomes full simp despite saying he won't do all that then acts as if he is in some rom-com where when he 'catches a glimpse of Claire (Female Lead?)' he freezes, the world slows down and roses start blooming and rainbows... You get the point. I stopped reading after the chapters got too lovey-dovey and IQ-reducing decisions kept being made (MC knows showcasing or using his powers while witnesses watch is dangerous and could get him hunted but does it anyway).
Revelar spoiler Any chance to write this again .............................................................................................................................?
Well, overall, great book. Would have been cool if you can continue writing. What happened?
I like Chinese authors more, they immediately evoke memories of the former owner! Immediately , his stupidity goes too far , did the author want to write a serious work ? but he has very little experience for this, I only see a stupid gg at first I thought it was because of drugs that his body was like that and he was stupid , but no, he just did that stupid!
I cannot believe this was written by the same author who wrote Virgil. This story started out strong but the way MC went about claire and brody situation was cringy af. I mean as much as i love an anti hero, i wont have minded him helping out her in that situation but the way he went about it was full on emo teen drama cliche was cringy af. He could've solve the problem a thousand way but he choose the most silliest with the most drama. Also, his unwavering loyalty toward her (while claming otherwise like a macho alpha bro) for a friendship they have for a couple of days and his willingness to put himself in harm to satisfy her vanity was nauseating.
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La verdad al principio estaba emocionado por ver un fanfic de héroes y los primeros capítulos eran muy bueno a pesar del ritmo tan lento de la historia, pero los últimos capítulos han decaído mucho digo se supone que cada rato se hace enfasis en que el mc es listo y solo se preocupa por sus intereses pero en los últimos capítulos parece cada vez más idiota e indeciso para hacer las cosas como en el último que leí, porque ponerse a platicar si supuestamente estaba allí para matar algo que no toma ni siquiera 5 segundos, pareciera que haces todo para forzar que al final la historia siga el canon, lastima había empezado muy bien
Great story its just i dont understand his powers or maybe its because im to stupid still great read cant wait for more 👍🏾
love this so such but author why aren't you making any new chapter are you alright you said you contacted a malaria I'm worried please update your condition
Мне нравится многое в этом фанфике. Надеюсь главы будут выходить чаще и автор не бросит его. Т
WQ: 4 - Every now and then there are missing words or sentences that don't make sense but apart from that it's fine. SD: 4 - It's fine but I'm getting bored of random drama. CD: 3 - Main character is a Simp, what more do you need to hear. US: 4 - Its fine. WB: 4 - It's fine.
A well-balanced story with that is easy to read. I literally binged 20 chapters a day and it was very exciting. Hope you continue on giving us,greedy readers more chapters. Also MC's power and the concept behind it are actually well-thought.
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I like the story so far (read thru 4 chapters) I’ve never watched heroes but the story seems great so far, and seeing how the description talks about going into different worlds especially the movie interstellar definitely interests me. I hope you continue like you said!!
This is actually good. The only author who got heroes right was Goldfinger. I just hope this doesn't become a plot-hugging novel.
You already know I have to give that five-star rating because of heroes And how it is my favorite show. Can't wait to see what you do with this keep up the amazing work 👍
it so good the writing the character development not like those other protagonist that are way to dumb or way to delusional its very good can't wait to find out his powers
I have used my unfathomable Precognition abilities to peek into the future. This novel gains Sentience and only those who give 5 stars shall get a place in its new paradise.
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